Skybatman said:
any news ?
Hey! Not too much. I was sidetracked by some life events, my work situation got a bit crazy by the end of April. I did a much cleaner version of that ending I posted above. As well, I did more work on the start of the edit. But I got a bit stuck in the intro sequence.
I cut a really good first scene or so out of Andor’s jungle flashbacks, so good I really want to use it. But I got stuck because cutting all of those scenes together revealed an issue with the Maarva character that I outlined in my last post.
Basically she never really seems justified in taking Cassian from his home. Clem was right when he told her to leave him. Now one of our protagonist characters doing something morally ambiguous is fine. But the problem is, the show doesn’t do anything with it.
If the show addressed that in a later scene, of Maarva being confronted on some level about what she did, it would be easier. But the show never does that. Her only justification is she is afraid of the incoming Republic. So she actively knocks him out by force and takes him. But if she had time to walk and carry him back, why would he not have time to just run back himself?
If I had magic reshoot powers, I would make it where the Republic DOES show up and start blasting, and Andor gets knocked out in the battle, explosion or something, and THEN Maarva finds him and actually saves his life.
As it stands, compared to when you watch the show, when you watch those jungle scenes full on chronological back to back, it does not paint her in a good light, and the show never does anything to address that afterwards.
I would love to get back to this very soon. I will for now just skip that sequence until I can find a better solution, and move onto cutting the meat of the film.
Edit: Well this got me to pop the project back open. Those flashbacks to his childhood take up about 11 minutes. I think honestly, I am going to cut it as soon as the crash survivor stands up and shoots the tribal girl. I can cut to that point and remove some other filler, make that whole sequence about 3 minutes which is much more manageable for an intro.
Then later on, in some scene where Maarva and Cassian discuss his past on some level, I can cut in shots of her carrying him off through the jungle. So the implication being that there was some extended conflict in the jungle after the officer got up, and Cassian was injured, and Maarva found him and carried him off.
That gets rid of the problematic scene inside the ship. The biggest loss imo, is that it cuts Clem out of the sequence, and I like his character in that part. But removing it solves the issues with that sequence and improves the pacing of the intro by quite a lot.