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#881901
Topic
Star Trek: The Divergent Series (Ep. 1-1: "These Are the Adventures ...") *COMPLETE*
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INT. ENTERPRISE/SICKBAY

Piper and Ruan enter the sickbay, Mitchell’s limp form held between them. Already in wait for them is a contingent of nurses.

PIPER: Help us get his armour off.

Moving in, the nurses assist Piper and Ruan with the removal of Mitchell’s body armour. Once that is done, they carry him over to a biobed, laying him down on it. One of the nurses takes up a pair of scissors and cuts open the front of the major’s black bodysuit; pushing it aside, the nasty disruptor wound on Mitchell’s torso is revealed. The nurses quickly administer an anesthetic and disinfect the wound.

NURSE #1: A disruptor blast?

PIPER: (removes his helmet and gauntlets) Yes. Thank God it was only a glancing hit. (to Nurse #4) Hand me the laser scalpel.

NURSE #4: Aren’t we going to use the cellular regenerator, Doctor?

PIPER: (shakes his head) The hemorrhaging is too extensive. We’ll have to go in with a protoplaser if we’re to stop the bleeding.

The nurse hands Piper the laser scalpel. Activating the tool, the doctor begins making the incision.

PIPER: (to Mitchell) As for you, you pig-headed son of a bitch, you’d better not die on me.

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#881772
Topic
Star Trek: The Divergent Series (Ep. 1-1: "These Are the Adventures ...") *COMPLETE*
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I went back to the last two entries and made some alterations. Regarding the former, I replaced the three hunter-seekers with a single hunter-killer (which is a kind of cross between the Robot from Lost in Space and the HK-tank from the Terminator franchise) to add a greater sense of danger to the situation. Regarding the latter, I wasn’t satisfied with how I executed the landing party’s escape from the starbase, so I added more twists and turns to the proceedings.

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#881633
Topic
What was so Godawful about The Force Unleashed?
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canofhumdingers said:

I dunno if I’m doing a good job of explaining it. I’m not always good at using words to explain feelings. But back in the day, the force had a certain feeling to it and The Force Unleashed (based on the demo I played) failed to capture that feeling.

The Force in the OT feels more like sorcery/ESP. The Force in the PT (and its derivatives) feels like superpowers.

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#881626
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Going away? Post so here!
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I don’t know if I’m going to be posting on OT.com for very much longer.

I don’t care about TFA, so none of the attention or discussions in “General Star Wars Discussion” about the movie interest me. Without either Bingowings or darth_ender posting here anymore, “Off Topic”'s become a dead, dreary place to be. Even if the “Screen-Writing and Re-writing” section was at all active, I no longer have much drive to continue any of the scripts I’ve been working on. I don’t visit any of the other subforums regularly, so there’s nothing there to hold my interest.

I’m not formally quitting OT.com, but right now, I just don’t feel motivated to stick around.

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#881610
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Return of the Jedi - Why so much hate? What do you guys think of it?
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TV’s Frink said:

http://originaltrilogy.com/topic/ROTJ-is-the-best-Star-Wars-film-discuss/id/15430

http://originaltrilogy.com/topic/Return-of-the-Jedi-Appreciation-Thread/id/17468

http://originaltrilogy.com/topic/Views-on-Return-of-the-Jedi-22-years-later/id/2999

Those threads all are better than this one because this thread’s title sucks.

Perhaps it would read better if you held it up to a mirror?