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spunkmeyer said:

Hi,

Link me up please, I’m looking forward to seeing this.

TIA

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AhsokaLove said:

Could I get a link please?

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DeonStar said:

May I have a link for this please.

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DeonStar said:

May I get a link to this please thanks

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Darth Raditz said:

Interesting that you’re adding Qui-Gon to the final Ben/Vader duel. Is he going to say something like “he is the Chosen One,” as a way of giving an in-universe reason of why doesn’t Ben just kill Obi-Wan?

So every clip of Qui-Gon audio I used was from the clone wars tv show and I thought about something revolving around Anakin being the chosen one to keep Vader alive, but decided against it. What I ended up doing was using the audio from the scene where Yoda is talking to Jinn on Dagobah as light particles and he says “follow the light, the light will be your guide.” In the context of my Kenobi edit, this is when Kenobi is buried and gets the flashes of Luke and Leia.

Sirius said:

Could you send me the link please? I would be very grateful

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noahrwil said:

Any chance I could get a link? Thanks!

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Mario said:

Could you send me the link please ?

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Crossvader said:

Could I get a link

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SpenceEdit said:

Sounds cool! How did you solve the logic gap of Vader/Reva finding them on Jabim without the tracker?

Honestly for my edit I never explicitly explained that, but Mapuzo was an imperial occupied world so it doesn’t make sense for a ship to be able to escape undetected. The implication being the ship was spotted/followed with the potential destinations pinpointed, this was reported to Reva, and she was invited to Vader’s ship to give him the news. That might be a bit of a leap without the tracker in LOLA but for me it made sense.

rik said:

Hi! Can I have link? Thanks

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Nindroid243 said:

I would love to check it out as well!!!

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MandThUlti said:

Would love to check this out!

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majoras_wrath said:

This sounds pretty cool! I’d like to check it out if possible!

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revel911 said:

Love the idea of more Qui Gon.

Doing Star Wars crawl? I know some want this and others don’t, I def do.

I opted to not have a crawl since it’s not an official Episodic Star Wars Movie

OBI-WAN KENOBI: REFOCUSED

Hey all! If you’re like me, you were dissatisfied with the Kenobi show as a whole, but really enjoyed some of the moments from the series. So, I set out to make a more cohesive and canon-friendly edit of Obi-Wan Kenobi.

V1 RELEASED (I WILL FIX LOW QUALITY RENDER FOR V2) (comment or PM me for link)

V2 WIP - SUGGESTIONS WELCOME

Final runtime is 2:25:53

Major Changes:

• Reva is no longer a Padawan who survived Order 66, just an Inquisitor fed up with her superiors
• Obi-Wan knows Anakin/Darth Vader is alive, he just hasn’t seen him in person
• Qui-Gon talks to Obi-Wan throughout but doesn’t manifest himself until the end
• Fortress Inquisitorius Leia’s rescue is cut completely

Minor Changes:

• Trimmed Leia chase scenes
• Cut every reference to Nari and him finding Obi-Wan on Tatooine
• Toned down Reva and Inquisitors
• Etc.

Episode Breakdowns:

Episode I:

• Cut Prequel Recap
• Order 66 Opening is replaced by Kenobi going to watch over Luke > Title card > Inquisitor entrance
• Trim Grand Inquisitor Talk at saloon (Implication is Obi-Wan at one point helped this man out)
• Cut Nari references in saloon
• Cut Jawa scene (might edit part of this back in later)
• Add Vader breathing in Kenobi nightmare
• Add Qui-Gon voice after nightmare
• Cut Nari finding Kenobi at night
• Change Leia’s intro to her running in the forest
• Cut inquisitors taking to crowd and Reva interrogating Owen
• Cut Fifth Brother scolding Reva
• Cut the Organa reception and Leia/Cousin interaction (V2 Change)
• Trim Leia chase scene
• Cut Nari hanging scene
• Cut kidnappers breaking LOLA
• Cut Kenobi digging up the Lightsabers (He has them in his Hut in case he needs to protect Luke)

Episode II:

• Add Qui-Gon voice on Daiyu
• Cut spice dealer (V2 Change)
• Trim Haja intro
• Cut Kenobi being captured by the kidnappers
• Trim Grand Inquisitor and Reva talk
• Trim Leia chase
• Cut all of Reva Parkour
• ReEdit Leia falling and Kenobi catching her (V2 Change)
• Cut Hada and Reva interaction
• Cut Reva knowing Anakin is Vader and revealing it to Kenobi

Episode III:

• Cut parts of Reva voice in Kenobi meditation
• Trim Reva talk with Vader
• Add Kenobi’s nightmare audio in Anakin hallucination
• Trim Reva talk at Inquisitorius
• Add Qui-Gon voice before Vader arrives
• Cut Reva finding The Path
• Trim
• Add Vader remembering duel on Mustafar when looking at fire
• Cut Reva catching Leia

Episode IV:

• Cut everything except arrival on Jabiim and bacta scene

Episode V:

• Cut Reva talking about tracker
• Cut ship returning to Jabiim
• Cut Evil LOLA
• Ani/Obi training edited together (from source)
• Cut Reva yelling “Fire” and “Light them up” to the troopers
• Cut every reference of Leia in the vents (V2 Change)
• Cut Bail Organa message to Kenobi (V2 Change)
• Trim Tala and Kenobi talk after Bail contacts Kenobi
• Heavily trim Kenobi and Reva talk through the blast door
• Cut Kenobi talking to Reva after surrendering
• Cut Kenobi getting taken back inside after surrendering to Reva
• Cut Anakin/Vader parallels as she loses to Vader
• Reva dies at the hands of Vader
• Cut Reva finding Bail message and Luke ending

Episode VI:

• Cut everything with Reva
• Cut Roken persuading Kenobi to stay both times (V2 Change)
• Add Qui-Gon voice before Kenobi goes to face Vader
• Add Qui-Gon voice when Kenobi is buried
• Rearrange ending: Kenobi leaves Vader > Kenobi goes to see Leia > Vader and Emperor scene > rest is same

Sources:

• Numerical Joker/Mecha Salesman’s Obi-Wan Kenobi - The Feature Cut Edition
• Qui-Gon’s voice bits from Clone Wars show

Hope you enjoy! Comments and suggestions welcome!

So the scene go something like:

Reeva contact Bounty Hunters / puts out bounty -> Obi-Wan sees they are being targeted -> They are on the run, Bounty Hunters are looking for him -> They run into alleyway, Obi-Wan slap the dude down -> Inquisitors arrive and confront Reeva -> Leia climbs up a ladder to the rooftoops, Obi-Wan is seen running up there already -> Inquisitor “Whispery-Voice” Guy marches through the streets -> Leia and Obi-Wan continues to run on the roof, and then Bounty Hunter starts to shoot -> and then some alterations to the overall pacing and tone of that scene. It doesn’t go on for way too long, and it focuses on Obi-Wan and Leia.

I really like this idea of Leia not running from Ben even though I had no problem with that plot point except for the slow chase. I might incorporate this into an edit im working on

id like the link to this edit

Id like to take a look at your work. Also out of curiosity is this only available in 1080p or in 4K as well?

SandMTV said:

I wonder what does it look like if it had Siege of Mandalore (With Ahsoka, Rex, Bo-Katan, and Maul), the microseries Clone Wars’ battle of Coruscant on land (How the Chancellor is kidnapped) and Fallen Order’s Order 66.

I combined v 1.4 rebalanced with mecha salesman’s 4 hour cut of revenge of the sith. It has everything you want except the scenes form fallen order. I could make a google drive and send you a link or something.

Pmed you a few days ago about download links for your episode 1 and 2 cuts. Get back to me when you can

RioReverso said:

Swazzy said:

This was very enjoyable, and I have few criticisms outside of some minor quibbles. Namely, some of the transitions: I think you had left the establishing shot of the Senate before cutting back to TCW, after which then goes to the interior of the Senate with Palpatine at his post. Also things like Obi saying “who could have done this?” which would then normally cut to Anakin killing the separatists, now cuts to Asokha. Not exactly a mistake, but a removal the visual dovetail that existed in the base film. Sometimes the score contradicts itself during some transitions. However other times the transitions are seamless and I genuinely was caught off guard when the film had switched tracks, so to speak.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts and criticisms. I admit there are few hiccups and choppy transitions along the movie which may disturb the the flow thematically. I did struggled a bit on where to fit each scene seamlessly as there was no clear cut chronological order towards the end the movie (not that I know of). As this is my first experience in editing, I’m hoping to improve further in my future version of the edit.

I think it is made better as a text with the inclusion of the TCW characters, the humanization of the clones through Rex and the pacifism displayed by Asokha that the jedi dogma keenly disregard in adjacent scenes. Darth Maul’s presence also helps tie the film back to the first episode thematically.

What would really bring it together is a companion fan edit that makes AOTC & the preceding necessary TCW episodes two acts of one movie.

This will need a whole new supercut.😉

Im not sure if you have seen this, but regarding no clear cut chronology of SoM and the end of RotS, here is a link you might want to check out: https://decider.com/2020/05/19/star-wars-revenge-of-the-sith-clone-wars-finale-viewing-order-guide/

Im waiting for an emailed response on the download link or watch link or whatever it is, but while I do so I was wondering if this version is using the 4k version of Revenge of the Sith on Disney+.