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TM2YC's 'Star Wars: Reborn' PT fan edits (PM me for new ROTS link!) (Released)

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Some of you may have watched my edit of ROTS that I put up on MySpleen a while ago.

I was discussing it here:

http://originaltrilogy.com/forum/topic.cfm/I-ve-just-finished-Re-editing-Episodes-I-III-now-what/topic/15414/

Since then I’ve been working on putting together a nice package of all three films to upload.  Well it’s burning as I type and as soon as my Laptop spits it back out I’ll be uploading it for you (Hopefully torrent will be up later today). There’s gonna be bonus content and deleted material compilations (With text commentary) packaged with each film.

My goal with these edits was to create versions of the PT that were to put it simply ‘enjoyable to watch’. I wanted to make good versions of these films that still felt like the same films in essence.

I’ve seen other great edits that chop the films down to 90 mins but for me a true SW film should give you around 2 solid hrs of entertainment (And not 2.5hrs either!).

I’ve achieved this by:-

Trimming action scenes to increase pace. Reworking all major Lightsaber duels. Evaluating and then editing every line of dialogue that I felt didn’t work. Adding a few OT music queues. Adding portions of most but not all deleted scenes back in. Removing over-the-top CGI shots and Digi-Doubles.

But most importantly of all I’ve focused on transforming the characters. In TPM Anakin is brave and an amazing pilot, Padme and The Queen are one character, while Jar-Jar has purpose and is no longer annoying. In AOTC Anakin is now likeable and you believe the romance with Padme. In ROTS needless messing around with R2 is replaced with warm character moments between Anakin and Obi-Wan, while Padme is no longer confined to her apartment, she has a role in the senate, she feeds Anakin’s growing unease and she has a part in the seeds of the coming Rebellion. Lastly Anakin is not revealed to be Vader so you can still enjoy ESB.

I’ll post a comprehensive change list soon.  I’m looking forward to hearing what everyone thinks on the forum!

I’ve posted a few short taster clips here:

http://vimeo.com/user6280236/videos

Oh and if anybody has artwork ideas I started a thread here:

http://originaltrilogy.com/forum/topic.cfm/Cover-for-single-volume-PT-Blu-Ray-needed-for-my-fanedits-of-EpsI-III/topic/15440/

TPM changeist featured in post 16 of this thread.

AOTC changelis featured in post 24 of this thread.

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Sounds really cool. One thing I'd really like to see in an edit is Padme not dying, as per Leia's memories in ROTJ. The Kcutter did a good job making a scene like that.

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marioxb said:

Sounds really cool. One thing I'd really like to see in an edit is Padme not dying, as per Leia's memories in ROTJ. The Kcutter did a good job making a scene like that.

That would be nice but can't think how you would A: Show her alive on Alderaan and B: Explain why she let Kenobi kidnap her child and "Hide" him on a farm in Tatooine. A farm that she knew the location of. Why wouldn't she visit.

This seems like a rare ill thought through problem with the OT that wasn't possible to reflect in the PT.

Would love to hear if anybody has ideas to solve this conundrum.

In my cut, Anakin audiably crushes Padme's spine. She later dies from her injuries after giving birth to unmamed twins. She doesn't choose to die from a broken heart leaving her children parentless.

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Nero just crashed with about 5% to go on the project. Hmmm might have a little cry :-(

http://youtu.be/EPfsr8BBdA8

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F%$K IT!

I give up making a nice blu-ray package, with meus and chapters for now!

I just this minute stuck the basic files up on the spleen.  Enjoy and please give feedback here.

Ryan

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Anyone know the best vehicles to get these edits out there?

File formats? sites? methods? torrents/uploads etc?

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The most common ways to share are digital file lockers, newsgroups, and torrents.  I only use file lockers so I can only advise on those.  I find Mega to be the best at the moment, with Megashares not bad either.  Rapidshare used to be good but is now really restrictive.

 

Again, if you want help sharing your work with a wider audience, I can help you over on fanedit.org.

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Re TV's Frink,

Mega was popping up with an eta of 25 to 50 hrs to upload just one of my cuts in their 6-7gig form!!!  stretch009 suggested splitting it into rars then uploading to mega.

Been suggested that mega has problems with certain browsers.  Which one do you use?

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For some reason Chrome works best with Mega.  You definitely want to split your file up into rars.  I use winrar (it's free, ignore any messages that say otherwise) and split into 200 MB files with best compression method.

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thx,

will try something along these lines

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seems to be uploading nicely. Taking a while though. TPM:Reborn should be all up on Mega later today

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Parts 1 to 6 of TPM:Reborn (Out of 9 in total *.rar files) are up on mega so if you wanna get a head start, you can begin downloading now. Parts 7-9 will be finished uploading in the next 6 hrs. (AOTC:Reborn will go up tommorow followed by ROTS:Reborn on monday).

PM me for a link.

Ryan

P.S. I'm working on a short, short version of TPM for fun.  Thought I'd make a little something for those of you who want to spend as little time as possible in the PT universe.

At this point I've got our characters from opening blockade shot to arrival on Tatooine in just over 8 minutes (The theatrical cut takes 27.5 minutes to get to that point!).

lol

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I'm interested to check this out, but I would love to see a list of changes as well. Sometime people like to see this before they invest download time.

Regardless, I appreciate your efforts.

There have been some amazing prequel edits, and while these  did make the films better, I'm still of the belief that the only way to fix the films is that they get re-made completely. I want to be wrong, so I keep hoping someone will have that magic epiphany and it all comes together. Maybe you're that guy.

Good luck in all your efforts.

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mrbenja0618 said:

I'm interested to check this out, but I would love to see a list of changes as well. Sometime people like to see this before they invest download time.

Regardless, I appreciate your efforts.

There have been some amazing prequel edits, and while these  did make the films better, I'm still of the belief that the only way to fix the films is that they get re-made completely. I want to be wrong, so I keep hoping someone will have that magic epiphany and it all comes together. Maybe you're that guy.

Good luck in all your efforts.

Agree with everything.

Wish I'd made a change list as I was editing. I could type most of it down from memory but sometimes I only trimmed a second or a few frames out. Might have to run a comparison lol

I'll PM you the link to TPM:Reborn

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Phew

Writing a change list for TPM:Reborn now. Only up to 32 mins and I've got a list 120 lines long.

Bedtime is beckoning

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- All Jar-Jar/Gungan audio replaced with alternate soundtrack and newly written subtitles.
- All references to Anakin crashing his pod, being clumsy or not being a good racer have been removed.
- All references to Padme and the Queen being seperate people are removed.
- All subtitles partially or completely rewritten to alter character and story.


- 00.00.00 Old ROTJ Fox fanfare used
- 00.00.10 OT Lucasfilm logo used
- 00.10.58 First gurning closeup of Jar-Jar removed
- 00.11.04 NEWJJSUB "Oma-Oma save me!
- 00.11.07 NEWJJSUB "What... was that?"
- 00.11.16 NEWJJSUB "Master Jedi, you..."
- 00.11.17 NEWJJSUB "Hey, wait!"
- 00.11.20 NEWJJSUB "I owe you my life"
- 00.11.23 NEWJJSUB "Brainless? I Speak!"
- 00.11.28 NEWJJSUB "No no. You saved my life Master Jedi,"
- 00.11.30 NEWJJSUB "I am Prince Jar-Jar Binks,"
- 00.11.32 NEWJJSUB "I always repay a debt"
- 00.11.34 NEWJJSUB "Oh but it is, the  Gungan gods demand it!"
- 00.11.39 NEWJJSUB "Oh no!"
- 00.11.49 NEWJJSUB "You saved me again Master Jedi!"
- 00.11.55 NEWJJSUB "More?"
- 00.11.57 NEWJJSUB "More you say!"
- 00.11.59 NEWJJSUB "This Droid army came from nowhere."
- 00.12.02 NEWJJSUB "I must alert my farther in Otuh Gunga."
- 00.12.04 NEWJJSUB "For now, our people should be safe there,"
- 00.12.06 NEWJJSUB "It's a hidden city..."
- 00.12.09 NEWJJSUB "Ah huh."
- 00.12.12 NEWJJSUB "Yes, follow me."
- 00.12.13 Rest of "A thousand terrible things" scene removed
- 00.12.19 NEWJJSUB "Otuh Gunga is here, under this lake."
- 00.12.21 NEWJJSUB "I hope you Jedi can swim!"
- 00.12.23 NEWJJSUB "Gungans don't usually permit strangers to enter..."
- 00.12.26 NEWJJSUB "So don't expect a warm welcome!"
- 00.12.32 Elaborate Jar-Jar dive almost entirely removed
- 00.12.40 NEWJJSUB "Come, follow me friends."
- 00.13.27 NEWJJSUB "Thank Oma-Oma! The city is still safe."
- 00.13.36 NEWGUNGANSUB "Outsiders here? Call the guards!"
- 00.13.47 NEWCTSUB "My Lord! We'll kill these intruders immediately!"
- 00.13.49 NEWJJSUB "No! Captain Tarpals, my friends require transport..."
- 00.13.52 NEWJJSUB "...at once!"
- 00.13.53 NEWCTSUB "I apologise Prince Jar-Jar!"
- 00.13.54 NEWCTSUB "Guards, what are you waiting for!"
- 00.13.55 NEWCTSUB "Prepare a sub without delay!"
- 00.13.57 Jar-Jar getting electroshocked and the whole meeting with boss Nass removed
- 00.13.58 Neimoidian invasion talk with Sidious brought forward
- 00.14.34 Sub leaving Otuh Gunga pushed back
- 00.14.52 NEWJJSUB "No. the Gungans and Naboo have never got on."
- 00.14.54 NEWJJSUB "We nearl came to war, erm..."
- 00.14.57 NEWJJSUB "about a century ago."
- 00.15.11 NEWJJSUB "You see, the Naboo are... artists and philosophers,"
- 00.15.15 NEWJJSUB "the Gungans on the other hand... are mighty warriors!"
- 00.15.25 Jar-Jar reaction re-dubbed
- 00.15.28 NEWJJSUB "An Opee Sea-Killer, we're doomed!"
- 00.15.44 Jar-Jar line removed
- 00.15.48 2nd planet core scene removed
- 00.15.49 Theed occupation scene brought forward
- 00.16.32 'Waterfall' deleted scene partially re-instated
- 00.16.34 NEWJJSUB "Welcome to Theed young Jedi."
- 00.17.27 Jar-Jar tripping into the water removed
- 00.19.01 OT hero sting used over Droid fight/Queen rescue
- 00.19.09 Jar-Jar clowning and Obi-Wan landing removed
- 00.19.25 NEWJJSUB "These Jedi sure are powerful warriors!"
- 00.20.23 Queen's indecision and Padme line removed
- 00.21.35 Obi-Wan and Jar-Jar Droid bay scene removed
- 00.21.56 Shots of Jar-Jar in Droid bay removed
- 00.23.16 Queen discussing Tatooine scene brought forward
- 00.23.24 Mention of Padme's name removed
- 00.24.00 Darth Maul holo introduction pushed back
- 00.24.47 Padme cleaning R2 scene removed
- 00.25.27 Panaka "Wait" request scene removed
- 00.25.50 Jar-Jar slipping in sh*t removed
- 00.26.03 NEWWATSUB "Greetings, come in..."
- 00.26.07 NEWWATSUB "How can I help today?"
- 00.26.17 NEWWATSUB "Anakin, quick! There's money to be made."
- 00.26.23 NEWWATSUB "Just you be quicker next time!"
- 00.26.25 NEWANSUB "I was tuning that new X-34 speeder."
- 00.26.27 NEWWATSUB "Yes, yes. Mind the store, I got a deal to make."
- 00.26.36 Qui-Gon telling Jar-Jar off and Jar-Jar blowing a raspberry removed
- 00.26.38 Qui-Gon and Watto in junkyard scene brought forward
- 00.27.34 1st Anakin talking to Padme scene pushed back and joined with 2nd scene
- 00.28.27 Jar-Jar clowning in Watto's shop almost totally removed
- 00.28.29 Anakin "Fixing things line" removed as Jar-Jar was ALL OVER IT!
- 00.28.30 Shot of Qui-Gon leaving minimised to minimise Jar-Jar juggling
- 00.28.36 Jar-Jar getting lost shot removed
- 00.28.38 NEWWATSUB "Huh... outlanders!"
- 00.28.41 NEWWATSUB "They're gona need looking after in this place."
- 00.28.44 NEWANSUB "I kinda liked 'em."
- 00.28.46 NEWWATSUB "Well then... go warn 'em,"
- 00.28.48 NEWWATSUB "a sand storm's coming."
- 00.28.49 "Yippee!!!" removed
- 00.29.12 Jar-Jar argueing with Qui-Gon removed
- 00.29.22 Jar-Jar/Sebulba scene re-sequenced so Sebulba makes an unprovoked attack on Jar-Jar in a reference back/forward to ANH Cantina incident
- 00.29.23 NEWJJSUB "Oh... those look delicious."
- 00.29.27 NEWSUB "Hey, hey. No browsing stranger!"
- 00.29.32 NEWSEBSUB "I don't think he likes you very much,"
- 00.29.34 NEWJJSUB "I was only... ahhh!"
- 00.29.36 NEWSEBSUB "and I don't like you either."
- 00.29.40 NEWANSUB "What's this Sebulba?"
- 00.29.42 NEWANSUB "Beating up tourists again?"
- 00.29.44 NEWANSUB "It's gotta be easier than beating me on the track."
- 00.29.47 NEWSEBSUB "Shame you're not racing tomorrow monkey boy,"
- 00.29.51 NEWSEBSUB "I'd love to run you into a canyon wall.. slave scum!"
- 00.29.56 NEWANSUB "You'd have to catch me first!"
- 00.30.10 NEWJJSUB "You're sure brave boy,"
- 00.30.13 NEWJJSUB "I'm lucky you came along."
- 00.30.14 Qui-Gon trouble line removed
- 00.30.15 Jar-Jar protesting removed
- 00.30.18 1st Jira scene brought forward
- 00.31.05 NEWJJSUB "I'm glad to be outta that storm."
- 00.31.09 NEWJJSUB "Hello."
- 00.31.17 NEWJJSUB "Ah, this looks tasty!"
- 00.32.30 Obi-Wan and Panaka sandstorm scene pushed back
- 00.32.48 Queen message scene removed
- 00.32.50 Message from Naboo re-coloured to appear in the cockpit with Obi-Wan
- 00.33.55 NEWJJSUB "How awful!"
- 00.34.04 Jar-Jar eating fruit removed
- 00.34.17 Qui-Gon grabbing Jar-Jar's tongue removed
- 00.35.24 NEWJJSUB "We don't have anything to trade."
- 00.36.56 Qui-Gon disagreeing with Padme removed
- 00.37.17 Discussion of Anakin crashing his last Pod removed and shots resequenced
- 00.37.27 "That you did line" removed
- 00.37.27 "The boy's good..." line brought forward
- 00.38.13 NEWWATSUB "Your new friend sure likes to take risks, huh."
- 00.40.12 Kitster's sarcasm removed
- 00.40.14 Ginger kid mocking Anakin removed
- 00.40.15 NEWSUB "Your gonna need luck Ani!"
- 00.40.24 Anakin warning Jar-Jar removed
- 00.40.25 Jar-Jar fumbling wrench replaced with shot of R2
- 00.40.26 All shots of Jar-Jar getting zapped by the energy binders removed
- 00.40.27 C3PO's Jar-Jar is odd lines removed
- 00.41.54 Qui-Gon's Mediclorian count line removed
- 00.41.57 Obi-Wan's over twenty thousand line removed
- 00.42.59 Dawn before the podrace deleted scene partialy re-instated
- 00.43.33 Padme's your mother line removed
- 00.44.36 Jar-Jar reaction shot removed
- 00.44.37 Watto's Sebulba always wins line removed
- 00.45.42 NEWWATSUB "Good luck my boy."
- 00.45.45 NEWWATSUB "Better stop your friend's gambling, before I own him too!"
- 00.46.06 Scene describing Anakin as such a bad pilot he's never actually finished a race removed
- 00.46.29 Grid sequence deleted scene partially re-instated
- 00.46.30 NEWBESUB "Welcome to the 'Boonta Eve Classic',"
- 00.46.32 NEWBESUB "the highlight in the calender of all Podracers."
- 00.46.51 NEWBESUB "Let's run through todays contenders..."
- 00.46.55 NEWBESUB "Gasgano's in his custom Ord Pedrovia."
- 00.46.58 NEWBESUB "Beside him, Teemto Pagalies,"
- 00.47.03 NEWBESUB "and of course the Grand-Champion of Pixelito..."
- 00.47.08 NEWBESUB "Sebulba!"
- 00.47.57 Jar-Jar stealing Mars Guo's applause removed
- 00.48.27 Three-Stooges pit Droids shot removed
- 00.48.45 Flag Parade music remixed and extended
- 00.48.51 Jar-Jar fart gag removed
- 00.49.14 NEWSEBSUB "You won't walk away from this one kid,"
- 00.49.17 NEWSEBSUB "I'll make sure of it."
- 00.49.19 NEWANSUB "Don't count on it, slime ball."
- 00.49.22 NEWSEBSUB "You're gonna be Bantha fodder."
- 00.49.52 NEWBESUB "Now entering the arena, the mighty Jabba The Hutt."
- 00.50.08 NEWSUB "Welcome podracing fans from across te galaxy."
- 00.50.12 NEWSUB "To the racers who survive, we salute you!"
- 00.50.48 Padme questioning Qui-Gon's judgement removed
- 00.51.45 Jar-Jar me no watchin' line and shot removed
- 00.51.51 Quadinaros frustration shot removed
- 00.51.53 Ratts Tyerell exchanging looks with his wife removed
- 00.51.56 Jabba spitting on a gong removed
- 00.51.58 Start of podrace re-cut so Anakin no longer stalls on the grid
- 00.53.05 Shot of Ratts Tyerell's wife reacting to his death
- 00.53.22 Shot of Quadinaros on grid removed
- 00.53.24 Quadinaros having engine trouble sequence removed
- 00.53.24 Crowd shots flipped to better follow left to right race flow
- 00.53.27 NEWBESUB "In the lead, Sebulba!"
- 00.53.22 Ody Mandrell pit trouble scene removed
- 00.53.31 Jabba flicking creature removed
- 00.53.36 Shot of Anakin in distance removed
- 00.53.48 Shot of alien selling snacks removed
- 00.53.53 Extended lap two deleted scene partially re-instated
- 00.54.34 Bumpy Roose pit scene removed
- 00.56.41 Teemto Pagalies crash shortened to make it clear he didn't survive
- 00.56.42 Beed "That's gotta hurt" line removed
- 00.56.43 Shots of Jawas looting wreckage underfire from Tuskans removed
- 00.56.69 Jar-Jar "Here he comes" and crowd reaction shots removed
- 00.57.46 OT hero sting mixed over Anakin aerial manoeuvre and subsequent shots
- 00.58.05 NEWJJSUB "What a pilot!"
- 00.59.45 Jar-Jar "Careful Ani" shot removed
- 00.59.48 NEWSEBSUB "He never gives up!"
- 01.00.36 Shot of Sebulba surviving removed
- 01.01.02 NEWJJSUB "We won Ani!"
- 01.01.08 NEWWATSUB "The race musta been fixed!"
- 01.01.19 NEWJJSUB "You've saved us Ani!"
- 01.01.31 "You have brought hope to those who have none" line removed
- 01.02.25 NEWJJSUB "Hello."
- 01.02.33 Obi-Wan's "Pathetic lifeform" line removed
- 01.02.43 Anakin's Scuffle With Greedo deleted scene fully re-instated
- 01.03.05 NEWSUB "He must of."
- 01.03.22 NEWSUB "One day Greedo, you're gonna pick a fight with the wrong person."
- 01.08.23 Farewell To Jira deleted scene partially re-instated
- 01.08.32 "Kindest boy in the galaxy" line removed
- 01.09.31 "I'm tired" line removed
- 01.09.58 Shot of Qui-Gon lying down removed
- 01.11.56 "Queen is worried" line removed
- 01.11.58 "She must convince the Senate" line removed
- 01.12.22 "Many things will change" line and remainder of the scene removed
- 01.13.11 Exchange of looks between Anakin and Padme removed
- 01.13.12 "Report on situation" line removed
- 01.13.51 Long shot of Anakin looking at Qui-Gon and Padme line removed
- 01.14.02 NEWJJSUB "Now, Queen Padme will get the senate to help us,"
- 01.14.06 NEWJJSUB "I'm sure of it"
- 01.17.01 "Highest concentration of medicloreans" line removed
- 01.17.02 Qui-Gon line redubbed to "It is possible he was conceived in the force"
- 01.17.49 Anakin looking for Padme scene removed
- 01.22.13 NEWJJSUB "You're thinking your people are dying?"
- 01.22.19 NEWJJSUB "Gungans might be dying too..."
- 01.22.26 NEWJJSUB "Gungan's won't die without a fight... my father,"
- 01.22.30 NEWJJSUB "commands a grand Gungan army."
- 01.22.34 NEWJJSUB "Maybe that's why your people distrust us."
- 01.26.36 Medicloreans dialogue and footage removed
- 01.27.01 NEWJJSUB "We're going home!"
- 01.28.15 NEWJJSUB "You need my help?"
- 01.29.37 NEWJJSUB "There were signs of a battle,"
- 01.29.40 NEWJJSUB "and the city is deserted."
- 01.29.48 NEWJJSUB "I don't think so,"
- 01.29.50 NEWJJSUB "My father must have led our people to the,"
- 01.29.53 NEWJJSUB "Gungan's sacred refuge deep in the swamps."
- 01.29.55 NEWJJSUB "Quick follow me!"
- 01.30.15 NEWCTSUB "Sire, your son brings before you, Queen Amidala of the Naboo..."
- 01.30.18 Bodyguard arrival and Boss Nass talking to Jar-Jar shots removed
- 01.30.19 Boss Nass speech footage brought forward
- 01.30.20 NEWBNSUB "Your capital is overun with this mechanical army,"
- 01.30.23 NEWBNSUB "so what do the mighty Naboo want with us lowly Gungans?"
- 01.30.27 Bodyguard speech and Queen reveal shots removed
- 01.31.10 NEWBNSUB "I don't think a Naboo Queen has ever nealt before the Gungans!"
- 01.31.17 NEWBNSUB "I am quite overwhelmed,"
- 01.31.22 NEWBNSUB "I think the Gungans and the Naboo can be... friends."
- 01.32.01 NEWSUB "Here they come."
- 01.32.15 NEWBNSUB "I'm very proud my son."
- 01.32.18 NEWBNSUB "Jar-Jar, this alliance with the Naboo is thanks to you,"
- 01.32.22 NEWJJSUB "No, no, no..."
- 01.32.23 NEWBNSUB "Yes! You and Tarpals shall be our armies Generals."
- 01.32.28 Jar-Jar feinting removed
- 01.33.23 NEWBNSUB "The Gungans do not fear death."
- 01.34.51 NEWCTSUB "Halt!"
- 01.34.55 NEWCTSUB "Start up the shield generators."
- 01.35.42 Qui-Gon "Once we get inside" speech removed
- 01.36.18 Qui-Gon "Ani find cover" line removed
- 01.36.20 Padme "Get to your ships" line redubbed with superior TPM Trailer take
- 01.36.48 Direct shot of bodyguard removed
- 01.36.52 Shots of Anakin taking off brought forward
- 01.36.53 Anakin saying "Oops" etc removed
- 01.37.09 Shots of Anakin leaving hanger brought forward
- 01.37.10 Anakin's "Try and override it" line removed
- 01.37.25 Shots and dialogue of Anakin arriving in space brought forward
- 01.37.26 "That's where the auto..." line removed
- 01.37.52 NEWJJSUB "Steady... steady."
- 01.38.46 NEWCTSUB "I got a bad feeling about this..."
- 01.39.02 NEWCTSUB "Fire!"
- 01.39.05 Jar-Jar falling off his mount removed
- 01.39.07 All shots of Jar-Jar clowning around with "Big boomers" removed
- 01.39.16 Panaka "Red group" line and surrounding shots removed
- 01.39.17 "Hey wait for me" sequence removed
- 01.39.38 All footage involving Droidikas and Anakin removed
- 01.39.39 Queen exiting hanger footage brought forward
- 01.39.51 Hanger duel long shot removed and rest of hanger duel brought forward
- 01.40.56 All footage of Jar-Jar clowning with broken Droid removed
- 01.41.15 "this is tense" line removed
- 01.41.18 "R2 get us off..." line and footage removed
- 01.41.19 "Okay let's go left" line removed
- 01.41.21 "Go back..." line and footage removed
- 01.41.30 "I'll try spinning..." line and cockpit footage removed
- 01.43.59 NEWJJSUB "Halt, halt!"
- 01.44.02 All dialogue and footage of Jar-Jar hiding under boomer cart removed
- 01.44.07 NEWJJSUB "If I can just release these bombs... ahhh!"
- 01.44.10 All Shots of Jar-Jar looking in horror and running from Boomers removed
- 01.44.17 NEWJJSUB "General Tarpals!"
- 01.44.22 All footage of involving Jar-Jar, Tarpals and the Tank ride removed
- 01.44.26 Jar-Jar shaking head vocal re-dubbed
- 01.45.15 "Oops" removed
- 01.46.04 close up of Obi-Wan screaming "Noooooooo!" removed
- 01.46.29 NEWCTSUB "This is the end General Jar-Jar,"
- 01.46.32 NEWCTSUB "I hope we bought the Naboo enough time."
- 01.46.34 "My give up" line and footage removed
- 01.46.52 Bodyguard dialogue removed and partial footage removal
- 01.46.56 "After her..." line removed
- 01.47.20 Space battle finale brought forward
- 01.47.24 "Take this... whoah!" dialogue removed
- 01.47.32 "Oops" removed
- 01.48.01 "This is podracing" line removed
- 01.48.02 Anakin leaving control ship hanger brought forward and "whoooo" line removed
- 01.48.03 "One of ours..." line removed
- 01.48.04 Anakin and other pilots celebrating brought forward
- 01.48.11 Pilots escaping shot pushed back
- 01.48.22 NEWJJSUB "They've all stopped..."
- 01.48.24 NEWCTSUB "The Naboo must of knocked out the control ship... look!"
- 01.48.28 Jar-Jar poking Droid removed
- 01.48.36 Obi-Wan's first solo duel with Maul pushed back
- 01.48.52 Long shot of Obi and Maul twirling their sabres around removed
- 01.49.03 All footage after this point showing Obi-Wan getting knocked down the pit removed
- 01.49.04 Obi-Wan killing Maul scene brought forward
- 01.49.05 Obi-Wan flip over Maul removed and green saber rotoscoped to blue in all shots
- 01.53.32 NEWJJSUB "Hello everybody!"
- 01.53.52 Shot of Jar-Jar catching his foot in stirup removed
- 01.54.17 NEWBNSUB "Peace!"
- 01.54.58 Final cheeky credit for yours truly



Subtitles Key:

NEWJJSUB = New Jar-Jar subtitle
NEWCTSUB = New Captin Tarpals subtitle
NEWWATSUB = New Watto subtitle
NEWANSUB = New Anakin subtitle
NEWSEBSUB = New Sebulba subtitle
NEWBESUB = New Beed subtitle
NEWBNSUB = New Boss Nass subtitle


Change total almost 300 (Not including another hundred or so dialogue re-dubs to go with new subtitles)

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Looks interesting there, though usually most changelists are slightly more general.  I'll certainly watch your edits when I have the time.

I did like some edits you used in your ROTS opening.

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emanswfan said:

Looks interesting there, though usually most changelists are slightly more general.  I'll certainly watch your edits when I have the time.

I did like some edits you used in your ROTS opening.

Thanks!

Has anyone download TPM:Reborn from Mega?

If so did it all download and unpack okay?

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TPM: Reborn - How The Boonta Eve Classic should have gone down

 

Newly added to my Vimeo page...

http://vimeo.com/65608314

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Most exhaustive change list ever. You beat Adywan's Episode IV change list (in terms of how much information is given).

Don’t do drugs, unless you’re with me.

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Neglify said:

Most exhaustive change list ever. You beat Adywan's Episode IV change list (in terms of how much information is given).

Awesome!

If I've been more OCD about my list than the mighty Adywan I feel some sort of medal is in order.

I really should crack on with similar lists for AOTC and ROTS.

PM sent on fanedit.org

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AOTC: Reborn now uploaded to mega.co.nz

PM me for the new link.

Or get the full torrent package from MySpleen (It's fully seeded now)

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ROTS:Reborn just finished uploading to mega.co.nz

That's my whole trilogy up their now.

PM me if you want a direct link.

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- Young Boba remains silent making him seem angry, cold and more in keeping with ESB's Boba.
- Anakin and Padme do not have a number of bitter arguments (Before inexplicably falling in love).
- No uses of the phrase "Younglings".
- All subtitles partially or completely rewritten to alter character and story.

- 00.00.00 Old ROTJ Fox fanfare used
- 00.00.10 OT Lucasfilm logo used
- 00.02.17 Fake Senator on board shot removed
- 00.03.00 Closeup of Padme removed
- 00.03.05 "We made it..." line removed
- 00.03.09 "There was no danger..." line removed
- 00.04.07 Padme addressing the senate scene partially re-instated
- 00.04.10 "Must I remind..." and other Palpatine lines from senate scene removed
- 00.04.28 Close-up of Jar-Jar replaced with shot of Palpatine
- 00.05.14 Shot of Jar-Jar removed
- 00.05.17 Palpatine's aide waggling his CGI tongue removed
- 00.06.25 NEWSUB "The oyalist Commitee has arrived, your honor."
- 00.06.29 NEWSUB "Shall I admit them?"
- 00.08.42 "You'resweating" line removed
- 00.09.04 New Jar-Jar dub and SUB "Obi...? Ha ha Obi,"
- 00.09.07 New Jar-Jar dub and SUB "it's been so many years."
- 00.09.11 New Jar-Jar dub and SUB "Senator Amidala..."
- 00.09.12 New Jar-Jar dub and SUB "our old Jedi friend has arrived,"
- 00.09.16 New Jar-Jar dub and SUB "master Kenobi."
- 00.09.40 "You'll always be that little boy" line removed
- 00.10.19 "Overkill master" argument removed
- 00.10.52 New Jar-Jar dub and SUB "You've sure grown in 10 years Ani,"
- 00.11.06 New Jar-Jar dub and SUB "No, it's just a long time my friend."
- 00.16.01 CGI Alien in speeder removed
- 00.16.02 Obi-Wan reacting to Alien shot flipped
- 00.16.05 CGI Aliens in Taxi shot part one removed
- 00.16.06 CGI Aliens in Taxi shot part two removed
- 00.16.14 Establishing shot of Xan removed
- 00.16.29 Xan aiming shortened
- 00.16.39 Shot of Obi-Wan falling shortened
- 00.16.41 Shot of Anakin banking shortened
- 00.16.49 Shot of Obi-Wan falling shortened
- 00.17.01 "There he is..." exchange removed
- 00.17.02 "If you spent..." line brought forward
- 00.17.18 Anakin flipping speeder shot shortened and shot removed
- 00.17.34 Shot of Ob-Wan pleading Anakin to pull up and Anakin just laughing removed
- 00.17.35 Shot of Anakin grinning removed
- 00.17.49 Whole of the pink-forcefield/Blade-Runner-pastiche sequence removed
- 00.18.04 "Where are you going..." conversation and footage removed
- 00.18.27 "That was some shortcut..." dialogue removed
- 00.18.28 OT Hero music sting inserted
- 00.18.29 "I hate it..." line removed
- 00.18.35 Anakin falling shot shortened
- 00.18.45 Anakin hanging on shot flipped and all footage of Anakin climbing about removed
- 00.19.02 Shot of Obi-Wan catching saber shortened
- 00.19.29 Fake looking CGI crash shortened
- 00.20.27 "Think" single word removed
- 00.20.34 Final "Yes master" and "Try not to..." lines removed
- 00.20.40 "You're the closet..." line removed
- 00.20.41 Shot of sports bar interior brought forward
- 00.20.49 Brief shot of Obi-Wan and Anikin scanning the room removed
- 00.21.07 Shot of Anakin searching removed
- 00.23.47 "Anaking go to..." line and footage removed
- 00.24.44 Jedi temple scene completely removed
- 00.24.47 "I'm taking line.." removed
- 00.24.52 Padme talking to Jar-Jar removed
- 00.25.42 "In some ways..." dialogue removed
- 00.25.46 "All mentors..." dialogue brought forward
- 00.26.41 Shot of handmaiden crying shortened
- 00.26.47 "It's not me..." line removed
- 00.28.13 Opening diner shot flipped
- 00.28.20 Obi-Wan "Hello" shot flipped
- 00.28.22 "Take a seat..." shot flipped
- 00.28.23 Obi-Wan walking to seat and 'Jawa Juice' shots removed
- 00.28.28 "Hhhhheeeeeyyyyyyy!" single word removed
- 00.29.05 All dialogue refering to analysis archive droids in this scene removed
- 00.29.44 Pickup closeup shot of 'candyfloss-beard/mullet-wig' Obi-Wan removed
- 00.29.45 Obi-Wan searching archive scene completely removed
- 00.31.09 "Younglings" removed
- 00.31.12 Kids "Hello Master Obi-Wan" chorus and Obi-Wan's reply removed
- 00.33.24 Bag carrying scene removed
- 00.33.25 Padme's parents' house scene partially re-instated
- 00.34.23 "It's so good..." line removed
- 00.34.28 "I had to..." line removed
- 00.34.43 "Oh Padme..." and following lines removed
- 00.34.51 Padme's mother's cringe worthy look removed
- 00.34.52 "Why haven't you.." and following lines removed
- 00.34.58 "Anakin and I..." line removed
- 00.34.59 Shot of Anakin in the garden pushed back
- 00.35.00 Shot of Padme glancing at her mother brought forward
- 00.35.01 Shot of Padme's mother shortened
- 00.35.07 Jedi landing platform deleted scene fully re-instated
- 00.37.44 Padme and Anakin argument removed
- 00.37.47 "Perfect" line removed
- 00.40.53 Picnic scene brought forward
- 00.40.54 First part of scene removed and intro re-dubbed with "You really..." lines
- 00.41.53 Rest of cow mis-treatment and Julie Andrews scene removed
- 00.41.54 Lake/Kiss scene pushed back and Army tour scene brought forward
- 00.44.18 "We used to let..." line and rest of sand dialogue removed
- 00.44.26 Anakin rubbing Padme's back removed
- 00.44.53 Padme stopping the kiss removed
- 00.45.19 "Yep" line removed
- 00.45.22 "Sure" line removed
- 00.45.24 "Dad" line removed
- 00.45.26 "Taun We's here" line removed
- 00.47.23 "What is it dad?" line removed
- 00.47.34 Floating-pear-lunch and fireside-basque scenes completely removed
- 00.47.35 Anakin's dream removed and Balcony/morning scene brought forward
- 00.51.13 "Dad look" line removed
- 00.51.36 All shots of Boba firing a massive laser cannon at an indestructible Obi-Wan removed
- 00.51.37 Reaction shot of Boba pushed back
- 00.52.11 Shots of Digi-Double Jango and jetpack shortened
- 00.52.22 Digi-Double Obi-Wan flip shortened
- 00.52.28 Two shots of Boba and Obi-Wan slowly sliding removed
- 00.52.44 Long shot of Obi-Wan falling removed
- 00.52.39 Shot of Obi-Wan hanging around removed
- 00.52.40 Obi-Wan flipping onto gantry and opening door brought forward into one smooth sequence
- 00.53.03 Shot of Obi-Wan still hanging around removed
- 00.53.04 Shots of Obi-Wan swinging back and forth removed
- 00.53.25 Shot of Jango banging his head partially removed
- 00.53.26 Shot of Obi-Wan igniting his saber brought forward
- 00.54.27 NEWSUB "Away with you!"
- 00.54.30 NEWSUB "Hello Watto,"
- 00.54.33 NEWSUB "Let me fix that for you."
- 00.54.36 NEWSUB "What? What o you want?"
- 00.54.40 NEWSUB "Wait! You're a Jedi!"
- 00.54.43 NEWSUB "Whatever it is, I didn't do it."
- 00.54.51 NEWSUB "I'm looking for Shmi Skywalker."
- 00.56.40 "He must of..." line brought forward
- 00.56.42 "Dad, I think..." line removed
- 00.56.44 Shot of Slave 1 enter asteroid field brought forward
- 00.56.45 "Hang on son..." line pushed back
- 00.56.47 Shot of Jango pressing a button brought forward
- 00.56.50 Boba laughing removed
- 00.56.59 Shots of mines being deployed removed
- 00.56.50 Mine rotoscoped out of long shot of Slave 1 and shot shortened
- 00.56.63 "Seismic charges" line removed
- 00.56.64 All shots of Obi-Wan evading exploding mines removed (R4 and cockpit shots retained)
- 00.56.59 "He doesn't seem to..." line pushed back
- 00.57.00 Shot of Jango entering asteroid interior brought forward
- 00.57.16 "Watch out" line removed
- 00.57.36 "Get him dad... fire" line removed
- 00.57.35 Slave 1 coming at the screen shot shortened
- 00.57.43 Slave 1 wheeling round shot shortened
- 00.57.46 Slave 1 rapid fire shot shortened
- 00.57.48 Slave 1 closing in shot shortened
- 00.57.53 "We got him..." line removed
- 00.58.02 Missile homing in shot shortened
- 00.58.16 Missile banking shot shortened and then next pursuing shot removed
- 00.58.40 "Well we won't..." shot shortened
- 01.01.12 Introduction of Owen, Beru and Padme removed
- 01.01.58 "Mindless monsters..." lines removed
- 01.05.49 NEWSUB "The commerce Guild's forces are arriving as we speak"
- 01.05.52 Banking clan pledge brought forward and shortened
- 01.05.56 Techno-union guy twidling his right nipple-nut to make his voice work (And presumably not to 'Pick up JazzFM') removed
- 01.07.39 Couple of "Ani"s removed
- 01.07.45 "My grown up son..." line removed
- 01.07.49 "Now I am complete" line removed
- 01.08.05 second "I love you" removed
- 01.08.55 Transition redone to follow direction and speed of Anakin's saber blow
- 01.10.13 "This is Obi-Wan Kenobi" line cut and footage re-dubbed with next line
- 01.12.17 "Why'd she have to die..." dialogue removed
- 01.12.45 'Blame it on Obi-Wan' tantrum removed
- 01.13.55 "I know I'm better than this" line removed
- 01.14.15 "Loving partner" line removed
- 01.16.53 Padme and Anakin argument over Obi-Wan removed
- 01.16.54 "But you heard..." shot of Anakin flipped
- 01.16.69 "I'm going to help..." shot flipped
- 01.17.11 Anakin smiling shot flipped
- 01.17.32 Impressive Gran makeup showcase shot removed
- 01.17.33 NEWSUB "The time for debate is over, we must have an army."
- 01.17.48 "But what senator..." dialogue and footage of Jar-Jar removed
- 01.17.49 Emergency powers senate scene brought forward
- 01.17.56 Mace walking into senate re-dubbed and scene re-cut to remove Jar-Jar proposal
- 01.18.21 Shot of Jar-Jar looking smug replaced with shot of Yoda and Mace
- 01.18.43 Added a sprinkle of darkside music
- 01.19.23 Obi-Wan "Traitor" line removed and re-dubbed with "Dooku"
- 01.19.27 "This is a terrible..." and "I thought you..." lines removed
- 01.23.32 Two shots of Threepio following R2 removed
- 01.23.37 Shots revealing approaching Geonosians removed
- 01.23.40 "Wait" line removed
- 01.23.45 Shot of R2 and Threepio removed
- 01.24.12 Shots of Padme negotiating obstacle course removed
- 01.24.13 Shots of Padme getting knocked into the vat brought forward
- 01.24.33 Several shots of Anaking battling Geonosians removed
- 01.24.34 Several shots of R2 and Threepio entering the factory and R2 flying removed
- 01.24.35 Footage of molten metal danger brought forward
- 01.24.48 Flipped shot of Threepio still on the ship inserted and re-dubbed
- 01.24.52 Edited shots of R2 saving Padme brought forward
- 01.25.15 Shot of Padme's capture brought forward
- 01.25.22 Shots of Anakin getting hit by arm removed
- 01.25.24 Shots of Anakin's arm trapped on the belt removed
- 01.25.36 Shot of Padme surrounded pushed back
- 01.25.48 Early establishing shot of the arena removed
- 01.25.48 Dooku interrogates Padme deleted scene fully re-instated
- 01.26.41 NEWSUB "Prepare her for trial"
- 01.26.43 Anakin & Padme on trial fully re-instated
- 01.26.44 NEWSUB "You have been charged and found guilty of espionage."
- 01.26.55 NEWSUB "War is our business Senator Amidala,"
- 01.26.58 NEWSUB "Your senate will find us more than prepared."
- 01.27.07 NEWSUB "Your Jedi friend is waiting for you Senator..."
- 01.27.13 NEWSUB "...in the arena!"
- 01.27.30 "I've been dying a..." and "What are you..." lines removed
- 01.27.40 "I thought we had decided..." discussion removed
- 01.29.40 NEWSUB "Welcome, today's games are in honor of Viceroy Guneray!"
- 01.29.20 NEWSUB "Guards, open the cages!"
- 01.29.28 "I've got a bad feeling..." line and part of footage brought foward
- 01.29.57 Shot of guards  removed
- 01.30.20 "Just relax..." dialogue removed
- 01.30.29 Shot of Obi-Wan evading mantis creature shortened
- 01.30.32 2nd shot of bull creature charging removed
- 01.30.48 Face on shot of Padme screaming removed
- 01.30.50 Guneray's chuckle removed
- 01.30.51 Shot of mantis creature roaring at the camera removed
- 01.30.54 POV shot of mantis creature and aerial shot removed
- 01.31.59 "Shoot her or something" dialogue pushed back
- 01.31.14 Areial shot of cat creature shortened
- 01.31.20 POV shot of mantis creature screaming removed
- 01.31.30 Close up of bull creature removed
- 01.31.47 Close up of bull creature removed
- 01.31.51 Fake digi-double shot shortened
- 01.32.10 Aerial shot of cat creature shortened
- 01.32.13 Shot of Padme inserted
- 01.32.17 Padme kissing Anakin removed and "Yah!" pushed back
- 01.32.32 "This isn't how..." line pushed back
- 01.32.55 Mace early reveal shot removed
- 01.33.06 "This parties over" line removed and "Brave but foolish..." dialogue brought forward
- 01.33.27 "We'll see" line removed
- 01.34.01 Shot of Threepio's body clowning removed
- 01.34.09 First chariot sequence removed
- 01.34.13 Second chariot sequence removed
- 01.34.20 Shot of Threepio's head clowning removed
- 01.34.33 Threepio's body getting shot sequence removed
- 01.34.35 Shot of Guneray ducking laser blasts brought forward
- 01.34.36 Jango's shots hitting Jedi and Jedi falling shortened
- 01.34.40 Berserk bull creature sequence and Jango vs Mace pushed back
- 01.34.41 Obi-Wan finishing mantis creature brought forward
- 01.34.58 Obi-Wan twirling his saber shortened
- 01.34.59 Fearsome young Jedi sequence pushed back
- 01.35.00 Last few chariot ride shots removed
- 01.35.01 Padme and Anakin taking shelter sequence brought forward
- 01.35.19 New scene created from several elements showing Guneray asking Jango to join the fight
- 01.35.26 First part of berserk bull creature sequence shortened
- 01.35.28 Jango taking off brought forward
- 01.35.33 Jango landing and grabbing for Mace's saber sequence flipped
- 01.35.37 Jango scuffle with bull creature sequence removed
- 01.35.37 Jango standing up shot brought forward and linked with Mace attack shot
- 01.35.39 Long shot of Mace bearing down removed
- 01.35.42 Jango's head bouncing shot shortened
- 01.35.52 Geonosian cannon and Jedi charge shots flipped
- 01.35.54 "Die Jedi dogs..." and "Such a drag..." Threepio sequences removed
- 01.36.00 R2 repairing Threepio scene removed
- 01.37.07 "Look" line removed
- 01.37.21 Yoda's "...A perimeter create" re-dubbed to "...Create a perimeter"
- 01.38.14 Last shot of R2 and Threepio removed
- 01.39.20 NEWSUB "Our communications have been jammed."
- 01.41.15 NEWSUB "We have to order a retreat."
- 01.41.23 NEWSUB "I'm sending my warriors to hide in the catacombs"
- 01.41.27 NEWSUB "They must not find our designs for the ultimate weapon."
- 01.41.33 NEWSUB "If they find out what we're planning,"
- 01.41.36 NEWSUB "we'll lose all support in the senate."
- 01.41.40 NEWSUB "Here my Lord."
- 01.44.09 Padme rolling shortened
- 01.44.31 "You will be expelled..." line removed
- 01.45.00 Padme waking up scene brought forward
- 01.45.07 Padme ordering the Clone trooper removed
- 01.45.08 Shot of Dooku removed
- 01.46.33 Shot of Anakin just waking replaced by later shot of Anakin nearly recovered
- 01.46.45 Fake Anakin digi-double leap removed and audio remixed
- 01.47.19 Excessive and pointless saber twirling reduced
- 01.47.30 Long shot of Anakin just waiting for his arm to be lopped off removed
- 01.47.44 Shot of Dooku turning round replaced with closeup of Dooku
- 01.47.57 Force pull contest sequence pushed back
- 01.48.00 "I've become more..." line and force lightning sequence brought forward
- 01.48.22 "It is clear this..." line removed
- 01.48.25 Yoda drawing his saber shortened
- 01.48.31 Shot of Dooku in mid air removed
- 01.48.32 Yoda leaping removed
- 01.48.32 Yoda leaping removed and next shots flipped
- 01.48.41 Extended Yoda leaping sequence removed
- 01.48.56 Long shot of Yoda clopped closer to remove Dooku from the frame
- 01.49.17 "The darkside I sense in you..." line inserted
- 01.49.26 Shot of Dooku using force pull inserted
- 01.49.30 Long shot of Dooku and Yoda with lit sabers removed
- 01.49.35 Dooku's lit saber rotoscoped out of ramp shot
- 01.49.37 Two orce power shots removed
- 01.49.50 Dooku escaping brought forward and Padme arriving removed
- 01.50.12 Yoda picking up his cane and hobbling removed
- 01.55.29 Cheeky credit for yours truly

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Ryan McAvoy said:

marioxb said:

Sounds really cool. One thing I'd really like to see in an edit is Padme not dying, as per Leia's memories in ROTJ. The Kcutter did a good job making a scene like that.

That would be nice but can't think how you would A: Show her alive on Alderaan and B: Explain why she let Kenobi kidnap her child and "Hide" him on a farm in Tatooine. A farm that she knew the location of. Why wouldn't she visit.

This seems like a rare ill thought through problem with the OT that wasn't possible to reflect in the PT.

Would love to hear if anybody has ideas to solve this conundrum.

In my cut, Anakin audiably crushes Padme's spine. She later dies from her injuries after giving birth to unmamed twins. She doesn't choose to die from a broken heart leaving her children parentless.

 A. Here's how The Cutter did that using footage from another movie:

http://www.mediafire.com/?1d57u12kw8tz4cb