Oye I finally watched your edit.
All in all, you did a fantastic job.
There were some good cuts and a good flow to it all.
The reduction of the Rathar scene was good since it didn’t drag on too long.
The “masked” interrogation worked well. I personally like the thinking behind it. Somewhat wonky, but hey, I like the idea better.
Good job about cutting away Chewy during the Ray and Leia hugging was good … such a silly mistake on JJ about that part.
Granted there are some cuts I miss … like the troopers walking away from Kylo’s frustration.
Not a huge fan of the holo-snoke, personally a bit distracting to me visually. Plus the idea of a more realistic take of the hologram from TFA shows some improvement on technology since the PT era and OT. Even without that point, it was a bit distracting to me.