G2Kgwen

Yes, I’ve been waiting for this! I was sitting in theatre thinking about how easily this film can go from a 6 or so to a solid 7 with some really simple edits (mostly just editing down the film to a little under 2 hours like the other Indy films).
Although it’s a fairly effective scene at showing how evil the villains are, I don’t think it’s all too necessary to show them shooting the librarian(s). You can just have Indy get freaked out over the bodies as he escapes. Best advice I can give really follows that in general, keep the focus on Indy’s perspective.

I wish you the best of luck and I cannot wait to see what comes of this!!