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#1491871
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KENOBI: A STAR WARS STORY [The Radical "Help Me Obi-Wan Kenobi" Cut]
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Anjohan said:

Also, I might release the edit before the 4th. I got some more time on my hands than previously thought.

Jedit:

I’ll release the Stereo 10 GB mp4 first, followed by the 5.1 two or three days later. It’s some extra work to create the 5.1 due to the new audio alterations, and I will have to preview it on my home cinema system.

This is awesome, thanks for all the hard work!

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#1490880
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KENOBI: A STAR WARS STORY [The Radical "Help Me Obi-Wan Kenobi" Cut]
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Anjohan said:

Opening

So, NFBisms made one hell of a opening in the spirit of what I think most of us expected the tone of Kenobi to be, and people really wanted to see it in this edit when it dropped. Me and NFBisms talked about it (page 16 or something) and I really wanted to use it, but parts of it broke with the promised tone of the rest of my edit (mostly the complete lack of music and too rapid of a pace).

So, what I did was that I re-made the opening in the spirit of NFBisms’s opening, and completely stole his first 90 seconds (because it marvelously sets the tone) and some tidbits throughout. Then the soundtrack slowly gets introduced (only the real somber tones) as we build up to a kind of PTSD-climax.

https://streamable.com/fujjec

I felt really invested in this 5 minutes, well done! I agree with the above in that the flip shots feel a bit off though. Since Kenobi is doing the same things day after day, I think it should be fine using the original angles.

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#1490685
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KENOBI: A STAR WARS STORY [The Radical "Help Me Obi-Wan Kenobi" Cut]
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revel911 said:

Anjohan said:

^ That one cost money. Found one tho’ (thanks to you). This took me an agonizing 90 minutes. Here you go:

https://streamable.com/0zvxe2

-> Added some (fake) shadows as she walks
-> Added some (fake) light as she walks
-> and my favorite thing in life; rotoscoping (yeah, that was a joke)

My brain is too used to it now to evaluate the overall impression, but I’d say it works as long as I desaturate her a little bit more (she looks very red, but it’s mostly the compression - looks fine in HD) and you you don’t stare at it like it’s the center of attention (which we now do).

Come with ideas on how to possibly improve, if it does not work for any of you.

I like the idea a lot.

  • It’s pixelated … a lot around the edges
  • The lighting is a tad off. Should have harsher shadows and even though it is red, that green room lighting should be affecting it
  • I wonder if a small shadow on Obi would make her feel in the same space
  • When Obi reaches back to steal the key card, he would have punched her in the in the same physical space. What if she started from the left, and moved right afterwards?

I am being nitpicky (some of this could be as you said compression), but the idea helps sell the whole scene for me that he isn’t alone leading to the door opening scene.

I agree with this but the addition of her in the scene is a good one. Though it’s rough, I’m sure he can smooth it out. Like you said, perhaps she could be a little further to the left and scaled a little smaller as I think she may be a bit big.

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#1490683
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KENOBI: A STAR WARS STORY [The Radical "Help Me Obi-Wan Kenobi" Cut]
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Anjohan said:

Video Update - The Full Escape [Beta ? ]

https://streamable.com/afhtpd

-> (Re-)Added Intercom Dialogue with Haja, and some new dialogue to create some character growth and motivation.
-> Added shadows and enviorement interaction to and from door, in the escape part (at the end).
-> a lot more.

You did a superb job with this! Truly impressed! Adding Leia to the scenes and the transitions feel very natural. One point I’d like to say is that after he enters the structure from the water and disposes that first trooper. I feel like he needs to hide earlier from the two patrolling troopers. There’s a split second where the scene is empty. Maybe elongate the time before the troopers enter the scene.

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#1490493
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KENOBI: A STAR WARS STORY [The Radical "Help Me Obi-Wan Kenobi" Cut]
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Phase3 said:

NFBisms said:

This is something I put together in the other Kenobi redux thread, just in case it could be relevant to this project in some way:

NFBisms said:

I was one of those suckers who was actually really excited for Obi-Wan Kenobi (2022) because Deborah Chow and Kelley DIxon’s work on Better Call Saul and Breaking Bad fuckin’ rule. Needless to say, that was a bit misguided.

So I took a crack at editing the show to be closer in tone and style to what I expected out of BB-verse alumni.

I don’t think I’m going to do the whole show, but it was just a fun little experiment. The edit isn’t supposed to be like BB/BCS fwiw, just approaching the material with some of the storytelling philosophy I learned from them.

At the very least, Deborah Chow’s sensibilities as a director were still conducive to being arranged in this way so at least some of my excitement wasn’t unfounded

This is really great!
Anjohan: I hope that you use this in your edit! 😉

I second this, its really good.

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#1490129
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KENOBI: A STAR WARS STORY [The Radical "Help Me Obi-Wan Kenobi" Cut]
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Well said Sirius, I was thinking the same thing as I saw the scene.
I feel like, before Kenobi walks away from a defeated vader, we hear qui gon saying a few things like “he is the chosen one, he will bring balance.” I think it could be a huge deciding factor to spare anakin.

Aside from that. I think Reeva needs to be cut down from the show as much as possible. Such as the silly parkour scenes, the baby chase scene, and the “you’re a jedi, right? make me fly” scene in the first few episodes. The fact that he hides leia under the robe is also quite ridiculous.

Someone did a really good cut of the baby chase scene, where there was no chase at all. She asked the thug who he was and when he answered, as she was moving back the 2nd thug put the bag over her head. If you noticed, when they tied her up to the chair, she wasnt even tied to the chair itself, she could’ve just stood up and raised her arms to remove the ropes. I don’t know how this could be fixed in scene, unless you remove that scene entirely which would be better.

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#1488797
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KENOBI: A STAR WARS STORY [The Radical "Help Me Obi-Wan Kenobi" Cut]
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Anjohan said:

Dark Deeds & Piano Theme, with Sith Whispers:

https://streamable.com/5uz2sr

Might this be more preferable?

CMMAP said:
Although the piano theme does have a nice ring, i think the horror is missing with it. But ultimately it´s your edit.
Anakins dark deeds could work, though.

But isn’t Anakin’s actions horrifying enough, and the sadness in the music just a representation of Obi-Wan’s feelings in that moment? I always feel like Obi-Wan is heartbroken watching this, more heartbroken than scared.

I also think the Piano Theme would be a nice theme for the film, coming back at the end.

The piano theme with the whispers sets such a mood where it feels as though it’s gut wrenching. I loved it.