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#922251
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Episode III: Revenge of the Ridiculousness
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TV’s Frink said:

Ooh, interesting idea! And I happen to own it.

I could remove all the ROTS audio and replace entirely with that audio, so the music wouldn’t be a problem, and the sword noises might sound funny in a lightsaber fight. The only issue I see is the dialogue, which works great, but there’s nowhere to put it - i.e. there’s no dialogue in the SW fight so no lip sync to use.

Maybe at this point they can both just be thinking at each other?

You could just drop the dialogue in a scene where you can’t see their faces well enough to see if they’re actually talking.

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#922242
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Episode III: Revenge of the Ridiculousness
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TV’s Frink said:

I’ve gotten to the main fight between Obi and Ani and I’m really stumped for anything new to do here. Other than cutting out as much as possible in order to keep in brief, I don’t have any good ideas for how to make it worthwhile.

Here’s a continuous clip of the various pieces for reference. (start at about 2:00)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=40HhaIJ0QVw

Any ideas?

Maybe there’s something good in here.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WDlZ_SXx5gA

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#921843
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Aalenfae's PREQUEL TRILOGY (Heavily delayed - computer exploded)
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Mithrandir said:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WbFqWtaITck&feature=youtu.be

Here’s a first attempt I made a couple of days ago for brainstorming purposes of what has been developed in the Revisited saga thread.

I’ll quote a post I made after the idea that is tried to be developed currently by Aalenfae (if I don’t get it wrong) as general insight for Anakin’s character

I think Anakin should go down Harvey Dent’s route. However, i’ll make the point after some differences between Star Wars and Rings.

At some point, Anakin’s story is the exact opposite to Frodo’s story. Lucas set up an order where anakin fell because he was too human. GL wanted the jedi order to be morally more than humans, he didn’t want them to commit to anybody, nor to help or show compassion, not even to marry.

While the Jedi keep this rigid behaviour, everything develops just fine and the galaxy is in order. But then comes Anakin, who acts like a normal person, chooses his wife over his duty, and so he falls (and the republic falls) because of their forbidden love<span style=“font-size: 14px; line-height: 17.265625px;”>. Cleary it is wrong for him to be and act just as a common folk would.</span>

Now take LOTR. The ultimate success in Frodo’s mission comes from love under the form of pity, because he spared Gollum’s life, because Faramir let Frodo go when he wasn’t supposed to, etc. In a general way, we are trained (culturally trained) to identify ourselves with characters that show some human scale while heroes are determined, heroes have goals of grandeur and stay on their path. Characters we all emphatise with are the ones that are set in a path that wasn’t theirs, and solve things the best they can (Han solo, anyone?)

I’d make a hero of Anakin if I were to make these movies, because that’s what’s wrong with him. I wouldn’t want anyone to like him but to admire him. Anakin should be incorruptible, the perfect soldier, always proceeding by the book. This blind commitment to civil duty, this inflexibility is what puts him just two steps away from being a monster. He should fall because he denies his human emotions, not because he follows them.

In the end, he falls because the institutions of the republic are rotten. this is the key: The jedi are monsters which is why Luke’s Jedi Order wouldn’t be just a copy of the preceeding one. You can’t prevent humans from being humans, this should be the real tragedy of Anakin Skywalker. He was raised to be something noone can be. And he took it all too seriously.

Again: it’s the Harvey Dent route, from hero to vilain in two minutes, when he realises he’s let so much go and it wasn’t worthy. That’s the first step to messianism.

And at this point I believe it’s the only feasible way to make Anakin’s repentine turn work.

In AOTC he looses his mother because of duty. He gets too late to Tattoine. In ROTS, by setting the scene when he’s alone in the council chamber crying BEFORE he denounces Palpatine to Windu, it will be shown that he is RENOUNCING to Padmé for the sake of the republic, and he cries because it’s his mother chapter all over again (he is clearly proceeding like a monster at that point, no one would give up the love of his live for political stability). So when for some reason he gets to the chancellor’s office and windu is clearly not proceeding by right or law, the messianic I me mine Vader is gets to the surface (the jedi are as corrupt as the Sith, and I’m the only one who can save this Republic)

Video was taken down. Mithrandir, would you mind rehosting it on vimeo? I’d love to see what you did with it.

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#921543
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Info Wanted: Fan Edit feedback thread
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Smithers said:

Jeebus said:

darthrush said:

Once it’s legal for us to post clips for TFA fanedit ideas I will put up two maybe that are gonna be Hans death with added music from ROTS. There is a last stretch of music in “Anakins Dark Deeds” that I could use which I find works best or the immolation scene music which is good too.

This?

https://youtu.be/xxjjtboGvOw?t=3m17s

I love that song! It’s one of my favourite John Williams queues.

I really like the one 30 seconds into that song when the choir starts. Chills every time.

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#921479
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Info Wanted: Fan Edit feedback thread
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Smithers said:

One large problem with the “Birth of Darth Vader” scene is that he looks silly with the restraints on his wrists and he has awkward posture, you might just want to use a few shots from here: https://youtu.be/LK58iuqfdxg?t=2m40s

I think I’ll be using those shots even though it’s completely CGI. Darth Vader looks scarier here, I could cut back and forth between the Emperor, the walls being crushed and the video game footage to make a more convincing scene.

Yeah, if you can replace Starkiller with Palpatine in that scene, it would be super cool.

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#921426
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Info Wanted: Fan Edit feedback thread
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darthrush said:

Jeebus said:

I’ve been working on the Vader ‘NOOOOOO’ scene, what do you guys think?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vDzbeeTo2EY

Tbh the perfect way this was handled was by L8wtr. There are many aspects of his edit (mainly the ending) that I really enjoy, especially how he handles the noooo. You get the awesome shot of Vader rising up with powerful music then sidious asks him “can you hear me”, Vader answers “yes master” fade to black and we go to funeral continuing with memorable imagery accompanied by powerful music till end credits. I prefer Hal’s edit though all the way up until Anakin and obi wan start fighting. Then I switch to L8wtrs to include Yoda/Sidious fight which is trimmed up heavily to reduce silliness and preserve the epic vibe along with the improved ending. Ur take on how other editors like L8wtr have handled this scene?

I prefer seeing Vader’s reaction to Padme dying. One way I’ve seen it done is right when Palpatine smiles, it fades to the next scene, cutting out right before the ‘NOOOO’. This was just a test for me to see if I can make the ‘NOOOO’ tolerable.

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#921314
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Info Wanted: Fan Edit feedback thread
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Smithers said:

I think the scene works best with no voiceovers whatsoever, the audience should know what Anakin is thinking about, and if they don’t then the movie has failed to achieve it’s goals.

On another note I thought I’d just post some of my rough and/or experimental clips:

-Anakin deeper voice: (https://vimeo.com/159893770)
-My radical TPM opening sequence: (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1sU3kLGa7RI) (https://vimeo.com/159310065)
-Rough Podrace: (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oHtmoDmIAus)
-Rough Qui-Gon death rescore: (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kJhBKvYT_4o)

Really loving that use of ESB music for the TPM opening.