The new Snoke clip is good Nev! I love the way you handled him standing up. I do think it’d be good if something could be done to “the light” line to make it match the way the rest of the dialogue sounds more. It isn’t a big deal, just stands out a little to me still.
EDIT: Also, I certainly don’t think this should be a priority for you at all, but if you start getting to the point where you think you might be able to release a version of this before TROS comes out, it might be worth looking into having a simple edition of TLJ that would fit with the way TFA: Starlight ends. Basically it could just be the same film with an alternate first scene with Rey. Or a preexisting TLJ edit that you like with that alternate first Rey scene inserted. Just suggesting this because it might be a good idea for people who might want to watch TFA:Starlight and a TLJ edit before seeing IX.