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You guys have to check this out:

Luke wasn’t the only one to get mugged.  It all started when a lone Ice Creature discovered what he thought was a Snack-Warmer.  It sure was hot inside the base, but the Taun Tauns were quite a delicacy:

 

He evidently went back to his buddies and let slip the news.  Soon, other Ice Creatures began to drop in:

 

When the Imperial fleet jumped in, a whole party of Monsters were trapped.  The Rebel leaders simply looked the other way when R2-D2 mercillessly taunted them:

 

These scenes were obviously cut from the film because they so clearly establish a moral equivalency between the Empire and the Rebellion.  It’s sad, really…. 

Well… okay… maybe it had more to do with the fact that these scenes do absolutely nothing to propel Luke, Han, and Leia further into the action.  Even worse, the ice monster sequence that did make it into the film was probably the worst special effect in the entire series.  All you see is this big arm at first.  (Woah!)  Then when he’s coming to eat Luke in the cave, he looks like this stupid unmoving maniquin that’s just being rolled along the passageway.  Barf.

No, but Luke, Han, and Leia are really what its about.  But just sitting back and watching the films again, I have to say that the plot is really lacking something there.  You know… the films really need an epic prelude that undermines the centrality of those three… and that establishes R2-D2 and Chewbacca as being the chief spys and the key movers and shakers of the entire Rebel movement.

No… no….  Nevermind.  That’s a really dumb idea.  Forget I mentioned it.

 

         

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wow, that was some reading. my brain is fried now. lol

well first, the executor interior problems. Well its not just a few shots that are messed up but pretty much all the bridge scenes. As you can see from the pic below, the bridge is nowhere near the control room and is in fact up the stairs, so the final shot of vader walking down the stairs is correct

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So you can see that the first interior shots of the Executor when they receive the probot transmission, Vader should really be coming from up the hallway and not appear suddenly as if he just walked out of shot. as if the bridge is just out of shot. then, later on when they are pursuing the Falcon from cloud city the shots of Piette in the control room are totally out of place. I'm tackling this now by changing a couple of shots to not only fix this, but also the problems with Piette suddenly on the other side of the bridge. Also i have fixed the problem of vader being at the side window one minute and looking out of the front window the next. I have added a couple of brief shots of Vader walking down towards the front window.

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I've also fixed the control panel that breaks away when the stardestroyers collide (thanks seven for pointing that one out. I totally missed that). It was an interesting idea having sparks coming out of it as it breaks away but in the end it would have just made the build quality of the Executor look shoddy so i just made it so it doesn't break away.

I won't be using the 2 stardestroyers from ANH for the cockpit scene prior to the collision because the angles are all wrong and the FX aren't very good , which is why i changed that shot in ANH:R

Nice matte by the way, Vaderios. I probably won't be using that matte painting though because it just stands out too much as a painting with the live action. I'm hoping to create a new matte but i may have to build part of the hangar and then photograph it to use as an element to give the matte a more 3D feel

Now onto the hull being in view during the bridge interior shot. I don't think that you would see any of the hull due to the camera angles. After seeing you mock-ups it makes it look like the hull is pointing up so i can confidently say you wouldn't see any part of it and adding it in would make it look odd to me.

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Adywan, I have a question.  At the end of Empire when the Mellenium Falcon is trying to escape the star destroyer, it seems to get really, really close, and yet it's out of tractor beam range.  Are you planning to do something about this?  Or can something even BE done about it???

Well when Piette says "they'll be in range of our tractor beam in moments.." the falcon is pretty far away. Its doubtful that the Executor would have a tractor beam as powerful as the Death Star so, plus they would have to lock onto the target so i dont' think there needs to be anything done to this.

Another fix just done is just after vader cuts off Lukes hand you hear a very faint sound of the lightsabre being turned off, but its so quiet that it looks odd when we see it is off in the next shot. You now see the lightsaber disengage.

 

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WHERE did you get that shot of the empty SD hallway?  And can you send it to me or post it without the big "BRIDGE" and arrow on it?

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I won't be using the 2 stardestroyers from ANH for the cockpit scene prior to the collision because the angles are all wrong and the FX aren't very good , which is why i changed that shot in ANH:R

Would you consider at least making the SDs bigger, or big enough we can see the conning towers?  I think that's my biggest gripe is that they are merely dots on the horizon when it would be nice to tell that they are star destroyers (yes, Han tells me that, but I'd like to see them)

Nice matte by the way, Vaderios. I probably won't be using that matte painting though because it just stands out too much as a painting with the live action. I'm hoping to create a new matte but i may have to build part of the hangar and then photograph it to use as an element to give the matte a more 3D feel

That is understandable.  I think another issue is how blue the entire backdrop looked.  If there is some way to add lighting effects to showcase that the hanger goes on for some distance to increase the dimensionality that would be fantastic.

TheTome said:

Adywan, I have a question.  At the end of Empire when the Mellenium Falcon is trying to escape the star destroyer, it seems to get really, really close, and yet it's out of tractor beam range.  Are you planning to do something about this?  Or can something even BE done about it???

Well when Piette says "they'll be in range of our tractor beam in moments.." the falcon is pretty far away. Its doubtful that the Executor would have a tractor beam as powerful as the Death Star so, plus they would have to lock onto the target so i dont' think there needs to be anything done to this.

So when the MF is right beside the Executor, it wouldn't be able to lock onto them and pull them in?!?!
Here is the shot in question:

So that is not close enough for the Executor to lock onto them with a tractor beam?  Really?

And just how long does it take to turn a tractor beam on and lock on to something that is right next to you?
(for some reason, I can't help but think of X the Eliminator on HARVEY BIRDMAN: ATTORNEY AT LAW and his Death Ray machine that took 12 hours to power up...)

I mean, I love the shot... it is very impressive.. but just how STUPID is the Empire?  Jeez, between armor that doesn't work, Star Destroyer captains who ram their bridges into asteroids (or think that apologizing to Lord Vader is a good thing) and Storm "these blast points are too accurate for Sand People" troopers who lose their accuracy when anyone other than Jawas are involved... it really makes you wonder how they even conquered the galaxy to begin with...

Now as you look at that picture folks, just remember that the entire Executor was brought down by a single fighter a little bigger than the cockpit pod on the MF, and what you see above is merely the NOSE of the Executor.

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Monroville said:
... and Storm "these blast points are too accurate for Sand People" troopers who lose their accuracy when anyone other than Jawas are involved... it really makes you wonder how they even conquered the galaxy to begin with...

 

 

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On another note, is there any way you could add an opening or access door for the pit crew?  Even as a teenager, I found it kinda goofy that all these people are in these pits with no way to get out.  I mean there should be at least a ladder or something!

 

         

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Monroville said:

So when the MF is right beside the Executor, it wouldn't be able to lock onto them and pull them in?!?!
Here is the shot in question:

So that is not close enough for the Executor to lock onto them with a tractor beam?  Really?

it's not in range because the sd's own mass is blocking the line of sight from the tractor beam emitter and the falcon - imagine trying to look under your own chin without a mirror

but yeah i agree most imperial stormtroopers couldn't hit water if they fell out of a boat

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adywan said:
TheTome said:

Adywan, I have a question.  At the end of Empire when the Mellenium Falcon is trying to escape the star destroyer, it seems to get really, really close, and yet it's out of tractor beam range.  Are you planning to do something about this?  Or can something even BE done about it???

Well when Piette says "they'll be in range of our tractor beam in moments.." the falcon is pretty far away. Its doubtful that the Executor would have a tractor beam as powerful as the Death Star so, plus they would have to lock onto the target so i dont' think there needs to be anything done to this.

 

Would just like to offer that after Piett has said this to Vader....that although there eventually comes the shot of the Falcon (having been previously chased towards the direction of the 'Executor' because of the laserbolts of the 3 following TIEs) where it's then seen to be travelling very closely alongside the front right-hand side of the 'Executor's' prow....that by this point, because it got so unexpectedly close so rapidly... that it didn't 'show up on the scopes' properly for a bit (as with the 'Avenger' earlier), enough for the 'Executor' crew to 'lock on' to it in time....and that it couldn't be located accurately by the 'Executor' crew again until it had been chased past the front of the prow, into it's path ahead....where it was 'picked up' again, and Piette could order "Ready for the tractor beam". 

So would also agree along the lines of what professa said too.

 

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How is possible that the MF travels all along the side of the executor, reaches the nose and vader can see them so big from the bridge? Not only the distance but the MF is not possible to be visible from the bridge cause of the diferent position of the ship. Impfighter correct me if im wrong :)

 

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We just need to make sure the Imperial's badge rank insignias remain on the correct side in all shots.

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I honestly thought that the bridge was where the camera is sitting in this shot:

And as for the who is standing where and at what window, nothing ever seemed off to me.  I am ashamed to call myself a Star Wars fan.  I bow to all of your superior nerddom.

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Monroville said:
adywan said:

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On another note, is there any way you could add an opening or access door for the pit crew?  Even as a teenager, I found it kinda goofy that all these people are in these pits with no way to get out.  I mean there should be at least a ladder or something!

 

I know it's not canon or anything but in the Jedi Outcast game you can use the Executor bridge as a location for multi-player fisticuffs.

In that the entrance is on the pit level so the pit techs don't get in the way of the higher officers (there is even a lower level observation deck which is accessed the same way).

I can't find a video of it but it makes sense to me (it also adds a layer of humiliation to Piett being down in the pit looking up at the bounty hunters).

 

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Monroville said:
adywan said:

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On another note, is there any way you could add an opening or access door for the pit crew?  Even as a teenager, I found it kinda goofy that all these people are in these pits with no way to get out.  I mean there should be at least a ladder or something!

 

I know it's not canon or anything but in the Jedi Outcast game you can use the Executor bridge as a location for multi-player fisticuffs.

In that the entrance is on the pit level so the pit techs don't get in the way of the higher officers (there is even a lower level observation deck which is accessed the same way).

I can't find a video of it but it makes sense to me (it also adds a layer of humiliation to Piett being down in the pit looking up at the bounty hunters).

I'm sure someone still has Outcast.  Wait.  I still have Outcast.  If we weren't covered in a Southern Indiana snowstorm, I'd go get it.

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I honestly thought that the bridge was where the camera is sitting in this shot:

And as for the who is standing where and at what window, nothing ever seemed off to me.  I am ashamed to call myself a Star Wars fan.  I bow to all of your superior nerddom.

I thought that this area was behind the bridge and could be accessed from either side (like a horseshoe shape behind the back wall with an entrance on either side).

That would explain how Vader got to the other side but I'm loving the new shots anyway.

 

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Monroville said:

I think that's my biggest gripe is that they are merely dots on the horizon when it would be nice to tell that they are star destroyers (yes, Han tells me that, but I'd like to see them)

In this case, though, if they were clearly visible, it would become a 'master of the obvious' moment. If they're just dots (and the passengers are thinking 'what is that?'), then Han is looking at the instruments and telling his passengers 'star destroyers ahead.' If everyone could see them, it would be like 'no kidding, Han...'

 

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Ady could always pause/slow down Hans reaction to the question & have him answer rhetorically & finish it of with a Well Duuuh eyebrow raise ;-P

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Ya, it's funny how the original republic clones can kick some serious tale in the clone wars series, and the next generation of troopers, imperial stormtroopers, act like the seperatist battle droids of the clone wars, kind of stupid and really can't shoot jack. Seems like a serious downgrade. I guess with all of the power seemingly in hand, they started getting slack and produced inferior products. Sounds a lot like the rise and fall of most ruling powers past and present in Earths' history.

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You mean they never kill of the main 5 characters? Then the movie would be over, Leia and R2 both get shot in ROTJ.

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Sevb32 said:

You mean they never kill of the main 5 characters? Then the movie would be over, Leia and R2 both get shot in ROTJ.

Having them kill at least one of the main characters and a few of the secondary ones would have given the Stormtroopers a bit more cred but that's not something you can do in a fan-edit (especially this one) because it would really bugger up the plot as we know it.

I wouldn't mind if Ady killed off General Reiken or at a pinch Lobot.

 

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professa said:

So that is not close enough for the Executor to lock onto them with a tractor beam?  Really?


it's not in range because the sd's own mass is blocking the line of sight from the tractor beam emitter and the falcon - imagine trying to look under your own chin without a mirror

Impfighter said:

So would also agree along the lines of what professa said too.

I am dumbfounded.  How can there be any argument here?!?!  The Death Star tractor beam was more like a field, in that it caught the MF when it came into range.  Yeah, yeah, yeah, you can argue it's mass, spherical shape, etc but REGARDLESS... even if you are right professa, are you still telling me that the tractor beam is going to be in the tippity-tip of the Executor nose (where it would serve no use whatsoever for getting said tractored ship into the docking bay which is where on the ship?  The nose?  Or a few miles back?  And yes, MILES) and even then, Piett and company aren't going to be ready so as soon as the MF clears the nose... BAM! Gotcha!

Nooooo!  Instead, he's going to take his time, set the calibrations, ho hum... "ah, here we go... wait a minute.... dum de dum.... still charging....(again, X the Eliminator's death console charging up sounds)... okaaaaay, NOW.. uh, where did they go?  Lord Vader is right behind me, isn't he?"

So the Executor is only going to have ONE tractor beam emitter and that is in the nose...nowhere near the hanger bays, nor the side bars where the Executor may actually dock to something with, nor the command tower where something may try to HIT it.

And et tu, ImpFighter?  Really?  Because the Executor could not have had the tractor beam already set to go, so when the TIEs herded the MF TO the Executor they couldn't have just stuck out the net to catch the fish, so to speak?  Really?  Because there was so much going on that no one on the Executor had the time to warm up the tractor beam, nor did anyone get the memo that Darth wanted to capture the MF... so what were we doing in that asteroid field again?

You know, here is a suggestion, Ady (not that you will do anything with it other than shoot it down):

have the Piett scene BEFORE the MF damn near lands on the Executor, maybe even before you see the distant shot of the MF closing in on the Executor (for pacing sake, you could have it right before the MF is in Bespin's orbit and the sun rises; that way that shot can immediately segway into the Executor in the distance shot).  During some of Vader's close-ups, add some audio in the background that can barely be heard to the effect of "it's hard to lock on.. I don't know why.." ala ANH, with Vader's "The force is strong with this one"...

As in: Luke is the reason the Executor is having a hard time locking onto the MF, when the only other explanation is God-like incompetence.  Yes, it's the Empire, but I thought we were supposed to take them seriously in this movie... even if its just a little more seriously... you know, a tiny bit more seriously (you know, before they get defeated by teddy bears)?

but yeah i agree most imperial stormtroopers couldn't hit water if they fell out of a boat


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Monroville said:

I think that's my biggest gripe is that they are merely dots on the horizon when it would be nice to tell that they are star destroyers (yes, Han tells me that, but I'd like to see them)

In this case, though, if they were clearly visible, it would become a 'master of the obvious' moment. If they're just dots (and the passengers are thinking 'what is that?'), then Han is looking at the instruments and telling his passengers 'star destroyers ahead.' If everyone could see them, it would be like 'no kidding, Han...'

 

 

I don't know if you remember my previous description about this shot, but Leia is sat directly behind Han at this point in time, and is looking over at what Chewie is doing.  She's quite petite, and it's only when she stands up to come around Han, that she can see what He's just seen.

Also, the Stardestroyers could be even positioned  more slightly to the left, in the 'windows', even further out of her 'eye-line', as they start to come directly towards them.

Hope this helps.

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adywan said:

well first, the executor interior problems. Well its not just a few shots that are messed up but pretty much all the bridge scenes. As you can see from the pic below, the bridge is nowhere near the control room and is in fact up the stairs, so the final shot of vader walking down the stairs is correct

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So you can see that the first interior shots of the Executor when they receive the probot transmission, Vader should really be coming from up the hallway and not appear suddenly as if he just walked out of shot. as if the bridge is just out of shot. then, later on when they are pursuing the Falcon from cloud city the shots of Piette in the control room are totally out of place. I'm tackling this now by changing a couple of shots to not only fix this, but also the problems with Piette suddenly on the other side of the bridge. Also i have fixed the problem of vader being at the side window one minute and looking out of the front window the next. I have added a couple of brief shots of Vader walking down towards the front window.

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Impressive....most impressive.....

Adywan, you are several steps ahead of things as usual.  Wonderful work on the new Vader shot above!  That is more than I could have hoped for yet again.... 

 

But I'd also like to speculate on a couple of things on this (Which I just know is gonna end up a little complicated to follow again!  Anyway, here goes, and pardon my prose) -

Firstly, I'm guessing that since there is a tiny Falcon in one of the windows in your shot above (I'll get back to you shortly on this vaderios), that this shot is going to replace the one where Vader's got his back to us, as he stands looking out of the window at the current tiny Falcon that seem to travel 'downwards to the right' (this was the problematic shot that I previously suggested should be the front big window, rather than a 'side' one).  If this is the case, then I'm very pleased that it will now look as if Vader has moved directly to this 'position' at that point, since we last saw him a minute or so earlier in the 'alcove' section with Piett....as that's the way I always thought it would work best.

However, I really like that 'close-up' shot of Vader 'from the back' as he looks out....so I'm hoping that rather than removing it totally....that you are instead planning to use part of it, to replace EITHER of the slightly shorter FIRST or SECOND 'close-up' frontal' shots of Vader's mask that come next, as we hear the words "Luke", then "Son, come with me".  The current neat shot of him looking out (with the tiny Falcon amended of course) would definately work very nicely at either one of these points....especially since we are just currently seeing exactly the same kind of 'close-up' frontal shots close together anyway. 

I reckon this new order of shots will look fantastic with your latest one, if you just lose one of these similar 'frontal' shots, rather than lose the Vader 'from the back' shot.... 

That's if I correctly judged where your new shot is going, of course! 

 

And about the 'Bridge' area shot at the topplease don't 'Force choke' me Ady, but here's a couple of things to consider on that, if you will (and you'll need to use the 'pause' button to look at these!) -

Although that is a 'behind the scenes' photo of course, it seems that during our first look at this area in the movie (when we see Admiral Ozzel coming towards us, and then being called over by Captain Piett)....that the inside of the the area that is indicated as being the 'Bridge' (just beyond the 'steps') by your arrow, actually seems to have a totally different 'interior' look to the one seen in the photo above....but more importantly, ALSO looks different to what the overall inside of the actual 'Bridge' should actually look like....

If you check it out, you can see that there is some kind of different structure and lights in the movie 'interior' there. 

Because of this, I personally always looked on that area as NOT being meant to be the 'Bridge' in the movie, but rather a different area with 'steps' leading up to it, altogether.  That is why I think it is seems fine for Admiral Ozzel to be 'heading' towards the actual 'Bridge'(which we don't see yet) somewhere just before it in this 'mid-section', to join Vader there, just as Captain Piett calls to him.  (Take note of the round 'black and white' structure on the floor of the section directly opposite where Captain Piett is, as I'll come back to it....) 

Anyway, this 'mid-section' area....which is somewhere between the 'steps' leading up to the 'Bridge', and the other area with 'steps', is ALSO clearly seen during the scene where Vader is talking to the 'holograms' (note that you can more clearly see the 'interior' of the other area with 'steps' in the distance here, before Vader heads round towards his 'Chamber' to contact the 'Emperor'....and that when Vader talks to the 2 remaining 'holograms' nearest to our viewpoint, that the area behind him still isn't quite at the point where the 'steps' of the 'Bridge' could be, yet), and well as during the scene where Vader is 'Force choking' Captain Needa....and is also seen in ANOTHER scene that I'm going to come back to....

Also, when when we see the 'close-up' shot of the bottom of Vader's cloak as he goes to exit off where I consider the 'Bridge' to be (towards it's 'steps' presumably, although the previous long-shot has a flat floor!), I personally don't worry about the sudden cut to Vader beside Ozzel and Piett, as I've always looked on it as just one of those 'slight jump ahead' cuts....to get him to beside them in the mid-section' area straight away in the action.  It's just that he happens to come round past another crewmember beside them. 

It's something similar to the instance I mentioned a while back, about the 'slight jump ahead' cut involving the 'Lando walking through the city towards Vader' shots....where the the group goes from 'real-time' walking, to suddenly being in a different area to 'shorten' their journey onscreen....before going back to 'real-time shots as they head nearer to the awaiting Vader and Boba Fett....

Anyway, going back to that OTHER shot of 'positioning' for this same 'mid-section' area I mentioned - 

It seems that you can make out the round 'black and white' structure on the floor, in the distance behind Vader and Piett, just after Vader 'steps down' (from what looks like the narrower 'Bridge' entrance 'set') from the 'Bridge'after ordering "NO disintegrations" to Boba Fett.  This is a clearer look at the the inbetween 'mid-section' that we don't quite see when Vader 'steps down' off the 'Bridge' at the end of the movie.  (Unless it's yet another confusingly-different section of the ship altogether!....) 

See what you think.

 

I see you agreed about the 'hull' thing then.  ;)

 

  

 

      

 

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adywan said:

I've also fixed the control panel that breaks away when the stardestroyers collide (thanks seven for pointing that one out. I totally missed that).

Nice matte by the way, Vaderios. I probably won't be using that matte painting though because it just stands out too much as a painting with the live action. I'm hoping to create a new matte but i may have to build part of the hangar and then photograph it to use as an element to give the matte a more 3D feel

Another fix just done is just after vader cuts off Lukes hand you hear a very faint sound of the lightsabre being turned off, but its so quiet that it looks odd when we see it is off in the next shot. You now see the lightsaber disengage.

 

....and even more awesomeness.  Can't wait to eventually see your new 'Rebel hangar' shot!  :)