Clavis

Movies Remastered said:

Playing with some random Saber settings. Ignore the tracking and speed, It’s 3am!

https://youtu.be/HpFNZ2UVxKA

The fluid one looks great!

hinventon said:

I think that would be a cool place to insert the World Between Worlds clip of Luke if anywhere. Also I can’t really tell what Leia is saying, but I like the concept.

I wanted to insert the World Between Worlds clip of Luke but I couldn’t find it. I need to improve on the mixing of the dialogue.

JakeRyan17 said:

Somewhere, several pages ago, someone mentioned implying Leia was more responsible for the Han apparition. I had mocked this up awhile back if this is helpful:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1hBiL84mei6U3zlNsCw29zn5wElLBopwG/view?usp=sharing

21C Peasant said:

At the risk of annoying everybody, I put together another version of my tie sequence including a brand new shot of the ties with the castle in the background.

Please keep in mind that I’m doing this purely for my own enjoyment, not to try to impress anyone or to try to convince Hal9000 to include this in his edit. I’ll be putting this in my own personal edit, but if anyone wants to use it in theirs, that would be cool, too.

As someone in this community once said, “The best edit is always your own.”

Right on!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1IMSGRFzOVEK4APG1WaHKGxVMY6odqZ74/view?usp=sharing

Can you send this to me without any added music? Really like the concept, but the music feels too looped over the Battlefront Footage.

Wonderful! I too really like the theory that Leia conjured the Han apparition. My interpretation is that Leia, with Luke’s help, used her remaining life force to conjure Han.

https://vimeo.com/498471171

pw: fanedit

Wesyeed said:

Is it too late to make a quick suggestion? I did this with one of my fanedits and it enhanced things. I think it’d be cool to have Rey’s voice echo or reverb whatever the term is as she does the I am iron-girl bit. Might actually work and be similar to palp’s voice change in RotS as all the sith speak through him. Like “And I… am [all the jedi]” My best comparison is to how Galadrial sounds when she’s turned crazy by the ring in Lotr. Guess it’s better to show you what I’m talking about tho…

https://youtu.be/vZSauV3DaR8

If it’s already been suggested before then oops, sorry, but wanted to try just in case.

Reminds me of Aang when he is in the Avatar state. Maybe Rey’s eyes should glow white/blue/green as she says it?

I have done a version in which Ushar has an RP accent.

https://streamable.com/3ilftp

EDIT: I also added voices to the Ben Solo scene. (“You brought this on yourself, Solo.”, “How is he doing that?”, “Oh…”, “Kill-!”)

https://streamable.com/3zifvs

axlanian said:

Clavis said:

Has anyone considered Tatooine replacing the Jakku shot?

https://vimeo.com/445980139

That’s three OT planets. We need the whole saga represented in these final moments.

What I meant was adding Tatooine along with Coruscant, Naboo, and Kijimi.

Has anyone considered Tatooine replacing the Jakku shot?

https://vimeo.com/445980139

Ed Slushie said:

Here’s my mockup of it:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mn5MoYBak8U&feature=youtu.be

I like it. I’d switch around the cockpit shot, and the binary sunrise shot. It would be interesting to see the elder wave goodbye to the Falcon as it flies away.

DarkSpecter5K said:

Darth Sadifous said:

DarkSpecter5K said:

What does everyone think of other planets added to the falling Star Destroyer scene? Naboo, Coruscant, Utapau?

I definitely would love this if someone could execute it convincingly. I would say Coruscant is a must if we are doing one planet from each trilogy (Coruscant, Bespin or Endor and Jakku) as most have suggested. I’d also like to possible see Naboo, Kashyyyk, Corellia, etc.

Is there any footage of Coreilla that would work convincingly?

I think some video games may have some good shots.

DarkSpecter5K said:

What does everyone think of other planets added to the falling Star Destroyer scene? Naboo, Coruscant, Utapau?

I have considered that idea.

JakeRyan17 said:

Movies Remastered said:

I like that. Will you be cleaning up the centre channel for overlay?

How do you mean?

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1DUXM3TIlAJKR8pH2sMwvhbrzjWZt6XwL/view?usp=sharing

I love how the center channel is so clean! Was it taken from a different mix? It makes the music sound more seamless.

I rescored Rey vs Palpatine with ‘The Emperor’ from Return of the Jedi
https://streamable.com/palpuw

idir_hh said:

Clavis said:

krausfadr said:

ClownBaby said:

Reading through this thread and looking over the results of the TROS poll got me thinking about the idea of having Rey be responsible for her parents death. I know that keeping Rey as Palps granddaughter is a less popular option than Rey Nobody, but if an editor were to have Rey kill her parents I think the Rey Palpatine angle works.

This way we keep Rey’s parents as good people who were doing all they could to protect their daughter, and in a fit of uncontrolled childhood rage, she causes their death. When she accepts the truth of this it would serve to compound the feelings of inner conflict and fear she has regarding her own power

They sold you to him: https://streamable.com/6042d7
You wanted your parents dead: https://streamable.com/lmidv9
I killed my mother: https://streamable.com/ot407g

That’s seamless. Great work!

Clavis how’s that Achto sequence coming along? Curious to see what you’ve been up to with that.

I was experimenting with it last night. I am working with Luke building his lightsaber in a deleted scene of ROTJ, and Rey lifting the lightsaber in the hut from the end of The Last Jedi BTS reel from D23 2017, to create a scene of Rey constructing her lightsaber.

krausfadr said:

ClownBaby said:

Reading through this thread and looking over the results of the TROS poll got me thinking about the idea of having Rey be responsible for her parents death. I know that keeping Rey as Palps granddaughter is a less popular option than Rey Nobody, but if an editor were to have Rey kill her parents I think the Rey Palpatine angle works.

This way we keep Rey’s parents as good people who were doing all they could to protect their daughter, and in a fit of uncontrolled childhood rage, she causes their death. When she accepts the truth of this it would serve to compound the feelings of inner conflict and fear she has regarding her own power

They sold you to him: https://streamable.com/6042d7
You wanted your parents dead: https://streamable.com/lmidv9
I killed my mother: https://streamable.com/ot407g

That’s seamless. Great work!

Hal 9000 said:

Did John Williams record something for the moment in TFA that ended up using ‘Burning Homestead,’ and if so, do we have it?

It’s on The Force Awakens soundtrack ‘The Ways of the Force’ at 0:11.

OutboundFlight said:

Clavis said:

These are a few preview frames of the crawl I wrote for my edit: https://imgur.com/a/KtkefTG

This is a huge improvement from “The Dead Speak!” good job. But one question…

What is with the ST’s fetish for CAPITALIZATION? Of the original six, only three movies have one full-capital letter – ARMY OF THE REPUBLIC, DEATH STAR, and GALACTIC EMPIRE. All which are some of the most important parts of the movie.

In the ST, we get three for TFA, more than all six movies combined, for the three factions. Same for TLJ, only now there are two factions, but don’t we already know the key terms from the last one? AND then TROS stops CARING with SIX capitalized WORDS basically ANY proper NOUN they COULD find. I know it’s a pretty stupid thing to rant about but it bothers me.

Thanks! I might tone the capitalization down.

These are a few preview frames of the crawl I wrote for my edit: https://imgur.com/a/KtkefTG

Ed Slushie said:

Knight of Kalee said:

Maybe someone could isolate the Nightsister magic sound effects from The Clone Wars and add it to some Exegol moments to convey the feeling that a mysterious power is at work.

Dang it, I wish the Star Wars Soundboard flash game were still up, I’m pretty sure they had some of those sounds.

http://www.starwarsgamesonline.com/game/star-wars-soundboard#

I found the same one that was on starwars.com on here.

jeangreyforever said:

Clavis said:

idir_hh said:

It’s a very ambitious endeavour, and if executed well it could be the perfect ending.
Good luck man!

Thank you! I will start working on it when I get my hands on the 4K Blu-Ray which should arrive on the 20th.

Your ending is definitely the one I wish we had gotten. It’s also the one Pablo Hidalgo said he would have wanted TROS to end with, Ben exiling himself on Ahch-To.

For the ending scene, do you plan on keeping the Force theme? I remember there were rumors that the final scene would feature Ben and Rey and their themes would play together. Since the Force theme already has been used so heavily in final shots of the saga, playing Samuel Kin’s Reylo Love Theme would be a great way to end the saga on an optimistic note.

I do plan on having the Force theme play during the final scene. I may put a twist on it though.

idir_hh said:

It’s a very ambitious endeavour, and if executed well it could be the perfect ending.
Good luck man!

Thank you! I will start working on it when I get my hands on the 4K Blu-Ray which should arrive on the 20th.

idir_hh said:

Clavis said:

Ed Slushie said:

I like the execution of Ben surviving in this version, but what would happen next?

The movie carries on as it did. After the main trio hugs at the celebration, instead of cutting to Tatooine, it cuts to Red Five flying towards the Ahch-To island. Rey walks up the Jedi Steps and into a hut. There she builds her new lightsaber and ignites it. She walks to the same place where she found Luke in TFA. Rey sees Ben watching the Binary Sunset. The ghosts of Luke, Leia, and Anakin watch as Rey and Ben stand together. THE END.

Sounds great but how are you planning to achieve that?

I’m planning on using After Effects to rotoscope the characters. It will take time and effort, but I hope it will be worth it.

Ed Slushie said:

I like the execution of Ben surviving in this version, but what would happen next?

The movie carries on as it did. After the main trio hugs at the celebration, instead of cutting to Tatooine, it cuts to Red Five flying towards the Ahch-To island. Rey walks up the Jedi Steps and into a hut. There she builds her new lightsaber and ignites it. She walks to the same place where she found Luke in TFA. Rey sees Ben watching the Binary Sunset. The ghosts of Luke, Leia, and Anakin watch as Rey and Ben stand together. THE END.

I edited the healing and kiss scene so that Leia gives Ben her life force to heal Rey, meaning that Ben lives. I added the voices of Leia, Luke, Han and Anakin so that the scene would still have an emotional impact.

https://vimeo.com/405054899

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