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Hello everyone! I am in the middle of making an edit of TFA that I was making for my own private viewing but as it’s gone on, it seems like I may need a second opinion on one section of the film.
I never liked how Rey used the Jedi mind trick to save herself and how she defeats Kylo. I think ive done a good job in “fixing” both of these issues but in order for Finn, Han and Chewie to save Rey, I have had to reorder the majority of scenes that take place on Starkiller base. This means that I am unsure of how well this actually works as I am a bit worried about the pacing and consistency throughout.
I have uploaded the footage and put a link below. Its 13 mins in length (sorry) but if you wish to help me, I hope that you could watch from start to finish and not skip through so that I can get the kind of feedback that I require (pacing & consistency).
A few things to note before watching:
1 Video – The first scene has Hux speaking to Snoke. Kylo should not be there at all. I have removed Kylo from the first 2 shots of Hux but not removed him from the rest so ignore the inconsistency there, it’s a WIP.
2 Audio – It can be kind of bad in certain sections, there is an AWFUL audio cut when we go back to Finn saying “Lower the shields!” to Phasma. It will be corrected, it’s a WIP
Again, im looking for feedback on the pacing and consistency of the entire video. Thank you to anyone who helps.
https://vimeo.com/214496811
Password: fanedit