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Star Wars - Episode IV: The Heir of Skywalker (V2 in development) — Page 4

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The color correction looks good.

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After reading through the comments about the Alderaan destruction, I just want to say VALERIAN has a very cool planet destruction scene that, if done right, would be great for an Alderaan replacement. It may be worth looking into

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Thank you for the suggestion. I’ll check it out!

Italian faneditor.

EDITS LIST:
CHOSEN ONE - A STAR WARS STORY (3-in-1 prequels).
Personal saga: I - SHADOW OF THE PAST. II - KEEPERS OF THE PEACE. III - RISE OF THE DARK SIDE. IV - THE HEIR OF SKYWALKER. VI - RETURN OF THE JEDI.
Just look for them around here, and PM me for links if interested.

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Alright… yesterday I tried to make the Obi Wan VS Vader sequence to look like this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mm4JEZudf0c

Basically we start with DoF when we see Vader in the hallway, and then we follow the music. The main change is that Luke, Han and Leia leave the DS with the Falcon while Ben is still fighting. So Luke does not witness his death, but he feels it (with the shot of Luke looking up just before the Tie Fighters approach).
It sounded cool, but the great problem is that the trio leaves the Death Star without Kenobi, and without knowing he is dead. I tried to add Ben’s voice saying “Run, Luke, Run” while he is fighting Vader, but it didn’t sound ok.

Unless someone has ideas to give the duel more rhythm, I’ll keep the original duel with some music tracks…

Italian faneditor.

EDITS LIST:
CHOSEN ONE - A STAR WARS STORY (3-in-1 prequels).
Personal saga: I - SHADOW OF THE PAST. II - KEEPERS OF THE PEACE. III - RISE OF THE DARK SIDE. IV - THE HEIR OF SKYWALKER. VI - RETURN OF THE JEDI.
Just look for them around here, and PM me for links if interested.

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OBI WAN VS VADER TEST.

It is not finished. Not at all.
https://vimeo.com/362094169
password: fanedit

I gave up about making the sequence look like that trailer I posted before, but I think it can be changed a bit from the original.
The audio is still extremely rough, as is the video. Lightsabers not finished, color correction not finished. I posted it just to show the new rhythm of the sequence.
Please, tell me what you think of it. Remember that the purpose of my saga edit is to keep a consistent tone, also with music tracks. So we have prequel trilogy music and a bit of Rogue One.
Again, tell me is it’s at least acceptable. 😉

Italian faneditor.

EDITS LIST:
CHOSEN ONE - A STAR WARS STORY (3-in-1 prequels).
Personal saga: I - SHADOW OF THE PAST. II - KEEPERS OF THE PEACE. III - RISE OF THE DARK SIDE. IV - THE HEIR OF SKYWALKER. VI - RETURN OF THE JEDI.
Just look for them around here, and PM me for links if interested.

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In the previous one, there was the problem of the trio abandoning the Death Star without Obi Wan, and without even seeing him.
In this one, they see Obi Wan, but they realize that’s impossible to leave with him, and he manages to order Luke to run. With this change, we can alternate the duel with the Tie Fighters chase, with a whole new rhythm.
Right now I’m working on the audio, and then I’ll work on the visual side.

Italian faneditor.

EDITS LIST:
CHOSEN ONE - A STAR WARS STORY (3-in-1 prequels).
Personal saga: I - SHADOW OF THE PAST. II - KEEPERS OF THE PEACE. III - RISE OF THE DARK SIDE. IV - THE HEIR OF SKYWALKER. VI - RETURN OF THE JEDI.
Just look for them around here, and PM me for links if interested.

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IlFanEditore said:

With this change, we can alternate the duel with the Tie Fighters chase, with a whole new rhythm.

Looking forward to see this !

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Did you manage to watch the clip? Any suggestions in particular?

Italian faneditor.

EDITS LIST:
CHOSEN ONE - A STAR WARS STORY (3-in-1 prequels).
Personal saga: I - SHADOW OF THE PAST. II - KEEPERS OF THE PEACE. III - RISE OF THE DARK SIDE. IV - THE HEIR OF SKYWALKER. VI - RETURN OF THE JEDI.
Just look for them around here, and PM me for links if interested.

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Yes and I like it! The editing is solid and pacing is good.
The weakest part is Luke sensing Obi-Wan’s death while firing the cannon. It needs something more… Still, good work!

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  1. ORIGINAL
  2. EDITED






Italian faneditor.

EDITS LIST:
CHOSEN ONE - A STAR WARS STORY (3-in-1 prequels).
Personal saga: I - SHADOW OF THE PAST. II - KEEPERS OF THE PEACE. III - RISE OF THE DARK SIDE. IV - THE HEIR OF SKYWALKER. VI - RETURN OF THE JEDI.
Just look for them around here, and PM me for links if interested.

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I’d really like to have an opinion about this.

https://vimeo.com/363276127
password: fanedit

I kinda like this. But I’d like to have other opinions.
In general, Death Star lights are flat, so I want to enhance them a bit. I could simply place a glow and keep them white, but this gives the look of something more modern, IMHO. After all this should be the Empire’s jewel, a technological masterpiece.
Anyway, please give me your thoughts 😉

Italian faneditor.

EDITS LIST:
CHOSEN ONE - A STAR WARS STORY (3-in-1 prequels).
Personal saga: I - SHADOW OF THE PAST. II - KEEPERS OF THE PEACE. III - RISE OF THE DARK SIDE. IV - THE HEIR OF SKYWALKER. VI - RETURN OF THE JEDI.
Just look for them around here, and PM me for links if interested.

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I like the extra glow on the lights, maybe a little bright but mostly blends just fine. The re score also does well I think up to the point just before Alderaan is destroyed, if maybe the replacement music could come in after Tarkin finishes his line “soon enough” I think it would sound more natural.

“The ability to destroy a planet is insignificant next to the power of the Force.” - DV

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Thank you very much 😃

Italian faneditor.

EDITS LIST:
CHOSEN ONE - A STAR WARS STORY (3-in-1 prequels).
Personal saga: I - SHADOW OF THE PAST. II - KEEPERS OF THE PEACE. III - RISE OF THE DARK SIDE. IV - THE HEIR OF SKYWALKER. VI - RETURN OF THE JEDI.
Just look for them around here, and PM me for links if interested.

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Excuse me, guys, is it possible to have the cool intro that I’ve seen in many edits about the movie being a fan edit?
I think it’s the one that starts in aurebesh…

Italian faneditor.

EDITS LIST:
CHOSEN ONE - A STAR WARS STORY (3-in-1 prequels).
Personal saga: I - SHADOW OF THE PAST. II - KEEPERS OF THE PEACE. III - RISE OF THE DARK SIDE. IV - THE HEIR OF SKYWALKER. VI - RETURN OF THE JEDI.
Just look for them around here, and PM me for links if interested.

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Do you plan on re-editing ESB or RotJ or any of the sequel trilogy films?

The unfortunate reality of the Star Wars prequel and Disney trilogies is that they will always be around. Forever. They will never go away. It can never be undone.

I also prefer to be referred to as “TNT”, not “Freezing”.

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Yes. At the very least ESB and ROTJ.
About ESB I think I’ll use as a base Adywan’s Revisited edition (I will only change some colors, add some music and remove mention of Vader being Kenobi’s former apprentice).
About the sequels… I still don’t know 😉

Italian faneditor.

EDITS LIST:
CHOSEN ONE - A STAR WARS STORY (3-in-1 prequels).
Personal saga: I - SHADOW OF THE PAST. II - KEEPERS OF THE PEACE. III - RISE OF THE DARK SIDE. IV - THE HEIR OF SKYWALKER. VI - RETURN OF THE JEDI.
Just look for them around here, and PM me for links if interested.

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FULL TRAILER!

https://vimeo.com/365259942

I hope you enjoy it 😉

Italian faneditor.

EDITS LIST:
CHOSEN ONE - A STAR WARS STORY (3-in-1 prequels).
Personal saga: I - SHADOW OF THE PAST. II - KEEPERS OF THE PEACE. III - RISE OF THE DARK SIDE. IV - THE HEIR OF SKYWALKER. VI - RETURN OF THE JEDI.
Just look for them around here, and PM me for links if interested.

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Here is a clip of a remastered Millennium Falcon shot. Do you plan on using it for your edit?

The unfortunate reality of the Star Wars prequel and Disney trilogies is that they will always be around. Forever. They will never go away. It can never be undone.

I also prefer to be referred to as “TNT”, not “Freezing”.

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I LOVED what he had in mind, but then he shut the project down… I was so sorry to read that.
The problem is that the Tatooine shot looks very different from all other shots with the planet view. Different in color, in camera motion, etc. If I had a tatooine model like that I could replace it everywhere (or actually no, not with Sony Vegas), but adding that shot would be just like adding that remade Kenobi-Vader duel… it’s too modern.

Italian faneditor.

EDITS LIST:
CHOSEN ONE - A STAR WARS STORY (3-in-1 prequels).
Personal saga: I - SHADOW OF THE PAST. II - KEEPERS OF THE PEACE. III - RISE OF THE DARK SIDE. IV - THE HEIR OF SKYWALKER. VI - RETURN OF THE JEDI.
Just look for them around here, and PM me for links if interested.

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Some updates.
In about three weeks I’ll have my degree, so… things are going slow these days.
But this edit will definitely be released before the end of the year. Mid-to-end November or December, mostly thanks to Possessed’s edit which enhanced all lasers (saving me the time to make them from scratch). I’m color correcting his shots to match my edit.

Anyway, here are some other comparisons.
Top is the Blu Ray or the original Possessed edit.
Bottom is my own version.












I’d really like a comment about these.

Italian faneditor.

EDITS LIST:
CHOSEN ONE - A STAR WARS STORY (3-in-1 prequels).
Personal saga: I - SHADOW OF THE PAST. II - KEEPERS OF THE PEACE. III - RISE OF THE DARK SIDE. IV - THE HEIR OF SKYWALKER. VI - RETURN OF THE JEDI.
Just look for them around here, and PM me for links if interested.

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Looking in good shape! appreciate the hue shift to more neutral greys where needed and nice levels adjustment.

“The ability to destroy a planet is insignificant next to the power of the Force.” - DV

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Thank you very much, man!
The edit is almost finished, btw 😉

Italian faneditor.

EDITS LIST:
CHOSEN ONE - A STAR WARS STORY (3-in-1 prequels).
Personal saga: I - SHADOW OF THE PAST. II - KEEPERS OF THE PEACE. III - RISE OF THE DARK SIDE. IV - THE HEIR OF SKYWALKER. VI - RETURN OF THE JEDI.
Just look for them around here, and PM me for links if interested.

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Nuntio vobis gaudium magnum…
The edit is finally out!

PM me for links. I’d really really like to know what you think about it. It’s been by far the most challenging edit I’ve worked on.

Italian faneditor.

EDITS LIST:
CHOSEN ONE - A STAR WARS STORY (3-in-1 prequels).
Personal saga: I - SHADOW OF THE PAST. II - KEEPERS OF THE PEACE. III - RISE OF THE DARK SIDE. IV - THE HEIR OF SKYWALKER. VI - RETURN OF THE JEDI.
Just look for them around here, and PM me for links if interested.

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When will you post a topic for your upcoming edit for The Empire Strikes Back?

The unfortunate reality of the Star Wars prequel and Disney trilogies is that they will always be around. Forever. They will never go away. It can never be undone.

I also prefer to be referred to as “TNT”, not “Freezing”.