Johnny5

Well I do have some ideas. 

Since there is no real date of Lukes death and the fact the luke won't be killed off on any book (Of what I learned). 

I'm thinking of just making the next story. I think Luke should be like in his 30s or 40s. And the plot should be about new ranks unused from the clone wars (A more dangerous droid species) And there will be a separatist seeking revenge after all these years of waiting (He was waiting for them to fully develop since they required thousands) he finally can take revenge of being stuck on the planet for years. I don't really want luke to not be a jedi master in training because I didn't want to go threw every detail of how luke became master. Luke and Han are still captured for answers for them spying in there forgotten planet, and thats the time its finally discovered. I wanted Luke to be not that old since indy already got that chance. I want them to be younger. But I'm still thinking about the other characters. Ben might not be mentioned often. This is not the final cut so I'm not putting my hopes up. 

Hey about the battle droids. What if there are battle droids at the beginning. Ok. But in the factory are some newly ranked battle droids, made after the extinction of the ultra battle droids. These droids are something that no one has ever seen before, being fully advanced and dangerous that have more skill. Luke couldn't even take them all down. I'm sure they could be destroyed though but need to be deactivated. And if luke does run into anyone who is involved with the droids, I want them to be like spies, not droids. One of the spies is one of a character's that helps them on the adventure. The female has to wait a while since I still don't know how he's going to fit. Still don't know if this can all fit in yet.

Even the dark lord. 

If you want to know go to my new forum. It takes place after the battle of endor. And the development for luke's master rank. 

I kind of do look at the EU on Wookiepedia but it doesn't work for me. 

I'm not really into the EU. I kinda need a 411 on what is happening in the EU. I guess I can make a sacrifice on the sith. But I could just do one dark lord since there's no way there couldn't be just one dark jedi. He could have been under the separatists care until he turns old enough to take care of himself. And he could have be like in his 60s. Could have been trained the ways of the force until his masters death after a duel with star-killer. But I always wanted to make my own light-saber duel. He could be working for the separatist until the separatist realizes he's trying to take over him. 

But if this can't work then It doesn't fit in. No big deal though. I'll think of something. 

Thats the a part of the back story. Which will be mentioned by luke. 

How about this. In part of the story. There is a young adult who was a jedi (Mid 20s,). But rebelled the same reason any jedi. So he fell to the dark side not knowing when. But Luke knew him and wants him to rebel from the plan. Of course they do a light-saber duel to settle it. But that droid/separatist revenge for over 30 years is a really good plot. I just wanted to add some stuff it make it a good length, and come up with new ideas. 

So do any of you two have any advantages of sith lords and disadvantages. Like how they can fit to the story and how they can't. I already said that the dark lords are dead (Palpatine and Vader [who turned good]). But this might be a good intro to the new sith order. 

I want Chewie to be in it again. 

Ok I am not putting Christianity in my script. I told you that. It will never happen. It will be star wars (No Christianity). 

Yep. I think I want it to be like 10 years after return of the jedi before he becomes a jedi master. The sith don't really have to be involved yet. The sith could appear until the time is right, since Emperor palpetine died as well as Darth Vader. It might be a little hard to explain all that.

Cause if you think about it, its always good to try something new. But I will see what fits and what doesn't. You made a good point there.  

Wow that sound simple and dangerous. I like it. What about the sith lords. How can they be involved.  Maybe they are part of this to eliminate the jedi once and for all. Pretty intense. Or course I want some Storm Troopers (Found in the EU) that are like guards. I don't want them to be to involved. I don't want Ben involved to much either now that I think about it. (Ben is Luke's son) Now there needs to be a lightsaber duel. Theres got to be. 

PS: Really makes a connection with the Prequel Trilogy and the original.

Sorry this is my first time on OT.com. So I didn't know. 

I can't understand how I got Darth Ideias's account. It sent me a new account and new password so I don't know what happened. 

But I doubt that OT.com would do that. 

I really never thought of doing battle droid agian. But thats a good start. 

Oh I'm just trying to come up with a good idea. I just got a little frustrated. Its kinda my first time in OT.com. Never experienced talking to other star wars fans. I apologized for calling you guys immature. 

When I meant Ideas, I was mentioning star wars. No offense at all. 

Look, I got to admit that I am sorry that I offended you guys. Your right. I just didn't know that you guys would be so offended. I know you guys were probably chalk-full of ideas. If you except this apology that would be good to hear. I am not forcing you guys to except it. 

Ok I guess I have no choice but to give it up for a while. 

Ok, I have no plot, I have no Characters (Except Luke and Han Solo). I need some plot ideas. Real ones. Everyone (OT.com) can reply. 

No ones perfect Akwat. I just got a little mad. Stop calling me spiritually mature. Its pretty immature to tease, like you guys are 4. 

I Apologize for that. 

Lets start all over again. I know I was stupid enough to mention Christianity. Lets at least try to forget about it. Pretend Chuck Noris shot that last one with a BB gun.

This forum is gone. Stop replying. 

You guys shut up....... I have been working on the script for 2 years, and I did alone. Ever thought that doing it alone can ruin the whole plot. It can get confusing. None of my friends are star wars fans, so they couldn't help me. Just act like a fan and give me plot idea. Right now I am starting a new forum. Star Wars- (Title in development)

It doesn't matter if I am a Christian. As long as I am a true star wars fan. I know what belongs in star wars, and what doesn't. Can't I get any help!  

 No I meant I wanted help with the story (For the Screenplay), not christianity. Sorry I confused you people. Forget about my religious beliefs. Were onto another subject. STAR WARS. I meant anyone that does not believe can help me with the story I am making. Ok so heres my original story and why its not good.  

 I have a story but It seems to week. Its about the sith and the yuzzhen vongs teaming up to start an empire but the yuzzhen vong plot seems unnecessary. They concur the galaxy with an alliance of Storm Troopers. Luke was originally on exile but that wont work because he has been on exile for a long time. So I'm stuck. I need help so I can get a good story.