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The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant — Page 107

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So, when / if English subtitles for this edit comes out, or any subtitles, I d be glad to conTribute and do a Polish and/or Spanish translation 😉

Just a random thought:
Why dont we do some movie premiere watching together when the fanedit comes out via some streaming with chat? 😀

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I’m just running through the whole movie again and just noticed there’s a prop change just before the Death star Duel.

When Rey says “Give it to me!” And it cuts to Kylo, the wayfinder seems much bigger than the next scene where he crushes it.

Has anyone else noticed this or an I just being too picky?

I’ve tried to edit it out but there’s not enough footage between shots.

Check out - http://www.youtube.com/moviesremastered

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Knight of Kalee said:

kewlfish said:

Yeah lol, I was just watching a video on youtube and that scene came on and I thought maybe… but nope, it definitely doesn’t work.

I don’t get if your talking about the supposed dickhead line or the Mustafar structure idea XD

I was talking about the Mustafar structure lol… I’ve never heard of the dickhead line before will have to check it out

Clips - for Editors folder -https://drive.google.com/open?id=1mfEISVdMldOKuSNjcjYO2QSggvqI_7-Y

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https://vocaroo.com/kgwcZdc8MYl

I did a purely audio-based proof of concept for playing with and cleaning up the ‘More than a Clone, Less than a Man’ line from Ian. I can send y’all the raw files without music behind them if you want!

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omnimuffin said:

https://vocaroo.com/kgwcZdc8MYl

I did a purely audio-based proof of concept for playing with and cleaning up the ‘More than a Clone, Less than a Man’ line from Ian. I can send y’all the raw files without music behind them if you want!

Nice work! Now we just need to find a line or someone who can impersonate Adam Driver’s voice to replace that really, really badly dubbed line where his arm is in front of his face

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=shYsuOWp8Es - timestamp 1:35… smh

Clips - for Editors folder -https://drive.google.com/open?id=1mfEISVdMldOKuSNjcjYO2QSggvqI_7-Y

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kewlfish said:

omnimuffin said:

https://vocaroo.com/kgwcZdc8MYl

I did a purely audio-based proof of concept for playing with and cleaning up the ‘More than a Clone, Less than a Man’ line from Ian. I can send y’all the raw files without music behind them if you want!

Nice work! Now we just need to find a line or someone who can impersonate Adam Driver’s voice to replace that really, really badly dubbed line where his arm is in front of his face

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=shYsuOWp8Es - timestamp 1:35… smh

I’m not sure that’s bad dubbing, that’s just how Adam Driver sounds, lol. He’s a weird-sounding dude.

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omnimuffin said:

kewlfish said:

omnimuffin said:

https://vocaroo.com/kgwcZdc8MYl

I did a purely audio-based proof of concept for playing with and cleaning up the ‘More than a Clone, Less than a Man’ line from Ian. I can send y’all the raw files without music behind them if you want!

Nice work! Now we just need to find a line or someone who can impersonate Adam Driver’s voice to replace that really, really badly dubbed line where his arm is in front of his face

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=shYsuOWp8Es - timestamp 1:35… smh

I’m not sure that’s bad dubbing, that’s just how Adam Driver sounds, lol. He’s a weird-sounding dude.

Maybe it’s just that his mouth is covered or something… that delivery just sounds really… strange. I just assumed it’s dubbed because his arm was in front of his mouth lol

Clips - for Editors folder -https://drive.google.com/open?id=1mfEISVdMldOKuSNjcjYO2QSggvqI_7-Y

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kewlfish said:

omnimuffin said:

https://vocaroo.com/kgwcZdc8MYl

I did a purely audio-based proof of concept for playing with and cleaning up the ‘More than a Clone, Less than a Man’ line from Ian. I can send y’all the raw files without music behind them if you want!

Nice work! Now we just need to find a line or someone who can impersonate Adam Driver’s voice to replace that really, really badly dubbed line where his arm is in front of his face

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=shYsuOWp8Es - timestamp 1:35… smh

If you watch closely most of the dialogue is delivered off camera or while peoples backs are turned. It’s not just Leia. It’s weird!

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“Rey palpatine” was definately an after-thought. Her reaction in the film just doesn’t match.

Peace is a lie
There is only passion…

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Had a few minutes of free time, thinking back about removing the “early Chewy reveal” which Dominic came up on his thread of ideas by removing that scene and replacing it with Kylo and Palp’s conversation a little later. It totally works.

This is SUPER rough and just to see how it can work. just need to tweak the music a bit and use some TIE sound clips to replace the original ones since their sound gets mixed with Hux’s voice a little bit at the end. Totally doable if one sits and play around with it.

https://vimeo.com/421187246
fanedit

(Internet has been random so if it doesn’t play, just wait for the transcode to complete)

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Yeah it works really well. I’ve got it patched up and “final” in my timeline. I can always go over again and try to improve the audio, but it’s in there ready to go. The weakest point is removing the music from the transition into Chewie being seen, replacing the blast door sound effect and fading into the scene’s audio.

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idir_hh said:

“Rey palpatine” was definately an after-thought. Her reaction in the film just doesn’t match.

Why would it be in leaks as old as a YEAR, though? That’s a pretty early afterthought.

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I’d believe it was done in reshoots, similarly to Anakin’s change in motivation toward the dark side in ROTS. In that one it was pretty easy to tell almost shot by shot whether you were looking at reshot material or not.

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idir_hh said:

The leaks came out 3 months before the release, just after the reshoots
https://www.reddit.com/r/StarWarsLeaks/comments/d5i0ye/the_basic_plot_of_the_rise_of_skywalker_updated/

That’s when that version of the leaks came out. A good chunk of the information in it was leaked long, long before then. As somebody who obsessively checked leaks on the movie, ‘Rey Palpatine’ came out in what later turned out to be credible leaks LONG before the JediPaxis leaks.

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I was pretty active on the leaks sub as well, I don’t think I remember any substantial leaks of that kind before Paxis came on to the scene. It could have been MSW but I’m not sure, could you provide a link?

Peace is a lie
There is only passion…

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I know many are in favor of holding back Palps for as long as possible, which I heartily agree with. I have wondered if anyone has attempted to keep his face out of frame and/or in silhouette for his first encounter with Kylo? I mean I know we already know what he looks like, but not in this film. Just in keeping with the idea of a slower unveiling?

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I don’t think that Rey Palpatine itself was a reshoot addition, but many of the details about it were changed in reshoots.

TPM ROTJ ESB TFA TLJ TROS ROTS ANH SOLO RO ATOC

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phineasbg said:

I know many are in favor of holding back Palps for as long as possible, which I heartily agree with. I have wondered if anyone has attempted to keep his face out of frame and/or in silhouette for his first encounter with Kylo? I mean I know we already know what he looks like, but not in this film. Just in keeping with the idea of a slower unveiling?

I had an idea a while back where the opening sequence ends when Kylo finds the Wayfinder, then we continue as normal. Cut after Rey’s training sequence, and pick up with Kylo flying through space. End the Exagol sequence when we hear Palpatine say “I have died before.” Then use his conversation with Kylo as voiceover for other scenes. That way we don’t see his face until Rey confronts him.

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Here is another take on the crawl based off of Hal’s most recent draft. The Kimji scenes make it seem like the galaxy has no hope. Poe’s rally speech makes it seem like this is the one chance for everyone to band together. So why make it seem like they have already done so in the crawl? It makes Lando’s arrival have more impact later.


EPISODE IX
THE RISE OF SKYWALKER

Countless systems have been enslaved
by the dreaded FIRST ORDER. Fear is
everywhere, hope is fading.

General Leia Organa, troubled by
visions of an unseen threat, has
dispatched her brave agents to
investigate. While Rey, the last hope
of the JEDI, continues her training.

Meanwhile, Supreme Leader Kylo Ren
scours the galaxy, chasing whispers
of a hidden power that would allow
him to destroy any challenge
to his rule…

The Skywalker Saga Viewing Order:
I: C.O.D. | II: T.A.S. | III: L.O.E.
IV: Revisited | V: Revisited | VI: Revisited
VII: Restructured | VIII: Rekindled | IX: Ascendant

This is the way.

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DZ-330 said:

Here is another take on the crawl based off of Hal’s most recent draft. The Kimji scenes make it seem like the galaxy has no hope. Poe’s rally speech makes it seem like this is the one chance for everyone to band together. So why make it seem like they have already done so in the crawl? It makes Lando’s arrival have more impact later.


EPISODE IX
THE RISE OF SKYWALKER

Countless systems have been enslaved
by the dreaded FIRST ORDER. Fear is
everywhere, hope is fading.

General Leia Organa, troubled by
visions of an unseen threat, has
dispatched her brave agents to
investigate. While Rey, the last hope
of the JEDI, continues her training.

Meanwhile, Supreme Leader Kylo Ren
scours the galaxy, chasing whispers
of a hidden power that would allow
him to destroy any challenge
to his rule…

I agree with your assessment and like the new crawl you came up with. There needs to be a sense of dread and the audience needs to think the the deck is stacked against the resistance. Also it helps explain why no help came for Leia and the dwindling forces on Crait.

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jarbear said:

Had a few minutes of free time, thinking back about removing the “early Chewy reveal” which Dominic came up on his thread of ideas by removing that scene and replacing it with Kylo and Palp’s conversation a little later. It totally works.

This is SUPER rough and just to see how it can work. just need to tweak the music a bit and use some TIE sound clips to replace the original ones since their sound gets mixed with Hux’s voice a little bit at the end. Totally doable if one sits and play around with it.

https://vimeo.com/421187246
fanedit

(Internet has been random so if it doesn’t play, just wait for the transcode to complete)

There is no video feed playing.

Noah Lawson

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I updated the shuttle shot to add a little bit of damage/wear! I agree with smpearce that it would help sell the model a little more:

Shuttle Tie Replacement
pw: fanedit

Also, here’s the falcon going into hyperspace with the ties removed:

Falcon Hyperspace - Ties Removed
pw: fanedit

Skenera did a great job extending the shot, but now the the ties are gone you may not need that extra time.

Also also, for the Mustafar establishing shots, if we come up with a sequence that Hal is happy with, adding 1-2 shots, I can probably add the ties to whichever shots are chosen. Rather than mock-up so many different shots with ties though, I was thinking to wait until a sequence is cut that everyone’s on board with. The only shot that would be of questionable difficulty is the first RO shot going through the clouds, but if that cuts well with the others leading to Kylo on the ground we can try to make that work!

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poppasketti said:

Also, here’s the falcon going into hyperspace with the ties removed:

Falcon Hyperspace - Ties Removed
pw: fanedit

Skenera did a great job extending the shot, but now the the ties are gone you may not need that extra time.

That’s pretty great! Now it can look like the falcon is on fire and dinged up from crashing through the wall

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nl0428 said:

jarbear said:

Had a few minutes of free time, thinking back about removing the “early Chewy reveal” which Dominic came up on his thread of ideas by removing that scene and replacing it with Kylo and Palp’s conversation a little later. It totally works.

This is SUPER rough and just to see how it can work. just need to tweak the music a bit and use some TIE sound clips to replace the original ones since their sound gets mixed with Hux’s voice a little bit at the end. Totally doable if one sits and play around with it.

https://vimeo.com/421187246
fanedit

(Internet has been random so if it doesn’t play, just wait for the transcode to complete)

There is no video feed playing.

Yeah, that’s weird!

Here’s a new one:

https://vimeo.com/421270640
fanedit

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