- Post
- #1556146
- Topic
- Asokha Radical Redux Ideas thread
- Link
- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1556146/action/topic#1556146
- Time
Someone in Smudger’s thread spawned the idea of removing episode 1 almost entirely and starting with the Corellia investigation instead.
Sadly, I had no time to spare at the time, but now I have thrown together a quick mock-up of that idea.
The general structure is this:
-slightly altered crawl, that explains the state of the galaxy and why Ahsoka and Hera are on Corellia
-opening on Corellia, intercut with the introduction of Sabine
-Hera reports to the NR
-new scene, featuring Sabine observing Purrgil traveling past Lothal (new call to action)
-Jailbreak, introduction of Baylen and Shin
-Sabine contacts Ahsoka
-opening of the map
-Ahsoka and Sabine meet
Apart from the structural change, I only boosted the colors (a lot).
If anyone is interested in giving feedback, just notify me. The edit is about 40 minutes long.