Gingergems

smudger9 said:

I’ve now edited together the final battle. I’ve cut Grogu and the Majordomo (which will allow me to completely remove the dreaded vespa chase) and it works really well. The audio is done except for the two music transitions into and out of the sequence, which I will re-score later.

Here is the link if you want to view it.
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https://vimeo.com/683662024

Just watched the final battle edit and it looks great. My only comment would be that the conversation in the first scene with Cad Bane, the mayor, and the head of the pyke syndicate jars slightly without the scene of Cad Bane visiting Freetown, particularly the line from the mayor “did you convince the marshall to stay neutral”. If you cut that line and just had the Mayor responding to Cad Bane’s line “you won’t have to worry about Freetown” with “good I want this over as soon as possible” it removes some of the awkwardness of never seeing the “convincing” that occurs between Bane and Vanth and leaves a bit of mystery ready for the reveal that Cad Bane had shot the Marshall for when he’s talking with Boba Fett later. Just a thought.

This latest version of the eyes is perfect! Great work.

I think this is great but other the original sith eyes, this is too subtle with all the other lighting effects from the lightsabers going on. If your trying to show her tapping into the dark side then let’s be bold about it!

NeverarGreat said:

I’ve tweaked the eye effect to be more in line with the prequel version - a slightly red iris rim with yellow interior. It’s also more subtle. With this more subtle version I’m not sure it would read well on anything further away than this extreme closeup, so it may be unnoticeable if placed on the entire fight.

https://vimeo.com/562525043

Password: fanedit

Fantastic project, thanks for all your hard work, sounds like a real labor of love to get the whole season do to just over 2 hours but it needed to be done so there’s an efficient way to remind yourself of the main story arc. Would love to give it a look before season 2 comes out.