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The Fellowship of the Ring - The Book-Cut - v2 - 2007 (Released) — Page 3

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that's what I was thinking. Yeah, I'll just finish up the second disc and send it to you via snailmail... but I'll still try doing this bittorrent thing.

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You have a tracker error. You should follow the guide from Mininova and use uTorrent to be sure that it is working.
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so the disc that is being upped now is only a test,not the final?

thanks
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Yea, UTorrent is the best for making torrents. Don't even bother with Bit Comet.
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Umm, can you just upload this to the binary groups? That way it can be distributed the fastest to rapidshare/torrents.

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I don't think he knows how to use Newsgroups. Plus you have to pay now!
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yeah... this is all so confusing...

I'll just snailmail it off to some of you guys when I finish Disc 2... I'll probably review Disc 1 myself.

In the meantime, I'll go and use Utorrent and do what I can.

And I did. I'm seeding and I created a file using UTorrent

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Where did you upload the newly-created torrent?
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http://thepiratebay.org/tor/3956040/_BETA_Test__LOTR__The_Fellowship_of_the_Ring_-_Boo

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Cool! Can't wait till I finish downloading!
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I was hesitant when I took a look on TPB cuz I got the impression something wasn't right, that is was incomplete or rough. Could you please clarify whether the problems were merely in getting the file torrent-ed and not within the film itself.

If all is well I will grab it and take a look for sure, although it will take me a little while to download the entire thing.


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it is. I would like it if you could review the video and tell me where the dead frames are and other technical issues that I had with the film itself. So I can refurbish it.

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I will do an in depth review for your edit as soon as I finish downloading it. I should have the download finished by late tomorrow. Infact whenever you have an edit that needs review come to me about it and I will do the same.
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So, my review of the Beta version of Disc 1 goes as follows:

At the beginning of the movie, for example during the transitions between Frodo&Gandalf and Bilbo writing, the first shots that are after the transitions are in a different colour than the ones that follow them.
Also, during the movie, there are some shots with no video (the screen is black), but the audio is synchronized and goes properly during the black shots.

Now about the edit itself:

The backstory is not very well presented to the newcomer audience: for example, during the first shot of Mordor (Gollum tortured/Nazgul coming out of Minas Morgul), the audience doesn't know what this is all about (the only clue that there is somehing about the Ring is the Eye of Sauron seen by Gandalf when he tries to take it). In the original EE, we know about the Ring and Gollum.

In addition, the changes to the presentation of the backstory are not really more faithful to the book. Everybody knew about the battle of the Last Alliance; it wasn't included in the Scroll of Isildur. Also, the newcomer audience wouldn't know what that is about.

My suggestion: restore more scenes from the prologue with the Gandalf narration from BFME and add them before the "This is the One Ring" line told by Gandalf to Frodo. Also, in the original movie there are two scenes of Gollum being tortured: one before the Scroll of Isildur scene and one in a flashback later (Gandalf telling about it to Frodo). You should merge them and add the resultant scene where the second one is in the original.

What is very faithful to the book is the removal of the Saruman scenes, which is done very masterfully.

In the FOTR Book-Cut Version 1 thread, you said that you put "17 Years Later" when the Nazgul first comes to the Shire. This isn't present in the current version.

Why did you use another title card? I didn't understand that.

Also, I didn't understand the sounds that are heard during the final shot ("The Journey Continues on Disk 2"). I think that it is the Sea.

Anyway, this is my review. I hope it will be useful.

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No in the Scroll of Isildur, Gandalf read that (Isildur said) that all should abandon the ring. The war was showing how the ring came into his possession.
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The scene was edited in a way that you could understand that, for example, the "Victory was near" line was also written in the scroll.
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At the beginning of the movie, for example during the transitions between Frodo&Gandalf and Bilbo writing, the first shots that are after the transitions are in a different colour than the ones that follow them.
Yeah, that must be changed.

Also, during the movie, there are some shots with no video (the screen is black), but the audio is synchronized and goes properly during the black shots.
I was hoping you'd tell me where they are exactly, so it could be much much easier and faster for me to track them down and eliminate them.

The backstory is not very well presented to the newcomer audience: for example, during the first shot of Mordor (Gollum tortured/Nazgul coming out of Minas Morgul), the audience doesn't know what this is all about (the only clue that there is somehing about the Ring is the Eye of Sauron seen by Gandalf when he tries to take it). In the original EE, we know about the Ring and Gollum.
That's because in the books, we don't know this until Gandalf talks about it at Bag-End... but the problem here is, that he doesn't. If I put in the prologue at the part where Gandy talks about it, it would feel strange.

In addition, the changes to the presentation of the backstory are not really more faithful to the book. Everybody knew about the battle of the Last Alliance; it wasn't included in the Scroll of Isildur. Also, the newcomer audience wouldn't know what that is about.
My suggestion: restore more scenes from the prologue with the Gandalf narration from BFME and add them before the "This is the One Ring" line told by Gandalf to Frodo. Also, in the original movie there are two scenes of Gollum being tortured: one before the Scroll of Isildur scene and one in a flashback later (Gandalf telling about it to Frodo). You should merge them and add the resultant scene where the second one is in the original.
I know, I was hoping no one would notice that Gollum scene was gone...

What is very faithful to the book is the removal of the Saruman scenes, which is done very masterfully.

Score!

In the FOTR Book-Cut Version 1 thread, you said that you put "17 Years Later" when the Nazgul first comes to the Shire. This isn't present in the current version.

Indeed. I left out 17 years later because that would feel a bit weird... so I didn't. But I can...


Why did you use another title card? I didn't understand that.

what? What title card?

Also, I didn't understand the sounds that are heard during the final shot ("The Journey Continues on Disk 2"). I think that it is the Sea.

It's supposed to be the river, actually. After the Nazgul get wiped out... you just hear the river.


Anyway, this is my review. I hope it will be useful.

It is. I'm going to change a few things now... It's just that I wish someone told me about the dead frames and where they exactly are... if that's not too much trouble.

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I'll give you the specifics later but most of the dead frames were when Gandalf was telling Frodo about the ring and that they have to get rid of it.
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I check everyday for updates on this project. Any to speak of? I'm excited about this.

I know I’ve made some very poor decisions recently.

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*bump*

this is a great project! looking forward to it
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Any news on this project? When I get a Mac in a month of two, I might try to tackle this myself as well.

I know I’ve made some very poor decisions recently.

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*desperate bump*

I know I’ve made some very poor decisions recently.