The Force Awakens: Cops and Robbers (Humor edit/redub ideas) FINISHED

UPDATE FINISHED: Here is finished movie https://youtu.be/4Qnbws05qjA

First Clip: Rey saves BB8. BB8 offers to pay her back https://vimeo.com/249402558
1-3-2018 edit: Rey and BB8 husstle bank https://vimeo.com/249531508
1-10-2018 edit: Rey and BB8 meet up with Finn https://vimeo.com/250451038
1-10-2018 edit: Changed title to what my Video will be called when released
1-10-2018 edit: Deleted idea showing Rey and BB8 run from cops https://vimeo.com/250453077
1-22-2018 edit: Kylo Ren intro clip https://vimeo.com/252209891
1-24-2018 edit: Finn argues with Rey clip: https://vimeo.com/252539401
1-31-2018 edit: Han Solo enters the Falcon clip: https://vimeo.com/253614351
2-2-2018 edit: Kylo Ren is jealous and Han talks about Luke: https://vimeo.com/253989794
2-2-2018 edit: Added extended/deleted Han talking about Luke https://vimeo.com/254002561
2-6-2018 edit: Meeting Maz scene https://vimeo.com/254533898
2-19-2018 edit: Finn tells Rey she needs to steal lightsaber. https://vimeo.com/256421528
2-24-2018 edit: The Cops show up and arrest Rey https://vimeo.com/257271460

Ok guys i’m going to try to bounce off some ideas here. My next edit/humor video that I have started is going to be from ‘The Force Awakens’. My edit start off with the scene showing Rey saving bb8 when he’s in a net. But you quickly find out she is a savage…meaning she doesn’t speak normal. Bb8 on the other hand can speak. Its going to be a voice over humor edit.

Check out the video to see what i’m referring too so far…

https://vimeo.com/249402558 (quality will be better in final edit)

Right when this clip ends i’m going to show Rey and BB8 speaking to that big guy who gives rey her portions…but instead i’m gonna edit it as if this is ‘the bank.’ so when he gives Rey that large ‘portion’ its actually going to be a big pile of money. At this point i’m gonna have some sweet music kick in… and bb8 will be like ‘lets treat ourselves.’ i’m going to show a bunch of scenes of rey driving her speeder, rey wearing the helmet and relaxing, rey flying the falcon…all of this will show that she is living a good life and spending her money. (i’ll get that clip up hopefully soon too) (any ideas on what music would be fun to play when she is spending her money would be great)

Now i want to tweak BB8’s part in this clip so he gets to the point faster. My thinking is the first time we see finn is when he see’s Rey and Bb8 fighting off those guys in the market. When BB8 see’s Finn he’ll tell rey something like “oh no its Finn! You gotta get him or else he’s gonna rat on us.”

My overall idea of where i see this edit/redub going (i never have the whole story laid out…its just concepts and ideas) is that Finn will show up…he’ll be mad that BB8 stole his idea on how to steal money from the bank. He say soemthing like if you don’t pull this scam again for me i’ll rat you out. so Rey and Bb8 go to the bank again to get more money but this time its for Finn. The big guy behind counter knows somethings up and calls police (first order) finn, bb8 and rey get into falcon and drive off.

Now this is where its gets more in the open and things could change…but i’m thinking finn says something like he’s got another bigger pay off idea…and that is to find the original lightsaber of Luke Skywalker. He hears the Luke Skywalker had become rich because he was the only jedi alive and people paid big money to just get lessons from him (think of lets say people would pay big bucks to of had bruce lee teach them lessons)

Now luke is so well off financially, so he put a word out that if someone could find his original lightsaber he would pay big money for it. So Finn/falcon meet up with Han. They pay him for info on where to find this rare item…thats how they’ll end up at Maze place.

Rey (the savage who doesn’t know what shes doing) tries to steal lightsaber (there will be no force visions…when she touches lightsaber i’m gonna make it where alarms go off and Mazz shows up mad at her for trying to steal the saber)

anyways i have more idea after this…but so far this is my main idea at least how to get this far into the movie. Any thoughts so far?

I do have my ending idea…but that i’ll keep to myself for now…obviously as the real movie shows Rey goes to give luke the lightsaber, but i have some thoughts of what i can do with that.

So here’s the next section. There is still tweaking on previous video and this section but want to show where i’m going with this.

https://vimeo.com/249531508

As you can see Rey and bb8 husstled the bank and got their money. I wanted to have a fun moment to show them enjoying the income.

Like i said after this scene I want to show Finn coming and seeing Rey and bb8, but in this edit he’s made because bb8 stole his program on how to take money from the bank.

I haven’t done any of Finns part yet…i’m going to get started on it today or tomorrow. Hopefully i’ll make an enjoyable voice for him.

I’m wondering if anyone would like to help with any of the voice over lines.

As of now i’m seeking:

-Finn
-Han Solo
-Maz

Its of course going to be humorous. You’ll need a nice clear microphone. The ability to see footage and being able to match the speed and lip movement.

Ok here’s the 3rd part i’m working on. I was trying to get someone to do finn…but i haven’t got anyone…but i think i might have found a good voice for him. Again this is not the final edit/dub…its a work in progress. So any tips or thoughts so far would be great.

https://vimeo.com/250451038

originally i had was going to show Rey, BB8 and Finn running away from the ‘cops’ and get off the planet, which you can see my rough edit of that here…

https://vimeo.com/250453077

But i figured it was just wasted time…the next scene on the star destroyer they going to say ‘they escaped’ so i just wanted to get to the next scene faster…no point of showing it, and its not like new information was gonna be shown…point is…they escape.

So the next scene like i mentioned with show the Star Destroyer, but i’m showing it as if its a police space station. They’ll get the report about the bank robbers and then Kylo walks in (as a fun boss) who wants to play music on the bridge and this is interested to find out the escape ship was the Millennium Falcon.

So many words, not enough attention span…

liamnotneeson said:

So many words, not enough attention span…

haha then just check out the clips and let me know what you think. Any feedback or ideas would be great. 😃

Snoke&mirrors said:

This is hilarious. Keep up the good work man

Thank you! I’ve been coming to these forums for awhile, but never really wrote much, but i see this place is great for ones to bounce back ideas. The Ridiculousness edits and the Revisited pages are great. Normally I never upload and share a clip before i’m finished but i see the Ridiculousness edits pages the main guy (TV’s Frink) always shares his thoughts and bounces ideas back and forth…i figure lets give that a try this time with this edit. So we’ll see how it goes.

Ok here’s latest clip. This is Kylo Rens into to this edit of mine. This is not final edit…i’ll get someone else to do Phasma’s voice.

https://vimeo.com/252209891

Hope you like it.

Here is next section i worked on. Finn is upset that Rey messed up his chance of getting rich…so he comes up with an idea of what to do next.

https://vimeo.com/252539401

Ok so here is where Han is introduced. I tried getting someone to do his voice, but no takers…so i took a jab at it. Any thoughts on it?

https://vimeo.com/253614351

What you guys think of the song choice when han first enters the falcon? Wanted to just a casual song playing while finn and others are working and fixing the falcon.

Two scenes are within this clip.

https://vimeo.com/253989794

Here we see Kylo ren talking about wanting to get into the music industry and then we go to a scene showing Han talking about his bad blood with Luke and that he wants nothing to do with him.

TV’s Frink said:

GeoMFilms said:

Snoke&mirrors said:

This is hilarious. Keep up the good work man

Thank you! I’ve been coming to these forums for awhile, but never really wrote much, but i see this place is great for ones to bounce back ideas. The Ridiculousness edits and the Revisited pages are great. Normally I never upload and share a clip before i’m finished but i see the Ridiculousness edits pages the main guy (TV’s Frink) always shares his thoughts and bounces ideas back and forth…i figure lets give that a try this time with this edit. So we’ll see how it goes.

Highly recommended. My edits are so much better thanks to the input and ideas that other people here and on FE have provided.

yeah i guess i’m just use to doing everything myself and coming up with ideas. But i’ve seen your topics (and others) for some time and it seems like you have a good amount of back and forth with others and some nice ideas come about. Like i said i’m still doing my thing, but this is the only forum that i have provided links to unfinished clips of my force awakens edit/dub to see if anyone would like to have fun with being part of it.

The voice over is different then just cutting a scene together so it could be hard for someone i suppose to give ideas on what a character can say unless the lips match right (if its kylo or anyone with a helmet its easier of course)

Like this last scene i have Han explaining he has bad blood with Luke but he doesn’t really go much into it. I do have a longer version of this scene explaining why things are well with them, but i cut it down so the scene doesn’t drag. i suppose stuff like that would be nice to get some feedback on. (i’ll upload the longer scene and show you what i mean)

Anyways keep up with the great job on your videos too. they give me great laughs. 😃

Here is deleted/extended Han talking about why he doesn’t want anything to do with Luke
https://vimeo.com/254002561

Here is what i go so far for the next scene. The gang meeting up with Maz and trying to find out about Luke’s lightsaber.

https://vimeo.com/254533898

Any input would be great. Hope you guys are enjoying this.

Added Clip of Finn telling Rey to steal the lightsaber from Maz basement. Will she do it? Check it out. Let me know what you liked or didn’t like. Any thoughts on what should be added or taken out?

Thank you.

https://vimeo.com/256421528

enjoy

In this clip we see the Cops (first order) show up to try to arrest the bank robbers.

https://vimeo.com/257271460

enjoy

I finished the voice over edit. I really hope you guys get a chance to watch it and I really hope you like it. I took a few months to put this together. I tried matching the lip movements as much as possible while still trying to make sense.

https://youtu.be/4Qnbws05qjA

Please enjoy

HerekittykittyX said:

GeoMFilms said:

I finished the voice over edit. I really hope you guys get a chance to watch it and I really hope you like it. I took a few months to put this together. I tried matching the lip movements as much as possible while still trying to make sense.

https://youtu.be/4Qnbws05qjA

Please enjoy

What is with the giant watermark

The finished movie doesn’t have the water mark. I put the water mark on the unfinished version.

No thoughts after all this time? I would think some of you would get a kick out of this funny edit/dub. 😦

Sir Ridley said:

I’ve been meaning to watch it! Haven’t gotten around to watching all of it yet, but I love the dub of Rey, really cute and funny.

Rey was so fun to do. Her sac age voice was the first thing I thought of when making this. I don’t know how far you got but Finn was the hardest voice to figure out how to do but once I got a voice for him I had a blast doing his line.

If you liked Rey then I can’t wait to see what you think of the ending. She has a interesting story.