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STAR WARS EPISODE I: Dawn of War (Old Version) — Page 4

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Wouldn’t it make more sense to build the stadium in a more populated city, thouhg (assuming we’re still going by the “no skyscrapers” idea).

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snooker said:

Not to sound rude, but I would appreciate if your edits would stay in your thread, I want to keep this thread not-cluttered. 😃

Preview of the “stormtroopers”.

I wish that could film real suits, but oh well.

JEDIT: The teaser trailer is almost done

Holy shit

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Here’s a crazy idea that I’ve been toying around with:

It is still very much a work in progress, but I hope to completely re imagine Coruscant into something that more closely resembles Ralph McQuarrie’s old gothic-inspired art:

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Wow, I’m literally speechless, can’t wait to see this new and improved prequel trilogy!

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Do you have anymore clips, I’m really curious about this edit. Surprised it isn’t getting more attention. Looks great so far!

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TK42-WAN said:

Do you have anymore clips, I’m really curious about this edit. Surprised it isn’t getting more attention. Looks great so far!

I’m working on the ending scene of the movie (Coruscant sunset picture from earlier.) Thank you for the support!

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Here’s another preview shot of the ending of the movie! (Obi Wan and Anakin watch the sunset as Obi-Wan confirms that he has been allowed to train him)

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After:

I might have the entire ending bit done next week! Keep in mind that a lot of the process right now is trying to find out which techniques work and don’t work.

After I’m done with this part, the next thing I’m going to work on is the climactic space battle above Naboo.

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Looks great, though I would suggest slightly darkening the wall behind them.

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You’re pretty talented and/or perseverent with VFX. Could you…uh…checks personal edit changelist…finish the background in the scene of Jocasta explaining who Dooku is? Or do I even that now that I’m putting him in TPM? Uh…could you add Mas Amedda and Sly Moore by the Emperor’s side in RotJ? Yeah, that’s a change undoutedly want. I gues that would require a whole other level of VFX skills, unless you can find shots from the PT to composite with. You’re not offering your skills for anyone else, anyway, are you?

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Anakin Starkiller said:

You’re pretty talented and/or perseverent with VFX. Could you…uh…checks personal edit changelist…finish the background in the scene of Jocasta explaining who Dooku is? Or do I even that now that I’m putting him in TPM? Uh…could you add Mas Amedda and Sly Moore by the Emperor’s side in RotJ? Yeah, that’s a change undoutedly want. I gues that would require a whole other level of VFX skills, unless you can find shots from the PT to composite with. You’re not offering your skills for anyone else, anyway, are you?

Holy ****, the Count Dooku expository dialogue scene would be golden.

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Ikr? I’m just undecided as to whether it would be redundant if he’s introduced in TPM.

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Anakin Starkiller said:

You’re not offering your skills for anyone else, anyway, are you?

Once I finish DoW I might do that, but again my edits are my own priority. I hope that you understand.

On the Jocasta Nu scene, I have no idea where I would squeeze that scene in order to serve the pacing and structure of the movie. Of course there will be exposition in my edit, I thought about Qui Gon and Dooku having a little telepathy scene during the opening escape (like Luke/Vader in empire) with Qui Gon saying “Master” or something, then during the council scene Qui Gon adds that he sensed something. One of the council says “Dooku” and Mace says that he was once a Jedi.

Of course I don’t know if all of those edits will work because I haven’t really tested them yet, but I definitely have ideas on how to explain Dooku. The last thing I want to do is add Dookus backstory to the crawl.

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Lol. I guess I’m going to be making a Vimeo account after all. Expect this preview to be up later today.

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I like it. I don’t know if you’re aware already, but you can still see the edge of the wall above Obi-Wan’s head when he’s talking to Anakin.

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Anakin Starkiller said:

I like it. I don’t know if you’re aware already, but you can still see the edge of the wall above Obi-Wan’s head when he’s talking to Anakin.

It will be fixed, thank you!

Anyways, does anybody have any “non-image” issues with the clip? Like is the music too loud when Obi-Wan is talking etc.

Anywho, I need some help developing the crawl. Here’s my current prototype:

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It is a period of unrest. Several thousand solar systems have left the Republic, leaving the galaxy in turmoil.

This SEPARATIST ALLIANCE in its hunger for more members has invaded the small planet of Naboo, hoping to secure its alliance by force.

The Supreme Chancellor of the Republic has secretly dispatched two Jedi Knights, the guardians of peace and justice in the galaxy, to settle the conflict…

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I really don’t like how it feels to read it. It has all of the needed details, but it doesn’t really flow. If anybody has any suggestions, I’m open.

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I really liked the clip. I felt like the audio was a bit “abrupt” when Obi-Wan started talking, and it “breaks off” with the tradition of every SW movie end with a silent scene, but ultimately I’m ok with it. Great job.

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Collipso said:

I really liked the clip. I felt like the audio was a bit “abrupt” when Obi-Wan started talking, and it “breaks off” with the tradition of every SW movie end with a silent scene, but ultimately I’m ok with it. Great job.

I agree with the abruptness, but if people think that the dialogue ruins the scene I’ll remove it. Thanks for the support.

JEDIT: On second thought, I think that I’ll remove the dialogue.
I will need to implement a replacement for the Yoda scene somehow (telling Obi Wan that he will train Anakin), possibly in the council chambers right before we cut to the sunset scene, but I don’t know.

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snooker said:

Collipso said:

I really liked the clip. I felt like the audio was a bit “abrupt” when Obi-Wan started talking, and it “breaks off” with the tradition of every SW movie end with a silent scene, but ultimately I’m ok with it. Great job.

I agree with the abruptness, but if people think that the dialogue ruins the scene I’ll remove it. Thanks for the support.

JEDIT: On second thought, I think that I’ll remove the dialogue.
I will need to implement a replacement for the Yoda scene somehow (telling Obi Wan that he will train Anakin), possibly in the council chambers right before we cut to the sunset scene, but I don’t know.

You must do what you think it’s right, of course.

Edit: what I mean is don’t go changing things because of feedback, I for example am really interested in your vision.