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Star Wars: The Complete Screenplay

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I actually started this around Christmas, but had more time with the quarantine to be able to finish it. What this is is a version of the screenplay for the original Star Wars, reordered and extended with elements of the third, fourth, and revised fourth drafts, as well as sequences from the novelization and radio drama (and my own imagination). What I think this represents is what Star Wars might have been if allowed to be every bit as epic as Lucas had first imagined it. It takes the structure of the final film (scene order and all), but the events are shown in far more detail. I’m pleased with how it turned out, and I hope you all enjoy it too.

You can find it here.

Hope you enjoy! And May the (Belated) Fourth be with You!

I’m just here because I’m driving tonight.

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This is really good. Are you going to do this for other Star Wars movies?

Everything after Empire Strikes Back is shit.

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Yes I am! I’m actually going to go more and more radical with each film, incorporating elements from different stages in each film’s development. I’m currently about forty pages into ESB.

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Any updates?

“The Dark Side of the Force is a pathway to many abilities some consider to be unnatural.”
-Sheev Palpatine, Star Wars: Revenge of the Sith (2005)

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What did you use to write this behemoth?

“The Dark Side of the Force is a pathway to many abilities some consider to be unnatural.”
-Sheev Palpatine, Star Wars: Revenge of the Sith (2005)

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CamSMurph said:

What did you use to write this behemoth?

Are you talking about the sources of material or what software?

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Tack said:

CamSMurph said:

What did you use to write this behemoth?

Are you talking about the sources of material or what software?

Both, actually. 😏

“The Dark Side of the Force is a pathway to many abilities some consider to be unnatural.”
-Sheev Palpatine, Star Wars: Revenge of the Sith (2005)

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I see!

Well, for the first part, it largely comes from various drafts of the Star Wars screenplays. Chiefly of course is the revised fourth draft, with occasional rearrangements based on how I thought scenes should flow or to roughly match the scene order of the final cut. Then, several scene extensions and setpieces come from the third draft, such as the expanded scenes on Yavin IV or the trash compactor scene. Sometimes I deferred to the continuity script on the Star Wars Aficionado blog for things that weren’t chronicled in any available script draft (mainly small bits of dialogue). Then, certain EU resources came in handy too. The novelization by Alan Dean Foster has a lot of overwrought dialogue but also useful things like scene extensions (the training scene in the Falcon’s main hold, for example). Similarly, small extensions from the radio drama by Brian Daley (whose script I have in book form) were also valuable since in many cases they came from direct consultation with Lucasfilm. However, an even greater bit of the script comes from my own ideas. I’m particularly proud of my expanded Battle of Yavin with the various squad leaders interacting and a more concrete attack plan than any version of the screenplay.

I’m slow at work (because of school and career stuff) on an expanded version of The Empire Strikes Back, with many ideas from early in production re-introduced and the existing plot expanded greatly. I think it’ll be even longer than this one ended up. Already I have most of the first episode of the radio drama with the attack on the Rebel convoy acting as the film’s new inciting incident.

To answer the question on software, it’s a plug-in for Google Docs called Screenplay Formatter. Most of it is done automatically, and you just have to fiddle with it a bit to get things where you want them.

Hope it helps. 😃

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Never knew that. WriterDuet is a great alternative. 😃

“The Dark Side of the Force is a pathway to many abilities some consider to be unnatural.”
-Sheev Palpatine, Star Wars: Revenge of the Sith (2005)