I think you should trim the Padmè family dinner scene just a little at least the first part of the scene cause it is a little strange and only contributes to the story slightly. Think about removing the roll around in grass scene with Anakin and Padmè cause that scene is just dumb. Also cut out the force pear thing too lol. I like the making the kiss scene look like its night. That was great. Also at the circle meeting scene with Padmè and the Seperatists at Geonosis when they take Anakin and Padmè away change the subtitles to something like “take them to the arena” or “send them to be exectuted”. One more thing, when Padmè is all like “I love you. I truly, deeply love you.” try to extend the time before that– I think you made a cut there, but the cut seems a little just a little rough, and Padmè’s declaration of love is a little just a little out of the blue. Good work overall!