Who was it that did the little purple/blue flash in the saber? Is that available to grab?
I want to say it was Burbin…? I could be totally off.
Hal 9000 said:
Also, sherlockpotter, did you stitch the very end of the “I am all the Sith” shot onto the end of “no match for the power in me”? If so, bravo, because I can’t tell unless I’m reverse engineering it. lol
All credit where it’s due: sade1212 is the one who did the incredible work restructuring Palp’s dialogue; I just stapled my line onto the end.
On that note, how do people think this version sounds? Like Hal said before, this line especially has to be pretty much perfect: https://streamable.com/mdw8w1
Oh, and I also nudged the timing of, and added a wee little exhale after, Rey’s “I…” to fill in the gap a bit (from removing “And-”), but that can go if people don’t like it.
In the interest of making the changes to the finale as perfect as possible, I just want to double check if anyone has any issues with the demo I shared here? If no one mentions anything, I’ll assume it’s good enough and I’ll send the audio to Hal.
Just want to make sure people had the chance to see this and weigh in with any potential criticisms, given how quickly this thread moves!
Is there any other source of “am” that we could use in there? I’ve been trying to figure out what the issue I have with it is, and I’ve finally realised it’s that I hear it as “I… I’m a Jedi,” which feels weird. Unless I’m the only one who hears that, I think it’s worth trying to replace that syllable so it’s clear that it’s “I… am a Jedi.”
sade and I were both struggling to come up with a good source of “am” that sounded natural in the sequence. The cleanest solution I found was to trim some of the “th” sound off of “the Jedi.” Sade, did you come up with anything different?
I think, between sade’s version and mine, we each timed Rey’s “I” a little differently, and I added an extra pant to try and smooth over the gap a bit more. And then for “am a Jedi,” I think sade faded a little more out of the “a,” whereas I tried to leave a little more in.
It really just comes down to which version - and the microscopic variations therein - people think sounds better, which is why I wanted to get one more vote on it. sade definitely did a fantastic job with it; I think it’s honestly really nice that we came up with different options from which to choose!