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Erikstormtrooper said:

Here's an idea I had regarding his quick turn (but not relating directly to the "reason"). It seems to me that when he confronts Palpatine and discovers he's the Sith, he's almost ready to kill him, but he changes his mind so quickly later. Instead, as per George's original plan, edit the scene in Palpatine's hallway so that Anakin seems conflicted by Palpatine's admission. He ignites his saber breifly, but after some prattle from Palps (insert "reason" here), he turns off his saber, and Palpatine smiles. Scene ends. (Anakin never alerts Mace. The Jedi already suspect Palpatine will not turn over power. I think there's a deleted scene that may be useful here). When Mace shows up, Anakin is nowhere to be seen. But he's actually sulking conflictedly in the shadows (maybe footage from the council chamber scene could be darkened and rotoscoped). While the duel continues, Anakin experiences his true turn: an emotional crescendo where we hear in his mind waves of overlapping voices (Qui Gon: "He is the chose one", Palps: "I see you becoming the greatest of all the Jedi", etc etc.). The voices continue and jumble up, getting louder and becoming unbearable (the right music could really sell this). Just as the voices reach a peak and crash into silence, Palps seems to be beaten. Anakin, now turned, suddenly steps out to quietly dismember Mace. After the electrified Mace flies out the window, the kneeling Anakin simply says "I will do whatever you ask, my master."

And that's my 1 cent.

THAT would be incredible.  Your 1 cent has turned to 5.

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doubleofive said:
Erikstormtrooper said:

Here's an idea I had regarding his quick turn (but not relating directly to the "reason"). It seems to me that when he confronts Palpatine and discovers he's the Sith, he's almost ready to kill him, but he changes his mind so quickly later. Instead, as per George's original plan, edit the scene in Palpatine's hallway so that Anakin seems conflicted by Palpatine's admission. He ignites his saber breifly, but after some prattle from Palps (insert "reason" here), he turns off his saber, and Palpatine smiles. Scene ends. (Anakin never alerts Mace. The Jedi already suspect Palpatine will not turn over power. I think there's a deleted scene that may be useful here). When Mace shows up, Anakin is nowhere to be seen. But he's actually sulking conflictedly in the shadows (maybe footage from the council chamber scene could be darkened and rotoscoped). While the duel continues, Anakin experiences his true turn: an emotional crescendo where we hear in his mind waves of overlapping voices (Qui Gon: "He is the chose one", Palps: "I see you becoming the greatest of all the Jedi", etc etc.). The voices continue and jumble up, getting louder and becoming unbearable (the right music could really sell this). Just as the voices reach a peak and crash into silence, Palps seems to be beaten. Anakin, now turned, suddenly steps out to quietly dismember Mace. After the electrified Mace flies out the window, the kneeling Anakin simply says "I will do whatever you ask, my master."

And that's my 1 cent.

THAT would be incredible.  Your 1 cent has turned to 5.

I agree, it would be amazing if someone could make an edit like this.

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that does sound alot better, and it doesnt seem impossible either!

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Erik, are you in film?  Because THAT is the kindof thing that screams professional.  It would work wit hthe rest of the movie, too!

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doubleofive said:

THAT would be incredible.  Your 1 cent has turned to 5.

Thanks! I'm gonna buy me a piece of gum. 

bkev said:

Erik, are you in film?  Because THAT is the kindof thing that screams professional.  It would work wit hthe rest of the movie, too!

Nope. I'm just a guy with an active imagintation and a total lack of video editing skills. But thanks for thinking that I might be :)

As with all of my ideas I post here, anyone is free to rip them off for use in their own edits.

You know of the rebellion against the Empire?

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Wow, THAT worths at least two cents Erik! ;)

And I think it can technicaly be done, it's not too "over the top" like most ideas (including mine) in this thread.

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Yeah, that is the best way to go by far! Although I did always like it how anakin said "What have I done?!" After Mace dies. It somewhat gives the idea that he could possibly be turned back to the light side before the end. (For first time Star Wars viewers that is.)

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adywan said:

The thing with all this new canon crap being introduced is that it is pushing the OT further out of the loop. As i have said many times anything outside of the 6 movies does not count to me as being canon. The PT needs to be radically changed to fit in with the OT and not the other way around & that is what i want to accomplish. The "Revisited" saga has nothing to do with any of the spin-offs and never will do. The Clone wars tv series also messes with what we know in the PT so why it is deemed as canon is beyond me. Anakin shouldn't be able to have a Padawan as he isn't yet a master and is still a Padawan himself. Star Wars is becoming a total mess and has done ever since the PT came out. If we are supposed to make the movies to fit in with what the spin-offs include then we have to make the Ewoks speak and revisions to the movies could never end. GL wrote the Ewok films and that makes them canon if we are saying that any star wars stuff GL has a hand in is cannon. Just because he says the series is canon really doesn't mean much any more. He seems to have lost all reasoning as to what the star wars saga is all about and adds anything in without actually thinking if it would mess with something that is already mentioned or is featured in the movies. Also having a video game become canon is damn ridiculous. It seems anything with the star wars name on it now is suddenly canon. The OT came first so everything should be made to fit around those movies. Then everything that followed the PT should also be made to fit those but it doesn't. That is why the only canon that will exist for Revisited is the movies.

And yet again onto Anakin burning then if you're going to say i take a longer look at medical science then maybe you should too because if we are sticking to medical science then Obi-Wan & Anakin would have died long before the battle ended and would ahve both burned to a crisp. Do you know how hot volcanic lava is? The air would be full of poisonous gasses so when outside the structures shields they would have died very quickly. And as i said Anakin is lying face down close and the flames aren't severe around his face so the fire argument doe not work. Smoke inhalation is the biggest factor in any lung damage in a fire. Read about that guy in the link i posted . he was completely on fire, in an enclosed space and he survived without major lung damage. Anakin was on fire for a few seconds. His transformation was very poorly executed. the original explanation having Anakin falling into a lava pit would have made more sense as the lava would have severely burned away most of his body and his lungs & internal organs would have been severely damaged. All we got was a few limbs missing and a bad burn. Also if you listen to Anakin when they are operating on him at the end he is screaming out . So no lung damage. Another thing they screwed up in the PT. That alone proves that there was not enough lung damage, if any at all, to warrant a life support suit. Case closed. lol

No hostility intended here but you do seem to want it both ways (and why not? The prequel trilogy revisited edits will be yours after all but...) your objection to Vader's need for mechanical breathing assistance stemming from his being baked to near death on a volcanic planet comes from your personel feel of what is scientifically accurate but you admit that Obi Wan would be just as screwed by the heat and poisoned vapours too.

As I said some pages back Star Wars isn't Science Fiction it's Science Fantasy, the story has to obey the rules of the fantasy realm it exists in but it doesn't have to obey the laws of real science (if it did the sound in space thing would be a bit hard to get around).

In the fantasy realm of Star Wars having Force powers increases stamina, allows one to manipulate gravity and electricity and heal quicker which could explain why Obi-Wan and Darth don't burst into flame being so close to the seering heat of Volcanic lava (if you went for Vader tumbling into lava he would vapourise before he hit the surface in the real world) and how Vader managed to survive as long as he did before being put into his suit.

If Jedi and Sith can distort gravity with their powers they could bend the heat away from their bodies just as easierly, perhaps having his remaining limbs hacked off was enough of a destraction for Vader to lose his grip on the Force heat bending thing to add heat injury to all the other nastyness but it seems a tad silly to say it's not enough scientifically for Vader to need his iron lung going by the damage he recieved at the end of ROTS when scientifically much of Star Wars wouldn't work including almost all of that duel.

One aspect that I thought was really crap was the way Palpatine dangles the carrot of saving Padme at Anakin but when he finally turns Palpatine claims to not really have that power after all. That should go as it weakens Palpatine's hand, Vader has to obey Palpatine because he wants that secret.

Instead of the dreaded "Not Want!" at the revelation that Padme is dead Vader should try to kill Palpatine as he no longer has any use for him, only to have Palpatine use the Force to fiddle with his suit and disable him.

That way the suit isn't just a life support, it's a cage.

If Vader displeases his master he can shut it and him down which explains why his suit fails so quickly after he throws the Emperor to his death in ROTJ.

 

 

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Instead of the dreaded "Not Want!" at the revelation that Padme is dead Vader should try to kill Palpatine as he no longer has any use for him, only to have Palpatine use the Force to fiddle with his suit and disable him.

Yes, the guilt that Vader feels at that moment should turn into anger against his "master" in the minute. What I think that could be done is that during the transformation of Anakin into Vader the Emperor could twist the mind of Vader so he don't feel regrets or remorse anymore and all he can do is to obey. That would make his return to good in the OT  even more powerful because we know he struggles against the mind manipulation of the Emperor. Just an idea.

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i like the cage idea, ive never thought of it like that

i must obey my master

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Take the shot of Anakin on the operation table when he has the eyes wide open, add some technical things plugged into his head, then cut to the Emperor smilling (from a later shot), then the Mask go down and Vader rise. End of the transformation.

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theres a poster that i have seen somewhere, i think it may even be fan art. it depicts the emperor almost blessing a kneeling vader, by placing his helmet on his head. it almost looks medieval.

i would have loved to have seen vader revealed this way.

 

maybe vader limps off the table without his helmet, looking uncomforatble with his face weezing, he then drops to his knees, slowly rising from weakness to submission. the emperor then approaches the newly created monster, and lowers the helmet onto his head, knighting him. maybe this could be the point where he announces him as darth vader.

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Bingowings said:

As I said some pages back Star Wars isn't Science Fiction it's Science Fantasy, the story has to obey the rules of the fantasy realm it exists in but it doesn't have to obey the laws of real science (if it did the sound in space thing would be a bit hard to get around).

 

That's a bit silly, unless you intend to argue that the Star Wars characters are able to hear John Williams' score.

 

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Bingowings said:

As I said some pages back Star Wars isn't Science Fiction it's Science Fantasy, the story has to obey the rules of the fantasy realm it exists in but it doesn't have to obey the laws of real science (if it did the sound in space thing would be a bit hard to get around).

That's a bit silly, unless you intend to argue that the Star Wars characters are able to hear John Williams' score.

WHAT? ... You mean they can't hear the music? Hmmm....so that's why they don't know something bad is happening until it's too late!

 

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Davnes007 said:
Akwat Kbrana said:
Bingowings said:

As I said some pages back Star Wars isn't Science Fiction it's Science Fantasy, the story has to obey the rules of the fantasy realm it exists in but it doesn't have to obey the laws of real science (if it did the sound in space thing would be a bit hard to get around).

That's a bit silly, unless you intend to argue that the Star Wars characters are able to hear John Williams' score.

WHAT? ... You mean they can't hear the music? Hmmm....so that's why they don't know something bad is happening until it's too late!

 

IMPERIAL COMMANDER: "Lord Vader, we can't board the Rebel ship yet, The LSO haven't started up the Imperial March."

DARTH VADER: "Williams, just play that boring Imperial Motif, the Sith have no need for grand entrances."

JOHN WILLIAMS: "Tell that to the designer of that enormous white triangle you guys came in on."

FAN NERD: "It's not white it's very light grey."

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IMPERIAL COMMANDER: "Lord Vader, we can't board the Rebel ship yet, The LSO haven't started up the Imperial March."

DARTH VADER: "Williams, just play that boring Imperial Motif, the Sith have no need for grand entrances."

JOHN WILLIAMS: "Tell that to the designer of that enormous white triangle you guys came in on."

FAN NERD: "It's not white it's very light grey."

FAN EDITOR: "Not when I'm through with it."

THAT is funny!

I'd like to see a better love story in AOTC. Here's a rough version I made that I think works pretty well...

http://rapidshare.com/files/183848266/LoveStory_01.avi.html

I wanted to make it so Padme falls for Anakin more easily and naturally. First, I cut the politics. Everyone else tends to leave this in their edit. Not sure why. I never got the impression that Vader cared much about politics. I never really liked these "flashes" of the darkside in AOTC anyway. I cut the dinner scene. Anakin saying "grumpy" is terrible. I tried to get to the meat of the confession scene where Anakin declares his love for Padme and cut all of the cringe inducing dialogue along the way.

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SomethingStarWarsRelated said:

IMPERIAL COMMANDER: "Lord Vader, we can't board the Rebel ship yet, The LSO haven't started up the Imperial March."

DARTH VADER: "Williams, just play that boring Imperial Motif, the Sith have no need for grand entrances."

JOHN WILLIAMS: "Tell that to the designer of that enormous white triangle you guys came in on."

FAN NERD: "It's not white it's very light grey."

FAN EDITOR: "Not when I'm through with it."

THAT is funny!

I'd like to see a better love story in AOTC. Here's a rough version I made that I think works pretty well...

http://rapidshare.com/files/183848266/LoveStory_01.avi.html

I wanted to make it so Padme falls for Anakin more easily and naturally. First, I cut the politics. Everyone else tends to leave this in their edit. Not sure why. I never got the impression that Vader cared much about politics. I never really liked these "flashes" of the darkside in AOTC anyway. I cut the dinner scene. Anakin saying "grumpy" is terrible. I tried to get to the meat of the confession scene where Anakin declares his love for Padme and cut all of the cringe inducing dialogue along the way.

quite good. Your edit of the kiss is very similar to the Phantom editor's

 

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SomethingStarWarsRelated said:

IMPERIAL COMMANDER: "Lord Vader, we can't board the Rebel ship yet, The LSO haven't started up the Imperial March."

DARTH VADER: "Williams, just play that boring Imperial Motif, the Sith have no need for grand entrances."

JOHN WILLIAMS: "Tell that to the designer of that enormous white triangle you guys came in on."

FAN NERD: "It's not white it's very light grey."

FAN EDITOR: "Not when I'm through with it."

THAT is funny!

I'd like to see a better love story in AOTC. Here's a rough version I made that I think works pretty well...

http://rapidshare.com/files/183848266/LoveStory_01.avi.html

I wanted to make it so Padme falls for Anakin more easily and naturally. First, I cut the politics. Everyone else tends to leave this in their edit. Not sure why. I never got the impression that Vader cared much about politics. I never really liked these "flashes" of the darkside in AOTC anyway. I cut the dinner scene. Anakin saying "grumpy" is terrible. I tried to get to the meat of the confession scene where Anakin declares his love for Padme and cut all of the cringe inducing dialogue along the way.

Vader certainly does care about politics, he goes to great pains to avoid any embarrasment for the Emperor in the Senate when Leia's ship is captured in ANH (remember the politics of the Empire are a lot more simple than in the Republic and Anakin's comments foreshadow this).

 

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For Episode III, the duel between Anakin and Count Dooku, I like the idea of what this guy did. At the end, when anakin cuts off Dooku's hands, he instantly cuts off his head without thinking. Check it: http://youtube.com/watch?v=V6_dxW4NpDU

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darthmunky said:

For Episode III, the duel between Anakin and Count Dooku, I like the idea of what this guy did. At the end, when anakin cuts off Dooku's hands, he instantly cuts off his head without thinking. Check it: http://youtube.com/watch?v=V6_dxW4NpDU

 

I don't like that. I think it's important to show the conflict in him.

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I don't like that. I think it's important to show the conflict in him.

Well I understand, but I think there's enough scenes to show the conflict (the few lines that follow that scene for exemple). It is also important to show a darker side of Anakin. Once Obi-Wan is not there, he is not afraid to let his anger free. By the time of episode 3 we can assume that Palpatine already have a strong influence on him.

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TMBTM said:

I don't like that. I think it's important to show the conflict in him.

Well I understand, but I think there's enough scenes to show the conflict (the few lines that follow that scene for exemple). It is also important to show a darker side of Anakin. Once Obi-Wan is not there, he is not afraid to let his anger free. By the time of episode 3 we can assume that Palpatine already have a strong influence on him.

I agree with cutting "I shouldn't" but not the long pause and the manipulation by Palps. That's a great scene. In the edit I'm working on I cut "I shoudn't" but not the rest of that scene.

 

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One idea that popped into my mind over my cornflakes is...remember when the Clone Wars were first mentioned in ANH?

It was a lovely little throwaway line which expanded the canvas of the story back and gave the saga more depth, the prequels don't have much of that, a few more lines (perhaps by alien senators or Jedi which could be added via subtitles as in the MagnoliaFan edits) could flesh out the Sith/Jedi conflict or the Naboo/Trade Federation dispute.

And it's Clone Wars isn't it? Not The Clone War.

The Naboo crisis doesn't involve the Clonetroopers (officially they hadn't been invented yet) it might be fun if the Gungans/Naboo were helped by a mysterious uninvited, shadowy third party, a reveal in Episode 2 could expose the secret that the Clonetrooper concept was being tested even back then ( a small team lead by Fett could be aiding the Naboo from behind the scenes with their knowledge... they do seem to get into that palace a little too easy for my liking).

The order for the production of the Clone army came around the same time as Naboo crisis so it would make sense that Sidious would want to test both sets of his troops for the more major seperatist war and the rise of the Empire.

The added mystery would counter some of the silly antics of the Gungans (even after the worst of them have been trimmed out).

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That could work, i was thinking ages ago that someone could re-edit the naboo conflict to perhaps be something to do with the clone wars. alot of wars begin as something else, then develop. WWII for instance started along time before the UK and US got involved.

 

but i like your idea of there efectively being a Clone Wars I and Clone Wars II perhaps. In the pre-prequel days i always imagined the clones were mandalorians who were the antagonists.

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The way the Clone Wars turned out they should have been called the Clone/Droid/Seperatist Wars.