Kaido

An interesting update. Act 2 begins with the death of the Jedi from the beginning and with Anakin agreeing to help Darelda despite Carima’s doubts.

Thanks I look forward to the next update.

An interesting edits. In this new version, you show us that neither Obi-Wan nor Carima are aware of what is happening to Anakin.

Thanks I look forward to the next update.

An interesting update. You have shown us more in depth the concerns of Anakin and the lack of ability to see them from Obi-Wan.

Thanks I look forward to the next update.

An interesting update. In this update you show us more in depth how the friendship between Anakin and Obi-Wan has changed in this episode compared to the previous films.

I know maybe it’s a bit early to ask this, and also because it’s been a while, but: Have you already started working/thinking about the final versions of the previous episodes? Or maybe this will happen when you start making the scripts?

Thanks I look forward to the next update.

Good job. You show us that Anakin and Palpatine’s relationship is very similar to those of the original prequels, and that there seems to be a spy in the Republic and Darelda is in charge of investigating it.

And as the others say, please at least try to keep the pace until you finish this act, then with act II, will depend that how advanced it is, but please, try not to do more breaks until you finish the updates of this act.

Thanks I look forward to the next update.

Welcome back, You have brought us a very interesting update. It seems that the relationship between Obi-Wan and Anakin seems to have cooled, and Obi-Wan seems to be realizing the toll that the Clone Wars are having on Anakin. And this seems very obsessed with the safety of Carima and his unborn child, revealing that his family is what matters most to him. And that the Republic is preparing an attack on Mandalore, which Anakin prefers to use more brutal methods if it means that no more lives will be lost, while Bail and Obi-Wan prefer to show more piety even if that means losing some lives.

I look forward to the next update.

Finally updates resume. Good job, the Republic is winning the war, Anakin more like Darth Vader and Ben is worried about the Jedi. Reading this update leaves you wanting more.

By the way, I know that asking this now may be a bit early, but how is the situation of Ep.III?
With this I mean that if you already have everything clear, especially the basic plot and as for the acts if you already have everything figured out (sequence of events and all that) of all the acts or only of Act I?

I ask you these things, because I believed in June when you put the first update that you would have figured out at least Act I and apparently it was not, it is mostly to know if we can expect more regularity in terms of updates or it will be more similar to what happened in June.

Thanks and let’s hope that soon we can enjoy another update.

A very good end, after so long Episode II finally ends. Overall a very good episode, everything fits well, including the surprise of the name Darth Vader. It really you don’t have to include Bracett if you don’t want, because you said you think you’re going to rewrite Episode I or to improve it, you can do that Bracett doesn’t exist or she dies during the first movie.
I look forward to the first update of Episode III: Broken Forces!

A very good update, the big climax of Act III finally ends. The Jedi defeated the clones, at least in this battle and Skywalker kills Crayde.
I look forward to read the epilogue!

A very good update, everything is ready for the big climax of the next update: Skywalker has found out that with a Jedi mind trick, the Jedi clones can be defeated, Obi-Wan has faced Phakerem and now Nellith will face Phakerem. This is getting very exciting!
I look forward to the next update.

A very good update, the great action scenes finally begin. Skywalker and Crayde meet again, along with the surprise of the clone at his side. And Nellith and Obi-Wan against Phakerem and her Jedi clones. This is getting exciting!
I look forward to the next update.

A good update, although unfortunately short (which was already known). Skywalker has been finally rescued and the invasion continues, I am unable to tell you anything else, since there is no more to say about this update.
I look forward to the next update.

Good Job! A great start to the invasion. Now that the energy of the planetary defenses have been destroyed, we’ll see what happens, and what will happen to the poor Anakin.
I look forward to the next update.

Finally updates start, I wish it had been a longer update, but hey, if we join the modifications and new added, is more or less a regular update. Good job, reading this update leaves you wanting more.

Let’s hope that soon we can enjoy another update.

An interesting update, An interesting update, Anakin and Crayde have an interesting talk about the Republic, and he wants to clone Anakin. Meanwhile, Obi-Wan and the others try to delay the Mandalorians and Nellith accept that the Jedi are needed to win the war.
I look forward to the next update.

For now, I only read the opening crawl and a little every page, I have to read it all, but what I read from the opening crawl seems quite interesting.

But only three things:
First, could you put the date on which the episode occurs?
Second, describe a little more physically (hair style, hair color, eye color, etc) the main characters and supporting characters and their ages (you know, instead of saying a young Obi-Wan Kenobi or an a teenager Anakin, you could put an Obi-Wan of thirty years or something like that).
And third, you could put in bold the names of the characters? You know, to make it easier to read and differentiate who speaks.

That's all for now, when I read it completely, I will give a fuller comment.

No problem! Good start,  Anakin is being tortured by Crayde and Carima has convinced the resistance. I look forward to the next update.

Hello, I wonder if anyone knows how to do or some tutorial on how to make the end credits of Star Wars.

Thanks.