Jedi Mage

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Join date: 23-Aug-2010
Last activity: 21-Jan-2011
Posts: 2

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Post: #465974
Topic: SW Episode III - Reign of the Dark Side (* unfinished project *)
Link: https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/465974/action/topic#465974
Time: 21-Jan-2011 7:20 AM

I always thought Corusant should look like a war-zone, with pillars of smoke billowing out of the skyline and the carcasses of buildings surrounding the senate. It would be a siege state, with clone troopers acting as the only stabilizing feature. This would explain Palpatine's power consolidation much better. George really bumbled a fairly easy to tell story. . .

Post: #434104
Topic: SW Episode III - Reign of the Dark Side (* unfinished project *)
Link: https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/434104/action/topic#434104
Time: 23-Aug-2010 7:25 AM

Dear Bobgarcia,

I like the idea of removing the "order 66", but perhaps you could try Palpy saying only "The time has come..." Cody says "yes my Lord" then blasts Kenobi. This would make it appear that there is an aprior arrangement between Palpy and the Clone Commanders.