Star Wars Rebels Recut - A Fanedit TV Series — Page 5

Okay, just wanted you to know.
I’ve also noticed several grammatical errors or typos in your openings. I’d be willing to help with those if you’d like.

yoshif8tures said:

Okay, just wanted you to know.
I’ve also noticed several grammatical errors or typos in your openings. I’d be willing to help with those if you’d like.

I was waiting for this! Hahaha! Can you PM them to me so I can fix them up? 😃

g00b said:

At this stage I’ve learned towards the wipe as I’ve seen rebels do the same thing (wipe cut mid conversation)

If you could have the audio fade out as it wipes, it might help it feel like her dialogue is meant to “trail on” as opposed to it just ending in the middle.

sirlegion13 said:

g00b said:

At this stage I’ve learned towards the wipe as I’ve seen rebels do the same thing (wipe cut mid conversation)

If you could have the audio fade out as it wipes, it might help it feel like her dialogue is meant to “trail on” as opposed to it just ending in the middle.

I see what you mean sirLegion13! I’ll be revisiting and fixing up this episode. Sometimes I make some strange choices while editing hahaha

Twilight of the Apprentice is taking a bit longer to get out then my normal. That’s because I have a few audio and visual edits as well as cuts. The cuts that are here are also a bit trickier as I’m trying to find a balance with the lightsaber helicopters.

Doing a bit of polish work on Season 1 and 2 before I move onto V3s for season 3 + 4. Want to make the series feel even smoother to watch! 😄 So Keep an eye out, you’ll start to see a few V3.#s

Just one more season to get to V3! (and corrections and touch ups of previous work if any get pointed out!)

Hey! Can I get a link please? Thanks

PM sent 😃

Would appreciate a link as well!

PM sent 😃

I am very impressed with your edits so far, well done. If you ever plan on tweaking them further, I’d suggest fading to black in your opening and closing credits could be improved, but otherwise its a solid job and I look forward to its completion

yoshif8tures said:

I am very impressed with your edits so far, well done. If you ever plan on tweaking them further, I’d suggest fading to black in your opening and closing credits could be improved, but otherwise its a solid job and I look forward to its completion

Thanks Yoshif8tures! I’m keen to get the V3s finished. Then I’ll take a break from the project. Thanks for the feedback though! I imagine I’ll return to this edit once I’ve made some other edits or gotten some more experience with editing. This is the first time I’ve really attempted anything like this! Hahaha. My V1s we’re my first time using editing software so as I become better in the future I’ll likely be back for further polish!

I’d say for the whole it’s pretty good. I love how you removed all the helicopter lightsabers and took out the majority of the goofiness with the early seasons and removed the unnecessary filler.

Rebels Recut - S03E01 - Into Shadow - V3 needs a bit more work as the edits between scenes are quite noticable

yoshif8tures said:

Rebels Recut - S03E01 - Into Shadow - V3 needs a bit more work as the edits between scenes are quite noticable

Thanks Yoshif8tures!

I’ll check that out once I’ve finished my S04E04 episode!

I think the darksaber of mandalore episode has to be one of the weakest. All the mandalorians seem flat and one note and Sabines running away and her motives make no sense and apparently she’s some fantastic weapons designer but she’s only a kid? I don’t know if you can trim the dialogue more, but this episode felt the most gamey to me.

yoshif8tures said:

I think the darksaber of mandalore episode has to be one of the weakest. All the mandalorians seem flat and one note and Sabines running away and her motives make no sense and apparently she’s some fantastic weapons designer but she’s only a kid? I don’t know if you can trim the dialogue more, but this episode felt the most gamey to me.

I’ll put that on my list to revisit. I’m not sure if much more can be down but I’ll definitely look at it again! 😃

losthead said:

Could I please have a link?

PM sent 😃

My progress on this edit will slow down a bit even though I’m so close to the end! And I may take a bit longer to reply to link requests and feedback! My first child has just been born so I imagine that’ll keep me away from my edit for a while! My focus when I get time will be to finish off the series in V3 then address feedback 😃

Congratulations g00b!

I hope your baby does not use you as target practice while changing diapers. Best of luck with the journey of parenthood.

Congrats mate!

would love to check this out! I’m trying to get my mum to sit down and watch these. So any edit thats letss time consuming would be helpful. If you could send me these edits too. I would be grateful. Also congrats on your baby. great news indeed!