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SUPERMAN 2 CRYSTAL EDITION (a WIP) — Page 4

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Personally I think you are doing a fantastic job and the extent of work that you are undertaking clearly shows. That said there's always room for improvement and I agree which the remarks made by Sober about lengthening the release of the rocket. We see Supes throw it into space only for it to explode immediately. The idea of using footage from Supes IV could prove valuable.

I love the way the film opens with Supes in pursuit of the rocket and the transition from the daily planet globe to the red Krypton sun is also a nice touch. The re-cap for the trial of the villains sequence is superb I think you've edited it to just the right length.

With regards to the credits I can understand that you want them to differentiate from official versions since this is your own cut. Taolar suggested adding some noise to the text, which might help them defuse into the background. Ultimately I feel toning down the animation might help. The credits look best when they are simply whooshing across the screen rather than doing all kinds of crazing things.

Keep up the fantastic work I know the finished product will be something to be proud of.
Forever a Christopher Reeve Superman Movie Fan.
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im loving the Feedback exspecially the negative ones
as I never see these as negative comments, i see these a room for improvement

thanks to everyone that has left comments i Appreciate it

aslo Sober & Ollie
some great points there
Sober id like you to mail me my email is on here on the side

you made some interesting points
I personally HATE superman IV but you made some very interesting points which i didn't think of at all
Im gonna have to watch Superman 4 just to find Footage as I haven't seen this in such a lonnnnnnng time
in the future if you have any ideas guys, just to make eit easier just print screen SCREEN SHOOTS in order
you think the edit should be this will make a better understanding of what you guys are talking about

so keep the ideas coming
thanks

sky
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Originally posted by: Sober
Sky_, I cant seem to find your email Im afraid. Email me at

Steve_1977@blueyonder.co.uk


Mine is
dj_skyuk@yahoo.co.uk

iv emailed you anyway
you seem to have some really good ideas
thats why i want direct contact with yah

sky

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PLEASE GO TO PAGE 1 FOR UPDATE
Saturday 6th June 2020

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Hey Sky, glad to see you are still at it!

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Booshman said:

Hey Sky, glad to see you are still at it!

Thanks Dude I need people like you to Kepp me Motivated man

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Sky_ said:

Booshman said:

Hey Sky, glad to see you are still at it!

Thanks Dude I need people like you to Kepp me Motivated man

No problem pal, I know what you mean. I remember looking at stuff you were doing 15 years ago and deciding I was going to give it a crack myself so without you my edits may never have happened. Remember that next time you’re feeling less motivated.

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Cameron Samurai said:

Jeepers that’s awesome…never expected it to swerve like that

There’s actually quite a lot of Errors in this clip, which I’m aware of like, certain shots that shouldn’t be there as I didn’t switch of the layer in the timeline and other split-second frames that popped in, finally sound mix isn’t there yet
but I thought id post something so people have a feel of what I’m trying to do

and Thankyou

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Sky_ said:

Cameron Samurai said:

Jeepers that’s awesome…never expected it to swerve like that

There’s actually quite a lot of Errors in this clip, which I’m aware of like, certain shots that shouldn’t be there as I didn’t switch of the layer in the timeline and other split-second frames that popped in, finally sound mix isn’t there yet
but I thought id post something so people have a feel of what I’m trying to do

and Thankyou

Yeah, I wasn’t going to call out the technical glitches because it was clear to me it was just a WIP, I was fixated more on what you were doing right

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Cameron Samurai said:

Sky_ said:

Cameron Samurai said:

Jeepers that’s awesome…never expected it to swerve like that

There’s actually quite a lot of Errors in this clip, which I’m aware of like, certain shots that shouldn’t be there as I didn’t switch of the layer in the timeline and other split-second frames that popped in, finally sound mix isn’t there yet
but I thought id post something so people have a feel of what I’m trying to do

and Thankyou

Yeah, I wasn’t going to call out the technical glitches because it was clear to me it was just a WIP, I was fixated more on what you were doing right

Here is a Longer version
https://youtu.be/H0PV-vOM8Tg

and thank you

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Sky_ said:

Cameron Samurai said:

Sky_ said:

Cameron Samurai said:

Jeepers that’s awesome…never expected it to swerve like that

There’s actually quite a lot of Errors in this clip, which I’m aware of like, certain shots that shouldn’t be there as I didn’t switch of the layer in the timeline and other split-second frames that popped in, finally sound mix isn’t there yet
but I thought id post something so people have a feel of what I’m trying to do

and Thankyou

Yeah, I wasn’t going to call out the technical glitches because it was clear to me it was just a WIP, I was fixated more on what you were doing right

Here is a Longer version
https://youtu.be/H0PV-vOM8Tg

and thank you

You should credit Kathryn Ross if you are going to use clips from her edit.

I’d flip the shots of the rocket at 1:34 and 1:38. On first watch I thought it was the one Superman took into space re-entering the atmosphere. Having it travel the other direction might make it more clear it’s the other rocket.

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Booshman said:

Sky_ said:

Cameron Samurai said:

Sky_ said:

Cameron Samurai said:

Jeepers that’s awesome…never expected it to swerve like that

There’s actually quite a lot of Errors in this clip, which I’m aware of like, certain shots that shouldn’t be there as I didn’t switch of the layer in the timeline and other split-second frames that popped in, finally sound mix isn’t there yet
but I thought id post something so people have a feel of what I’m trying to do

and Thankyou

Yeah, I wasn’t going to call out the technical glitches because it was clear to me it was just a WIP, I was fixated more on what you were doing right

Here is a Longer version
https://youtu.be/H0PV-vOM8Tg

and thank you

You should credit Kathryn Ross if you are going to use clips from her edit.

I’d flip the shots of the rocket at 1:34 and 1:38. On first watch I thought it was the one Superman took into space re-entering the atmosphere. Having it travel the other direction might make it more clear it’s the other rocket.

I have contacted her and asked her, I’m gonna put her in the credits

also ill look into that shot

EDIT can you use the exact time code displayed on the screen please kinda confused which shot

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Sky_ said:

Booshman said:

Sky_ said:

Cameron Samurai said:

Sky_ said:

Cameron Samurai said:

Jeepers that’s awesome…never expected it to swerve like that

There’s actually quite a lot of Errors in this clip, which I’m aware of like, certain shots that shouldn’t be there as I didn’t switch of the layer in the timeline and other split-second frames that popped in, finally sound mix isn’t there yet
but I thought id post something so people have a feel of what I’m trying to do

and Thankyou

Yeah, I wasn’t going to call out the technical glitches because it was clear to me it was just a WIP, I was fixated more on what you were doing right

Here is a Longer version
https://youtu.be/H0PV-vOM8Tg

and thank you

You should credit Kathryn Ross if you are going to use clips from her edit.

I’d flip the shots of the rocket at 1:34 and 1:38. On first watch I thought it was the one Superman took into space re-entering the atmosphere. Having it travel the other direction might make it more clear it’s the other rocket.

I have contacted her and asked her, I’m gonna put her in the credits

also ill look into that shot

EDIT can you use the exact time code displayed on the screen please kinda confused which shot

It’s the 2 shots of the impacting rocket, starts about 01:01:31:00 on your timecode. I was using the youtube time stamp.