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#1635017
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Kenobi: Hunt for the Jedi (DATA LOST, TEMPORARILY ON HOLD) - Obi-Wan Kenobi Mini Series Edit
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Mk_9000 said:

LINK TO THE COMPARISON VIDEO:

Please give me feedback. I noticed a few errors in this one, but I’m working at it. as you can tell from the gif above, I put lots of work into these 26 seconds!

https://www.canva.com/design/DAGi2Q1mOFw/iaqMwHeHRr4r3AW3aWX25A/watch

Feedback please!

Peace out, MK 9000

Dude that looks simply amazing, though I did notice a few errors for you to check out…

First, I saw that at the 2nd shot of Vader and his ship, about 10 seconds in, the layered blue flashing light is over Vader’s body as he walks by (its minor, but yeah).

Second (again with vader) when he emerges for the fog with that wide shot of obiwan’s back and him approaching, the mask of him coming put (triangle shape I guess) would look a tad better with increased transparency \ feather. Just a thought

Very impressive, considering you call yourself an amateur, your using cap cut ONLINE without software, and without any premium subscription!

…idea on Acbagels Legends Kenobi thread…

Would love too we an attempt, but what about his mask? Wouldn’t it have been broken off by then? Are you going to try and fix that continuity?

Anywho AMAZING job, MK 9000, this might be my most anticipated edit right now. (And trust me I anticipate A LOT)

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#1634144
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Kenobi: Hunt for the Jedi (DATA LOST, TEMPORARILY ON HOLD) - Obi-Wan Kenobi Mini Series Edit
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Mk_9000 said:

Hey Guys! Drafted a trailer for my edit with some of the changes including:

  • Color-graded scenes to look like evening sun (desert scenes)
  • added binary sunset to a shot of Luke’s house (desert scene)
  • Added new line (not finished, just a draft) of Vader saying You will try (from ROTS) instead of him responding to Obi-Wan with Then you will die
  • A draft of my logo appearing. I am not fully satisfied with the Hunt for the jedi logo outro just yet, since this was just a quick trailer draft, but I am working with a friend of mine to make it 3D with my desited effects.

There are a few things that are not finished that I did not include in the edit that I have edited (and sent updates about) such as

  • the edited Vader vs Obi-Wan finale duel with the blue thunderstorm and new music
  • Removed Jawa cart frame (see earlier updates)
  • Final Outro Logo for Hunt for the Jedi

Sources I used to get inspiration, clips, and audio for the trailer:

  • Disney+ official Teaser Trailer for Obi-Wan Kenobi
  • The Kai Patterson Cut Trailer (I used his own added shot of a stormtrooper standing in front of a fire in the trailer, and I plan to use it in the actual edit)
  • A fan-made trailer from YouTube made by AD_Edits (I used audio from his trailer to extract the lines that the character say.
  • I used a track from SoundCloud called Star Wars: Battle of the Heroes | Battlefront 2 Trailer Music Style by Venator-class Star Destroyer for the backing track.

Here is the link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1NYLAxmFrSKUV5PU4itoNt92xucQRxGmU/view?usp=drive_link

Please let me know your thoughts!
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https://mk9000edits.wordpress.com/

Peace out!

-Mk 9000

This looks purdy interesting, I’ll say. The trailer is pretty good.

I noticed the Darth Vader saying YOU WILL TRY. I’m assuming it was just Anakin’s line re-synthesized with a Darth Vader voicemod or something. It doesn’t sound horrible, it just sound unatural and too much like Anakin, not James Earl Jones, in my opinion. Have you tried any AI tts engines with a Vader voice for the actual scene?

I like the prequel parallels you added, the nostalgia is always a great touch. The music is pretty good too.

Count me interested. This is definitely something new while I impatiently await pixel joker to (sorry) hurry the hell up. (Jk kinda)

Also, is this edit cutting out Haja Estree? I noticed in your changelist, you mentioned a couple base edits that cut out Haja. Please dont. He is the best.

Anyway, good luck on the editing!