It looks very promising. A very nice atmosphere you've created.
A few niggles:
When your A-man logo zooms on screen it doesn't line completely up with the static version and there's a jump when that appears.
No offense meant, but I really didn't like that 'ave maria' bit. Felt a bit pretentious to me, and I don't like the religious connotations. But maybe it's just me lol :) As I said, no offense meant.
Could just be the clip, but in mplayer it plays slightly out of sync.
Again, possibly just the clip, but it seems your video is not (properly) ivtc'ed, or there is some other interlace issue? Most noticeable right after the interior shot when the building passes on the left and the pan at the landing pad. It looks jerky.
man I couldn't agree with you more,this editing by some people is getting way overboard,totally losing the SW environment,that did not look and feel like Star Wars at all,but I guess to each there own,this just is not for me.