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Star Wars ANH (Devastator edition) (WORK HAS RESTARTED). — Page 4

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G&G-Fan said:

Wow this edit looks very impressive so far! I can’t wait to see the finished product.

Also glad you’re introducing Vader with the Imperial March and updating the blaster bolts to match ESB:R and the prequels

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Looks good from what I can tell from a still image. Although there isn’t a lot of motion to worry about, so I’m sure it looks equally good in motion.

Well done. I will disengage self-destruct initiative.

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I can’t tell anything wrong with it.

Well done. I will disengage self-destruct initiative.

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G&G-Fan said:

Your version of ANH is probably going to be my favorite until we get Adywan’s

Same here, Can’t wait for ady’s effort.

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I have to say both of these clips look great. For the Falcon shield clip, though, the dish looks a little shaky. The Alderaan destruction clip looks great and looks a little like Adywan’s Death Star explosion. I agree with G&G-Fan, this edit is going to be great!

“I am a Jedi, like my father before me.”

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The explosion of the planet seems to shift to the right mysteriously. Like part of it exploded to the right and then that part becomes the focus. I don’t know if that makes sense.

I think I favor Dat_SW_Guy’s version at the moment. This version of the explosion reads as Alderaan dissolving into an explosion already in progress while Dat’s looks more like the object itself is beginning to explode (albeit very quickly, as in the original film).

Well done. I will disengage self-destruct initiative.

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Wow the explosion looks amazing! 💥
This is definitely looking to be a superb fan edit!
I’m very much looking forward to this one!

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The explosion element looks interesting however one of the explosions isnt centered on the planet itself.

Also the explosion feels too plastered and in-static, try adding more dynamic stuff

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😳😮these clips look awesome That Guy, I honestly can’t wait to see your finished edit.

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Dat_SW_Guy said:

The explosion element looks interesting however one of the explosions isnt centered on the planet itself.

Also the explosion feels too plastered and in-static, try adding more dynamic stuff

Hal 9000 said:

The explosion of the planet seems to shift to the right mysteriously. Like part of it exploded to the right and then that part becomes the focus. I don’t know if that makes sense.

I think I favor Dat_SW_Guy’s version at the moment. This version of the explosion reads as Alderaan dissolving into an explosion already in progress while Dat’s looks more like the object itself is beginning to explode (albeit very quickly, as in the original film).

Alright, I will re-start this clip tonight.
Thanks for being honest guys.

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