I like it but it does feel rushed.
If a scene doesn’t work, it’s better not to have it at all.
I’d drop the suitcase packing scene for example. Much better Anakin and Padme scenes latter on in the movie.
The less Anakin talks, the better and more in character. Vader doesn’t talk that much 😉
Here’s something I’m playing with.
Anakin crying when he decides to help his mother:
Anakin’s mother is already dead:
Just playing around and sharing ideas 😃