I trying to make a more faster pace 3 in 1 edit with some major changes.
Quigon and Obiwan dont go to tatooine to repair the ship but to look for of the missing jedi master sifo dyas.
We get a mention of him in attack of the clones but i think introducing the clone project with Palpatine plan earlier would have been better.
Heres Plapatine ordering Maul to head to tatooine to kill Sifo Dyas.
Another scene is Anakin rank of jedi master. In the rots novel Anakin reason goes beyond of just feeling hes earned the title and the council doesn’t respect him. He wants to become a master and council member because they are allowed access to enter the holocron vault that contains ancient knowledge of past jedi. He believed there might have been something in the holocrons that could have helped him save Padame. So that was another wedge with the council members and another step closer to Palpatine.
I tried to convey that with a dream sequence before the jedi master scene of Yoda talking about how jedi of the past had ability to see visions of the future and how very few jedi have that ability now. cuts to Jacosta Nu (Clone wars dubbed) talking about the holocron vault cuts to Anakin getting put on the council from Palpatine cut to Padme dying cut to the jedi council scene where they deny him mastery.
These are some rough sketches so far.