This is fantastic, fantastic, fantastic. Just finished a rewatch of Bebop recently (although I made mental comparisons to Final Fantasy 7 before Star Wars), so I’m definitely intrigued by this.
I’d second the volume in the lightsaber-baby conversation. Those lines sound quieter to me than the rest of the conversation, but not by too much.
Also, this is a minor thing, but I still hear a bit of the Tusken Raiders’ cries during Anakin and Palpatine’s talk after Dooku’s death.
Absolutely love the work you’ve done so far! I’d echo the suggestions re: Kashyyyk-Anidala and Obi-Wan’s reaction. The volume of the battle is a little too loud in contrast with the baby-lightsaber talk. I’d personally suggest raising the volume of Anakin and Padme a little. The screams during Obi’s reaction are a little distracting - it was hard for me to really internalize his actual reaction, so I would suggest removing some of them.
(Also, how would I see a workprint/latest version? New to the forums so I’m not familiar with everything yet, lol)