MTHaslett said:
It certainly becomes clear that Obi Wan is simply waiting until Luke shows up. This, of course, turns what was subtext into something absolutely clear and undeniable-- a risky course in storytelling.
You might try to include a beat of Darth overpowering Obi Wan before Luke arrives to show that Obi Wan is not going to win... then his smile at seeing Luke will play more as a "surprise" reveal to the audience. "Ah-- he had a plan!" As it is, it plays like Obi Wan could duke it out, but he mysteriously chooses not to (with a wry smile to prove it's related to Luke being there).
I guess it's not really more subtle either way. But if you put Obi Wan more on the ropes, there will be more dramatic ups and downs in this sequence.
I appreciate the comments. I've already started working on sabers for what I've already cut. I think it works the way I have it. I hear what you're saying, but I cut it several before deciding on this cut. I don't have a problem with him looking like he's in control of the situation. In fact, I really like it. The whole movie Vader seem unstoppable, but for a moment it looks like he has someone who can at least match him. Hence the shot of Vader with his saber already ignited. I love that moment, because it actually shows weakness in Vader. He comes off a bit nervous. And he has so few weak moments that I like it this way. And it shows more contrast when he's down right cocky with Luke.
But again, thanks for commenting. Every comment gives more motivation to knock this out. =)
