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Love it! Still don’t like the boyfriend line, though. 😛

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ziggyonice said:

ChainsawAsh said:

Love it! Still don’t like the boyfriend line, though. 😛

I’m okay with it. A little humor is totally okay in Star Wars. And of all the forced humor, that single line is far from the worst.

I think what’s slightly off-putting is when he repeats himself and adds the word ‘cute’.

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Yeah, pretty much. It also seems pretty easy to cut to me, and it’s not like eliminating that one awkward line suddenly robs the entire movie of all its humor.

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Sir Ridley made an edit in which Kylo’s scar is changed to be consistent with The Last Jedi. Do you plan on adding that change?

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FreezingTNT2 said:

Sir Ridley made an edit in which Kylo’s scar is changed to be consistent with The Last Jedi. Do you plan on adding that change?

Yes, since this edit uses and expands upon the changes from Restructured v3.

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ziggyonice said:

ChainsawAsh said:

Love it! Still don’t like the boyfriend line, though. 😛

I’m okay with it. A little humor is totally okay in Star Wars. And of all the forced humor, that single line is far from the worst.

I think what’s slightly off-putting is when he repeats himself and adds the word ‘cute’.

Agreed. I tried to remove the entire ‘boyfriend’ dialogue but it felt a bit strange for Rey to pop up like that so soon. Removing just the repeated ‘cute boyfriend’ is much better imo:

https://vimeo.com/360410793

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Yeah, that does make it significantly better.

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Yes that did it! Yeah, because there seems to be possible romantic chemistry at this point in the movie between the two heroes, it makes sense for the question to come up. But yes this works great.

Love how this scene play out now!

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Excellent, then I think that scene’s a lock.

Moving right along to another Falcon scene, I’ve taken another stab at removing the game table shenanigans:

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One thing that’s still an issue; Han’s ‘So…’ needs more work to fit with his mouth movement.

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That “So” might could use some work, but it is already pretty great!

Though I still think you should keep Finn deflecting his gaze from Han, which unintentionally signals his lie.

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Okay, I’ve reverted back to the deflected gaze shot, and dealt with the weird ‘so’ by shortening that section even further:

https://vimeo.com/360583522

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BB-8 also has more worried beeps when asked to reveal the map, which I believe fits with his more cautious nature in this edit.

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Perfect!

This may have been mentioned already, but are you taking out the training remote too? I could go either way on that, I’m just curious.

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In the newest Episode IX trailer, it looks like Rey is training against a red(?) training remote. Maybe it could be recolored to match that one. So when Finn pulls it out it is a training remote, but not the same one from 40 years ago.

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RogueLeader said:

In the newest Episode IX trailer, it looks like Rey is training against a red(?) training remote. Maybe it could be recolored to match that one. So when Finn pulls it out it is a training remote, but not the same one from 40 years ago.

That’s a fun idea!

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I’m happy to call the game table scene locked, so it’s on to the next one!

Now the discussion flows from one discrete topic to the next: Starkiller, Rey (the awakening), and finally Han. Any talk of seduction is kept strictly in the Rey category, which feels a lot less weird than when they were talking about Ben’s dad.

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Some really great clips in here lately. Excellent work.

PM me for links to my edits; apparently, some feel shy about this.

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Checked your latest clips, I like what you are doing!

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Any idea when this will be released. I’m super excited for it

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He literally just answered your question.

Myself, the boy, two droids, and no questions asked.

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I’ve been following this edit for a long time now, and haven’t really had time to be checking the thread for the latest developments lately, so I’m not only here to compliment you on your absolutely fantastic work Neverar, but also to thank you for updating the OP and making it so comprehensive. This is probably going to be one of the greatest fanedits ever, at least in technical terms. Your passion and devotion to making everything as best as you can is that of few. Thank you for this incredible project and congrats on the general awesomeness!

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Thanks Omni (and Hal, and Jarbear, and…). it’s heartening to hear that all this work may have some real value to others. So many projects get abandoned and it’s such a shame, I really want this one to live up the expectations you have for it.

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