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Mando EP2: Search for the Jedi [V2 RELEASED] — Page 8

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smudger9 said:

Ice said:

The added “Moff Gideon” line given to Bo Katan still sounds rough. Can you pitch shift it down a few percent?

I’ve totally changed that scene now and it sounds much better. I’ll post a clip when it’s completed.

Hey! Loved your Season 1 cut, near flawless on my opinion, how’s the season 2 cut going?

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fredpankratz said:

smudger9 said:

Ice said:

The added “Moff Gideon” line given to Bo Katan still sounds rough. Can you pitch shift it down a few percent?

I’ve totally changed that scene now and it sounds much better. I’ll post a clip when it’s completed.

Hey! Loved your Season 1 cut, near flawless on my opinion, how’s the season 2 cut going?

95% complete. Unfortunately the last 5% include the opening crawl, opening pan shot, episode link scenes and the 2 major story alteration scenes… those take time.

What doesn’t help is being a medic with children during a pandemic lockdown… free time is scarce at the moment!

Current Project:- Ahsoka EP1: Heir to the Empire https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/Smudger9s-Ahsoka-Movie-Series-EP1-Heir-to-the-Empire-WIP/id/107396#1551872

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Stay safe out there my friend. All in good time!

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smudger9 said:

fredpankratz said:

smudger9 said:

Ice said:

The added “Moff Gideon” line given to Bo Katan still sounds rough. Can you pitch shift it down a few percent?

I’ve totally changed that scene now and it sounds much better. I’ll post a clip when it’s completed.

Hey! Loved your Season 1 cut, near flawless on my opinion, how’s the season 2 cut going?

95% complete. Unfortunately the last 5% include the opening crawl, opening pan shot, episode link scenes and the 2 major story alteration scenes… those take time.

What doesn’t help is being a medic with children during a pandemic lockdown… free time is scarce at the moment!

You’re awesome, dude!

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smudger9 said:

fredpankratz said:

smudger9 said:

Ice said:

The added “Moff Gideon” line given to Bo Katan still sounds rough. Can you pitch shift it down a few percent?

I’ve totally changed that scene now and it sounds much better. I’ll post a clip when it’s completed.

Hey! Loved your Season 1 cut, near flawless on my opinion, how’s the season 2 cut going?

95% complete. Unfortunately the last 5% include the opening crawl, opening pan shot, episode link scenes and the 2 major story alteration scenes… those take time.

What doesn’t help is being a medic with children during a pandemic lockdown… free time is scarce at the moment!

love from blue to red line

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smudger9 said:

Managed to finish the Trask to Corvus link. The damaged Razorcrest plot point has been removed from the movie.
https://vimeo.com/514068328

At first, I was like… but we don’t know where that person who planted it came from but then I realized it doesn’t matter. So, yeah, it’s really good. Perfectly seamless.

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arabian said:

smudger9 said:

Managed to finish the Trask to Corvus link. The damaged Razorcrest plot point has been removed from the movie.
https://vimeo.com/514068328

At first, I was like… but we don’t know where that person who planted it came from but then I realized it doesn’t matter. So, yeah, it’s really good. Perfectly seamless.

Yes, the insinuation being that its placed whilst Mando is on Trask, and we know the Empire has a presence there.

Here is the Corvus to Tython link. This one is pretty straightforward - just a couple of music edits and removal of the Child-Mando dialogue that I used in the Trask-Corvus link sequence.

https://vimeo.com/514863886

Current Project:- Ahsoka EP1: Heir to the Empire https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/Smudger9s-Ahsoka-Movie-Series-EP1-Heir-to-the-Empire-WIP/id/107396#1551872

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smudger9 said:

arabian said:

smudger9 said:

Managed to finish the Trask to Corvus link. The damaged Razorcrest plot point has been removed from the movie.
https://vimeo.com/514068328

At first, I was like… but we don’t know where that person who planted it came from but then I realized it doesn’t matter. So, yeah, it’s really good. Perfectly seamless.

Yes, the insinuation being that its placed whilst Mando is on Trask, and we know the Empire has a presence there.

Here is the Corvus to Tython link. This one is pretty straightforward - just a couple of music edits and removal of the Child-Mando dialogue that I used in the Trask-Corvus link sequence.

https://vimeo.com/514863886

Nice work on the audio to remove the bickering over Grogu being trained, totally seemless. Do you have a clip of your refined MOFF Gideon reveal to Mando?

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STF78 said:

smudger9 said:

arabian said:

smudger9 said:

Managed to finish the Trask to Corvus link. The damaged Razorcrest plot point has been removed from the movie.
https://vimeo.com/514068328

At first, I was like… but we don’t know where that person who planted it came from but then I realized it doesn’t matter. So, yeah, it’s really good. Perfectly seamless.

Yes, the insinuation being that its placed whilst Mando is on Trask, and we know the Empire has a presence there.

Here is the Corvus to Tython link. This one is pretty straightforward - just a couple of music edits and removal of the Child-Mando dialogue that I used in the Trask-Corvus link sequence.

https://vimeo.com/514863886

Nice work on the audio to remove the bickering over Grogu being trained, totally seemless. Do you have a clip of your refined MOFF Gideon reveal to Mando?

That scene is much better now, however, I’m still searching through Another Life for a Katiee Sackoff line.

Current Project:- Ahsoka EP1: Heir to the Empire https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/Smudger9s-Ahsoka-Movie-Series-EP1-Heir-to-the-Empire-WIP/id/107396#1551872

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It is seamless, but it still begs the question… why can’t she train him? She says “I can’t train him.” OK, then why?

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SWOTFAN25 said:

Ok, don’t get mad at me for asking, but can we include the Republic Commando Theme in Boba Fett’s introduction?

https://youtu.be/C9XWdC0KLSE

😂

I’m against it, only because he’s so far removed from them. If anything, the Commandos are closer to Stormtroopers after ostensibly training them. Bobs Fett was seemingly removed from the other young clones by his father at an early age, and his fighting style is more based on his father and the other Bounty Hunters that brought him up.

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Sooo, this sequence took a while, but luckily its the last (and most difficult) link sequence. It takes the story from The Tragedy to The Rescue (The Believer has been cut).

I have changed the sequnces at the end of The Tragedy and start of The Rescue, and altered most of the dialogue between Mando and Cara on Nevarro.

https://vimeo.com/521628292

This just leaves the opening sequence to sort, and tidying up of the landing on Trask. A version for test viewing will be available soon.

Current Project:- Ahsoka EP1: Heir to the Empire https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/Smudger9s-Ahsoka-Movie-Series-EP1-Heir-to-the-Empire-WIP/id/107396#1551872

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smudger9 said:

Sooo, this sequence took a while, but luckily its the last (and most difficult) link sequence. It takes the story from The Tragedy to The Rescue (The Believer has been cut).

I have changed the sequnces at the end of The Tragedy and start of The Rescue, and altered most of the dialogue between Mando and Cara on Nevarro.

https://vimeo.com/521628292

This just leaves the opening sequence to sort, and tidying up of the landing on Trask. A version for test viewing will be available soon.

That looks good! I would maybe put the recruitment of Bo Katan prior to the message to Gideon, as it feels a little too ping-pong between the Empire and Mando.

Part of why that hologram from Mano works so well in the episode is because they stole the info, but without The Believer, and it just being Cara Dune and a Google search, it doesn’t really warrant the astonishment from Gideon that he’s been found/contacted. You might be able to delete that scene entirely. If you did, Dyn could recruit Cara before Gideon intimidates Grogu, after Boba commits to helping him.

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JakeRyan17 said:

smudger9 said:

Sooo, this sequence took a while, but luckily its the last (and most difficult) link sequence. It takes the story from The Tragedy to The Rescue (The Believer has been cut).

I have changed the sequnces at the end of The Tragedy and start of The Rescue, and altered most of the dialogue between Mando and Cara on Nevarro.

https://vimeo.com/521628292

This just leaves the opening sequence to sort, and tidying up of the landing on Trask. A version for test viewing will be available soon.

That looks good! I would maybe put the recruitment of Bo Katan prior to the message to Gideon, as it feels a little too ping-pong between the Empire and Mando.

Part of why that hologram from Mano works so well in the episode is because they stole the info, but without The Believer, and it just being Cara Dune and a Google search, it doesn’t really warrant the astonishment from Gideon that he’s been found/contacted. You might be able to delete that scene entirely. If you did, Dyn could recruit Cara before Gideon intimidates Grogu, after Boba commits to helping him.

+1

Peace is a lie
There is only passion…

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BTW: Are you going to use the better version of the Luke deepfake that’s been going around or stick with the show version?