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#1198800
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Star Wars Episode III: Broken Forces
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Great work, In this update it is very clear that Anakin is on the verge of exploding, but Carima is the one that prevents him from doing it. The Jedi clones have tried to assassinate the new President, which will increase the fear to the Jedi and the assault to Mandalore is mentioned and about to begin.

I look forward to see the next one, that I hope we don’t have to wait so long to see it 😉.

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#1127941
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Star Wars Episode III: Broken Forces
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What a pleasant surprise, we can finally get back to enjoy your Episode III. This two updates are interesting, the Jedi are more involved in the war, Skywalker is more affected by the war than in Ep.II and the vision of the citizens of the Jedi is more damaged because of the Jedi clones of the previous episode.

Good job, and I look forward to the next part.

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#975887
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CWBorne’s Prequel Treatment Omnibus Thread (Current Work: Revisions & Edits)
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Great ending to the Episode, since I found this episode, I had always thought that Anakin would end with a mechanical hand in this episode and not Carima (which is a piece of the arm not the hand), but he will suffer worse injuries in Episode III and who would have thought that the name of Darth Vader would be a Jedi title. Good Work.

One question I’ve had for some time, but I waited until the episode was finished to be sure and ask the question:
The non-appearance of Bracett in this episode, is on purpose or you have forgotted her?

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#918929
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CWBorne’s Prequel Treatment Omnibus Thread (Current Work: Revisions & Edits)
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I liked the added scene between HX-81 and Darelda, I wonder who will be the person who can help her to unite the Senate, Bail or Palpatine. Ben and others have reached the planetary battle and they plan to engage Phakerem’s ship, meanwhile Carima is approaching to rescue Anakin.
Good job, and I look forward to the next part.

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#758876
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CWBorne’s Prequel Treatment Omnibus Thread (Current Work: Revisions & Edits)
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Great work, Skywalker, Nivir and the resistance have finally reached their target, but this is heavily guarded, and he does what he must do to gain entry into the base, causing a distraction to others can complete the mission. Meanwhile, Ben has discovered the traitor, which turns out to be a clone of a Jedi. I look forward to see the next update.

Could you please answer this little question:

As for Act 3, you have it completely figured out (specific scenes and everything else) or you only have a rough idea and you have to think about specific scenes and everything else?

Thanks.

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#756769
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CWBorne’s Prequel Treatment Omnibus Thread (Current Work: Revisions & Edits)
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Thanks for the reply, I think he should appear, as a henchman of Palpatine and helping him to destroy the Jedi or something like that, but I know you'll do what's best for the story. As for the last update, I must say that I found it very interesting. Ben and the others have found that there is a traitor and now they must find it. Anakin and Carima have finally found the resistance and Crayde has discovered that there is a Jedi on Coruscant.

I look forward to see the next one.

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#756200
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CWBorne’s Prequel Treatment Omnibus Thread (Current Work: Revisions & Edits)
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Good work, I found this part very interesting. Ben is trying to accomplish the wish of his apprentice and bring the Jedi in command of the army of the Republic. And Anakin and a patrol of clones go to the same place, it will be interesting to see how Anakin and Carima will leave Coruscant.
I look forward to see the next update.