Hi, could I get a link? I have seen a few attempts to integrate the SC38 footage and your seems the best so far!
More is less really. From the link in your description, I would say the first shot of Vader (that awkward up angle) could go. It’s more mysterious and darkly elegant to have Vader just calmly appear in the distance.
I would also cut or hid Obi-Wan hitting that wall as it looks pretty bad.
Otherwise, great work cutting it down!