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The Matrix Squared (Released)

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Yeah yeah, I know, yet another Matrix edit. And yet another edit by me, Spence. This one I’ve been working on since I started editing, and whenever I get sick of or frustrated by my other edits I went back to it. Well, after finishing Alexander, I’ve had time to work on this a bit more, and I have just finished my first rough cut.

The Matrix Squared turns Reloaded and Revolutions into one film, a little like DeZIONized. However, I liked a good portion of the Zion sequences so I kept a lot of it. This edit is basically how I want to see the Matrix films, I removed almost every subplot that I did not like or felt was unnecessary, simplified the story a bit, trimmed a lot of fatty sequences. I’m very pleased with the results.
Here’s a list of the current changes:

  • The film opens now with a shortened version of Final Flight of the Osiris from the Animatrix. It’s a cool little 4 minute pre-credits sequence that gets the film off on a good action beat.
  • Neo’s dream of Trinity is a lot shorter and a lot more nightmare-ish.
  • Many scenes from the Enter the Matrix video game have been added back in. These strenghten the character of Niobe and the crew of the Hammer, making them feel present through the entire film, not just the portion from Revolutions. Also, Niobe doesn’t have a thing with Locke.
  • Neo’s fight with the Agents is gone.
  • Zion is there, like i said, but heavily, heavily edited. Morpheus’ speech is gone. The Rave is gone. Neo and the Counselor’s endless babble of a scene is gone.
  • No Seraph. At all.
  • There’s no crappy half-handed explanation as to why the Oracle looks different. The actress died, she was replaced. We can deal with it.
  • Burly Brawl is shortened, with some of the more horrible CGI shots removed.
  • Merovingian sequence is shorter.
  • The Architect is heavily edited. Similair to the Matrix Hacked, there are no previous versions of The Matrix and no previous One’s. Neo is the only One.
  • Trinity doesn’t get shot, so she doesn’t die and come back to life. He catches her, then it cuts to the ship.
  • Neo does not collapse. No Trainman, no 2nd Merovingian scene, no Club Hel. Bane is also not in a coma. First time we see him on the ship he is being interviewed by the crew of the Hammer.
  • A lot of scenes have been re-arranged for pacing purposes.
  • The battle of Zion is shorter, no Kid and no infantry, the battle is completely centered on the APU’s. The subplot of the gate not opening is gone. The sequence is now a ten minute intense action scene that cuts between Niobe piloting to Zion and the Zion battle. I’m very happy with this segment.
  • Trinity’s death is shortened. Now that it isn’t as ridiculously long, it’s a lot more heartbreaking.
  • I have replaced the cheese filled ending with Seraph, the Oracle, and Sati with something new. It’s a montage of scenes from all 3 films set to Neo’s speech from the end of Matrix 1. It’s pretty cool and I feel it’s a more fitting way to end the series.

All in all, it’s turning out great. The current length is 2 hrs. 44 min., though that includes 10 minutes of end credits. Considering the films were over 2 hrs. each, that’s quite a good length. However, I would like to get another five minutes of so out of it.

I’m going to work on finishing this one up quickly. Thanks to everyone who has watched my other edits.

I'm always looking to trade my edits, if you don't want to get them from a torrent. PM or e-mail!
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this sound brilliant! Can't wait to see it. I was SOOOOO dissapointed with Revoultions. I liked Reloaded a lot though.....


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Sounds good. But I still haven't wathced Dezionized yet.
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I'VE ALWAYS FELT THAT REVOLUTIONS SHOULD HAVE ENDED WITH THOMAS ANDERSON ASLEEP IN FRONT OF THE COMPUTER WITH THE TEXT WAKE UP, NEO WITH A SHOT OF HIM WAKING UP. THEN THE END CREDITS ROLL. DID IT ALL REALLY HAPPEN, OR WAS IT ALL A DREAM ??? TO ME IT MAKES PERFECT SENSE TO END IT THAT WAY. THE AUDIENCE HAS TO THEN FIGURE OUT WHAT IS REAL, AND WHAT ISN'T. IT FALLS INTO THE WHOLE PHILOSOPHY THAT THE BROTHERS WERE TRYING TO GET ACROSS. IT ALSO REINFORCES THE "SEVEN VERSIONS OF THE MATRIX" EXPLAINED BY THE ARCHITECT. ALSO, IT MAKES IT WHERE NEO HAS ALWAYS BEEN "THE ONE" AS WE GO INTO YET ANOTHER VERSION OF THE MATRIX WHERE EVERYBODY IS NOW FREE.

"I'VE GROWN TIRED OF ASKING, SO THIS WILL BE THE LAST TIME..."
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Sounds awesome. PSYChO_DAYV's ending sounds pretty cool.
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Psycho_Davy your ending sounds awesome, It just wouldn't really fit with my edit, but I'm sure you could do a cool version of it like that.

DVD-r versions of all of my stuff other than Pirates is up on Demonoid. Pirates has just been a pain in the ass to get onto a dvd properly for some reason or another. Wasted 3 dual layer dvd's on it! I'll get that up as soon as I can make it work!

I also recommend that anyone who hasn't seen DeZIONized watch it immediately. It's one of the best fan edits I've seen (I think that and ADM's Pearl Harbor edit get the most time on my DVD player). Even if you like the films the way they are, it's worth seeing DeZIONized just to see the story from a different angle.

I will mail out some DVD-r's when I finish this one.
I'm always looking to trade my edits, if you don't want to get them from a torrent. PM or e-mail!
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I need some help. If anyone is good at making titles, I really need a good title sequence. If anyone is interested in helping me with this, PM me or e-mail at spence101287 at aim.com
I'm always looking to trade my edits, if you don't want to get them from a torrent. PM or e-mail!
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I'm so glad people are making matrix 2+3 edits. I was so bummed with the actual releases, but saw the potential. Can't wait to see this one

FE<3OT

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I've changed what I was doing with the ending. It is now made up of scenes from the Animatrix short Kid's Story, and hints that Neo may be alive. I really like how it's turned out.

Again I really need some title sequence help. I can get this on a dvd and up on demonoid once I've got a cool "Matrix Squared" title to use.
I'm always looking to trade my edits, if you don't want to get them from a torrent. PM or e-mail!
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something similair to the opening of the films, where the words "The Matrix" fly out of the code followed by the word "Squared"

that or just a cool matrix-esque logo would work well enough.
I'm always looking to trade my edits, if you don't want to get them from a torrent. PM or e-mail!
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Should be up within the next couple of days. If anyone is interested in doing menu's for this, let me know.

Also, should I post it DL or SL?
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Im gonna stick a vote up for single layer....
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I'm gonna try and snail mail a few of these out, maybe we can kinda pay it forward? Wouldn't mind a couple of trade's either, I desperately am looking for ADM's Terminator 3 edit and CBB's War of the World's Extinctive Edition.
I'm always looking to trade my edits, if you don't want to get them from a torrent. PM or e-mail!
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Why don't you download it? It is right now up on piratebay, freshly seeded.

Nothing about fanediting is easy.

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I tried to for a while, but wasn't getting much speed on it. It said it was going to take nearly 2 weeks to download.
I'm always looking to trade my edits, if you don't want to get them from a torrent. PM or e-mail!
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Sounds like a pretty sweet edit. Haven't seen DeZionized yet myself (in the process of downloading). Both should be fun.
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Originally posted by: Spence101287
I'm gonna try and snail mail a few of these out, maybe we can kinda pay it forward? Wouldn't mind a couple of trade's either, I desperately am looking for ADM's Terminator 3 edit and CBB's War of the World's Extinctive Edition.
Spence, PM me - I can trade the WOTW if you wish.

where have i been all this time ?
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Originally posted by: f1209
Originally posted by: Spence101287
I'm gonna try and snail mail a few of these out, maybe we can kinda pay it forward? Wouldn't mind a couple of trade's either, I desperately am looking for ADM's Terminator 3 edit and CBB's War of the World's Extinctive Edition.
Spence, PM me - I can trade the WOTW if you wish.


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I'll take other edits, those are just the ones i'm really dying for. Just send me what you have and I'll probably trade for something on there. I don't have very many edits, so i'm sure we can work something out.
I'm always looking to trade my edits, if you don't want to get them from a torrent. PM or e-mail!