Well, here’s a new pass of the Ochi ship!
I stripped out the audio to focus just on the visual for the moment. I rescaled every part of the shot, tweaked the ship and rotation, added some sand blowing texture to integrate the elements, and removed the hyperspace jump to see how that felt. I could also consider reversing the direction of the movement so Kylo is moving the other way.
I would love honest feedback! Generally, I’m wondering how close this is to being usable? I’m happy to keep going, but not sure how much further it can get!