FilmAddict84

Would love to see the latest version. Please share the link.

I have to say I agree with everything that SparkySywer mentioned in his post.

One example happens at 28:50 where anakin and ObiWan are standing still and then they are walking. There is no natural transition which makes it seem jarring if that makes sense.

I want to thank you for sending me your edit of the film and what you have so far is really good. I have to agree with krlozdac’s comments. The beginning of the film is too dark but I see what you were trying to do, and feel that additional color correction is needed. Anakin feels like TCW Anakin now, or at least it is greatly improved. Some of the added lines are good and some of them simply do not flow, or go by very quickly and are hard to hear. When an edit occurs, it feels somewhat jarring and should be smoothed out so that it feels more natural. I understand this is not the final version and you have more edits to make, but I feel like it’s nearly there. During the birth scene, I would get rid of the medical droid entirely. The ending felt very somber with the Vader breathing, but I feel you pulled it off. Very well done. Just a few more passes so that it all flows smoothly and I think you have a great edit on your hands.