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^Thank you! I’ll work on those. I’m really glad you actually gave feedback!

For the miswire jokes thing, I remember the mindset I was in when cutting that, and I think it’s because I didn’t want Anakin and Obi Wan to have any hint of animosity in the opening. I wasn’t sure if someone was going to read that scene as Anakin being serious or sarcastic - I didn’t want anyone to think Anakin took something like that so personally. And I also don’t know if there’s enough in the film that characterizes Anakin’s humor as doing bits. It’s a little more innocuous and traditionally friendly for Anakin just to go straight to being defensive of R2, rather than snark on the offensive. I might put it back after thinking about it more.

In the opera, I think cutting straight to “is it possible to learn this power” is too abrupt, and makes the Darth Plagueis story much less of a story. It’s weird to have Palpatine build up this tragedy and then it end up just being “There was a guy who could save people from death. The end.” And if you just meant to switch out “he could actually…?” with it, you get rid of “Not from a Jedi”, which is the beat I feel like the scene should end on. Besides, it’s not a huge thing to have Anakin ask as if to make sure he heard something right.

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0:9:26 - 0:9:55
I like what you did here with the elevator and R2 burning the droids although I feel that cutting back and forth between the two happens a little too much thus making it kinda distracting. What I would suggest is that after you have R2 fix the elevator cut to the elevator segment and then after Anakin and Obi-Wan’s little banter about R2 you cut to R2 getting picked up and burning the droids. I feel it would be less distracting and the comedic timing would work better overall.

I guess it’s just me, but I rather like the cutting back and forth; the juxtaposition of R2 having a violent-ish adventure as Obi Wan and Anakin are literally just having an elevator chat, works better to me than if we watch one happen then the other. It’s quick, abrupt, and happens a lot, but I think that’s what adds to the humor. But that is a device used in editing for comedy movies, so I can see how it’s distracting in the context of a movie like this. Idk.

0:13:03 - 0:13:05
I like what you did here having Anakin in silent contemplation rather than saying “Then his fate will be the same as ours.” but it looks a little weird. I would suggest holding on his face then using the part where he looks up from Obi-wan toward Palpatine ( 0:13:01 - 0:13:02 ) but reverse it so it looks like he is looking down at Obi-wan.

Thanks for this! I’ve been trying to break how I was going to fix this scene, and I can’t believe I didn’t think of reversing the previous shot! I’ve changed it quickly in between studying lol. Thank you! It really helps to have more than my pair of eyes on the edit.

0:25:21 - 0:25:28
Excellent editing here I love the dialog changes but the music gets a little loud towards the end to the point where I can hardly hear Palpatine say “and you saved my life.”.

I had “and you saved my life” at a higher volume in an earlier cut, but the disparity between it and “you fought many battles…” was too noticeable to a few people who had previewed. The next few cuts were then too quiet, and I guess I’m still ironing out what the perfect level for that line is. Have to find that middle ground.

0:53:07 - 0:53:10
The only thing I don’t like about this scene is that you suddenly cut to Grievous mid-fall without showing him jumping off the platform.

This doesn’t bother me too much. He was actually force pushed into a wall by Obi Wan after their stare-down and slid/fell down into the shot you see in my cut. The fact that you thought he jumped himself is probably what I was going for.

1:03:18 - 1:03:19
I understand why you cut out the whole spin jump Palpatine does but it feels like something has been removed when I watch it so even though its kinda silly I would keep it.

That’s fair. To me, with the spin, it feels like the Jedi are too slow to react. Without one extra shot, it’s more of a surprise attack. So it was either keeping in the spin shot, or the shot of him landing - and since the shot of him landing is not only less silly, but also consistent with the next shot, I decided to use that one. I hoped people assumed he just jumped forward.

1:04:27 - 1:05:38
I saw what you were going for but I feel the transition of Palpatine’s face from normal to scarred without an explanation is a little jarring and would be kinda confusing to first-time viewers. I also feel that Anakin should say “What have I done?” because without that it makes Palpatine’s next statement sound like half a conversation to me.

This is actually from Hal 9000’s edit, and I think it’s fine tbh. It would be kind of confusing to the hypothetical first time viewer, but I don’t know how much. There are alot of things that go unexplained in Star Wars, and this is one of those things that’s easier to assume correctly; that that’s his “true form” or whatever. The “or whatever” part allows for some imagination on the part of the viewer anyway.

As for “what have I done”, I do think it’s better for Anakin to not be so indecisive. He knows what he did, he chose to do it. Showing immediate regret makes the foundation in which he made the decision come off as a little shaky. Like, “I did this, but I didn’t really want to?” Hayden’s face says enough about how “hard” it was to do, but I wanted to draw attention away from him thinking it was the “wrong” thing to do. And I know I’ve said Anakin in my cut doesn’t think he’s in the moral right as Darth Vader, but all that means is that he hasn’t deluded himself into thinking he’s “the hero” or he’s doing good things. He knows he’s doing bad things, but to him, the ends justify the means.

“You’re fulfilling your destiny…” isn’t definitively an answer to a question either. It’s just a statement, and that Palps says it on his own, kind of paints him as such a confident bastard; despite Anakin not saying anything one way or another, he gets up and starts talking like he has no doubts Anakin will join him.

1:05:38 - 1:06:40
I like this scene although I would have at least a mention of Padme being the reason why he pledges himself to Darth Sidious and about them needing to work together to discover the secret to life because it feels a little too quick and I think a first time viewer would be left wondering “why is he becoming his apprentice now? isn’t there another options?”. I also feel cutting to Yoda in this scene is a little distracting, it should focus entirely on Anakin and Palpatine.

Padme isn’t the only reason he pledges himself, so I didn’t want to draw too much attention to her as the primary reason. Also, Palpatine admitting that he doesn’t know how to save Padme when Anakin makes it clear that’s his motivation is… well. That sentence speaks for itself. Why would Anakin still be listening at this point?

So while there’s no definitive answer verbally spoken about why he’s pledging himself, I trust my audience to understand how set up and pay off works. As for Yoda, I might remove it if more people find it unnecessary.

1:30:45 - 1:30:46
There’s a weird music change at this point that was a little distracting.

I thought the music surprisingly flowed from one note to the next despite my cutting, but I did think the background lava explosion sfx just kind of abruptly stops; is that what you meant? If that’s the case, I’m definitely still trying to work that out. Maybe by having the sound fade out a little sooner before the next cut? But that might be more jarring.

1:31:16 - 1:31:38
I like how you cut out a lot of the cheesy dialog here but it feels a little clunky and disjointed. Here is how I feel it could be improved.

Anakin “To my new empire.”.

Obi-Wan “Your new empire? Anakin, my allegiance is to the republic!”

Anakin “If you’re not with me then you’re my enemy.”

Obi-Wan “I will do what I must.”

Anakin “You will try.”

I feel this removes most of the cheesy dialog while still feeling like a complete conversation.

1:35:30 - 1:35:39
I would have included Anakin saying “This is the end for you.” I just feel Anakin is a little too quiet throughout the fight. Obi-Wan at least got “I have failed you Anakin.” so I feel Anakin should have at least a little dialog. Also, I feel Obi-Wan should say the full “I have failed you Anakin, I have failed you.” because I feel it cuts away a little too quickly when you shorten it.

For me, this scene is clunky no matter how you spin it. If it sounds like a half a conversation in my edit though, that’s almost the point. Anakin doesn’t want to talk.

This goes back to how I feel Anakin should be acting in lieu of the set up. Like I said, he hasn’t deluded himself into thinking he’s doing the morally righteous good thing, he’s acting on “the ends justify the means.” He’s not corrupted by the dark side or is yearning to increase his power in the force - the dark side allows him to do what needs to be done for his idea of a galaxy under law and order, to keep Padme safe. Its philosophy tells him it’s okay to do these things and to feel this way. So he’s not proud of himself or the things he’s done - but he has to do them. To me, his pre-duel taunts against Obi Wan lean too closely to the original where he feels proud to be a sith, and has deluded himself into thinking the jedi are evil, including Obi Wan.

I think there isn’t enough to support the idea that in the time Anakin and Obi Wan are separated, he turns fully against his best friend. Before, you have the justification of “oh the dark side corrupted him” or “oh they were never really friends”, but those are both contrary to the idea of my edit. They’re really only enemies by circumstance and what Anakin’s done at this point; I don’t think Anakin should have any real ill will against Obi Wan. By leaving “if you’re not with me…” hanging, and silence from Anakin there onwards, it’s almost like Anakin is giving Obi Wan a quick out. But Obi Wan obviously doesn’t want to back down, so Anakin does he must - which is try to kill him. From there, Anakin is “too quiet” because in my interpretation of the characters, I do believe that any verbal engagement between the two would go differently than it did in the theatrical. Obi Wan could talk sense (or at the very least regret enough to stop) into Anakin, because from Anakin’s POV, he doesn’t believe the Jedi are actually evil.

When Obi Wan says “I have failed you…”, they’ve stopped fighting and it’s his chance to reach out to Anakin to possibly bring him back with a conversation. I think it might have worked if Anakin engaged back, and I think Anakin kind of knows that. He stays silent and willfully ignores him to avoid his own motivations becoming clouded. He doesn’t need to hear something that might invalidate all the things he’s done and what he’s doing. This all has to be for something, but he doesn’t trust himself not to fall back into the light with a few words from a friend. The explicit “This is the end for you, my master” might say the same thing about Anakin willfully tuning out Obi Wan, but it feels too much, again, like Anakin is playing the part of someone who wants to do this. I think his silence works better towards my end goals and is vague enough to allow for other interpretations: like he doesn’t want to humanize his target by talking because the human would be his best friend.

1:36:00 - 1:36:10
I’m a little torn as to whether or not to include Anakin’s “underestimate my power” line but I think that you should have focused on Anakin’s face before Obi-Wan says “Don’t try it” because to me Obi-Wan can just tell what Anakin is thinking by the look on his face but if he just says it without focusing on Anakin’s face first, it looks a little weird.

I had a slowed down shot of Anakin’s face there in an earlier cut, but it looks even weirder. I took the lesser of two weirds, because I really don’t want “underestimate my power.”

1:36:15 - 1:37:22
Now I want to say that of all the things you changed removing the majority of Obi-Wan’s speech was my least favorite. I know you’re trying to make this more personal and less about the prophecy but I feel that this entire speech is completely personal because in my mind this speech is two things.

  1. Obi-Wan is saying “You were my brother, You were the greatest of us, and you betrayed us all.” this is basically Obi-Wan telling Anakin how disappointed he is that he has fallen so low and how much Obi-Wan failed him.

  2. This is the point from Obi-Wan’s point of view where Anakin “died”. So I consider this speech in a way to be Obi-Wan’s eulogy for Anakin Skywalker who was in his words “The best star pilot in the galaxy, a cunning warrior, and he was a good friend.”.

Good points, and I might put it back in.

1:43:36 - 1:43:55
I see what you were gong for here but I would put a pause between what the emperor saying “You killed her” and Vader’s reaction and put Padme’s death during said pause so that we can see Vader’s reaction on screen. Seeing his reaction to this news is one of the highlights of ROTS for me, so I would hate to see it cut.

I’ll see what I can do. I remember putting Padme’s death where it was because I felt the shot went by too fast before or after Vader’s initial reaction.

The only other thing I feel should be included in this edit is this deleted scene https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cJUVHSBy9JM but remove Grevious and Shok Te so they can meet him on the bridge. Because I feel this scene adds some levity to the film and the banter gives off that brothers vibe you’re going for.

I’d love to, but I really don’t know where I’d put it or how I’d even make the scene work without Grevious.

Anyway, thank you so much for actually giving feedback! It really helps out. And I do love the poster. I really want to leave it up to people to vote, but I might just have to pick one myself when I’m done. It might be yours. It has the font Disney has been using for their new stuff and the TLJ red logo - for “The New Canon Cut,” it fits nicely.

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^Thank you! I’ll work on those. I’m really glad you actually gave feedback!

Of course! I actually had the notes saved for a day or two; I just wasn’t sure if I wanted to post them, since they were mostly technical complaints.

For the miswire jokes thing, I remember the mindset I was in when cutting that, and I think it’s because I didn’t want Anakin and Obi Wan to have any hint of animosity in the opening. I wasn’t sure if someone was going to read that scene as Anakin being serious or sarcastic - I didn’t want anyone to think Anakin took something like that so personally. And I also don’t know if there’s enough in the film that characterizes Anakin’s humor as doing bits. It’s a little more innocuous and traditionally friendly for Anakin just to go straight to being defensive of R2, rather than snark on the offensive. I might put it back after thinking about it more.

Regarding the “no loose wires” scene, I personally never interpreted it as hostile. I hadn’t even considered that it could possibly be interpreted as hostile. It always seemed, to me, lighthearted banter. I can definitely see where you’re coming from with not wanting any room for animosity, but I just thought it was too funny to pass up.

In the opera, I think cutting straight to “is it possible to learn this power” is too abrupt, and makes the Darth Plagueis story much less of a story. It’s weird to have Palpatine build up this tragedy and then it end up just being “There was a guy who could save people from death. The end.” And if you just meant to switch out “he could actually…?” with it, you get rid of “Not from a Jedi”, which is the beat I feel like the scene should end on. Besides, it’s not a huge thing to have Anakin ask as if to make sure he heard something right.

I think I agree with you about the Opera scene. I just kinda threw something out there because I prefer the scene trimmed a bit, but that’s really a matter of personal taste.

Unrelated: do you know what resolution the source video you’re editing is?

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Thank you so much for your reply. After hearing your reasonings I agree with you but I would like to offer a few suggestions.

I guess it’s just me, but I rather like the cutting back and forth; the juxtaposition of R2 having a violent-ish adventure as Obi Wan and Anakin are literally just having an elevator chat, works better to me than if we watch one happen then the other. It’s quick, abrupt, and happens a lot, but I think that’s what adds to the humor. But that is a device used in editing for comedy movies, so I can see how it’s distracting in the context of a movie like this. Idk.

Oh I agree the cutting back and forth does work but I think it happens so quickly that I don’t really have anytime to take in and thus laugh at the comedy. I just feel that you need to either seperate the two or hold on each cut a little longer before mvoing to the next one.

Thanks for this! I’ve been trying to break how I was going to fix this scene, and I can’t believe I didn’t think of reversing the previous shot! I’ve changed it quickly in between studying lol. Thank you! It really helps to have more than my pair of eyes on the edit.

Your most welcome. Don’t worry I plan on giving this fam edit as much feedback as I can. LOL

This is actually from Hal 9000’s edit, and I think it’s fine tbh. It would be kind of confusing to the hypothetical first time viewer, but I don’t know how much. There are alot of things that go unexplained in Star Wars, and this is one of those things that’s easier to assume correctly; that that’s his “true form” or whatever. The “or whatever” part allows for some imagination on the part of the viewer anyway.

Good point but perhaps you could splice together a transformation shot from the footage of Windu reflecting back force lightning.

Something like this.

Anakin cuts off Windu's hand.

Use the shot of Palpatine shooting force lightning at Windu from earilier.

Then use a shot of the lightning changing his face.

Then have palpatine yell the POWER!!! line.

I do think it’s fine as well, I’m just offering some suggestions.

I thought the music surprisingly flowed from one note to the next despite my cutting, but I did think the background lava explosion sfx just kind of abruptly stops; is that what you meant? If that’s the case, I’m definitely still trying to work that out. Maybe by having the sound fade out a little sooner before the next cut? But that might be more jarring.

Yeah I mean’t the lava explosion sfx cuts out. My bad. LOL

I think there isn’t enough to support the idea that in the time Anakin and Obi Wan are separated, he turns fully against his best friend. Before, you have the justification of “oh the dark side corrupted him” or “oh they were never really friends”, but those are both contrary to the idea of my edit. They’re really only enemies by circumstance and what Anakin’s done at this point; I don’t think Anakin should have any real ill will against Obi Wan. By leaving “if you’re not with me…” hanging, and silence from Anakin there onwards, it’s almost like Anakin is giving Obi Wan a quick out. But Obi Wan obviously doesn’t want to back down, so Anakin does he must - which is try to kill him. From there, Anakin is “too quiet” because in my interpretation of the characters, I do believe that any verbal engagement between the two would go differently than it did in the theatrical. Obi Wan could talk sense (or at the very least regret enough to stop) into Anakin, because from Anakin’s POV, he doesn’t believe the Jedi are actually evil.

Very good points and I agree with your reasonings. Here is an alternative solution which I feel fits into your characterization.

Anakin “To my new empire.”

Obi-Wan “Your new empire? Anakin, my allegiance is to the republic!”

Anakin look's over his shoulder and then turns his head back again.

Anakin with his back still turned “Don't make me kill you.”

(This uses Anakins original dialog in between “Your new empire?” and “Anakin, my allegiance is to the Republic, to democracy!” I feel this fits in well with Anakin giving Obi-Wan a quick out and it mirrors the dialog Vader says to luke in ESB “Don’t make me destroy you.”)

Obi-Wan “I will do what I must.”

Anakin “So will I.” 

(This would have to be constructed from earlier dialog but as you said “Anakin does what he
must - which is try to kill him.” and you already have the “WILL I” sound from “you WILL tRY”)

or Anakin “You will.” 

(To me this is basically Anakin acknowledging that “You will do what you must and so will I.”)

I think this could fix the disjointed and clunky feel of this conversation while also fitting into your characterization.

I somewhat agree with you when it comes to the line “This is the end for you.” (Cutting out the “My Master” part) but I also feel that if Anakin’s only reply to “I have failed you Anakin, I have failed you” is “This is the end for you.” it kind of reflects the cold brutality of the man Anakin is becoming (Darth Vader).

But like I said these are just my opinions and suggestions. LOL

I had a slowed down shot of Anakin’s face there in an earlier cut, but it looks even weirder. I took the lesser of two weirds, because I really don’t want “underestimate my power.”

This is how it appears in your edit.

Obi-Wan "It's over Anakin, I have the high ground."

The skiff pulls up.

Obi-Wan "Don't try it."

Shot of Anakins face before he jumps.

Anakin jumps.

I feel it would work better if you focused on Anakins face before Obi-Wan says “Don’t try it”.

Here is my suggestion for how it could be improved.

Obi-Wan "It's over Anakin, I have the high ground."

The skiff pulls up.

Shot of Anakins face before he jumps.

Obi-Wan "Don't try it."

Anakin Jumps

I’ll see what I can do. I remember putting Padme’s death where it was because I felt the shot went by too fast before or after Vader’s initial reaction.

Well, I like how you intercut the two and I love the placement of Padme’s death but what I want to see is Vader’s reaction during the line “I…? I couldn’t have! She was alive… I felt it!”.

So in my mind, it would play out like this.

Vader "Where is Padme? Is she safe? Is she all right?"

Palpatine "It seems in your anger-"

Cut to Padme's death scene.

Palpatine "-you killed her."

Slight pause in the dialog for Padme's head to fall.

Cut back to Vader.

Vader "I...? I couldn't have! She was alive... I felt it!"

Then the scene continues exactly as you edited it.

Like I said earlier these are just little things to me, on the whole, your fan edit is amazing 10/10.

P.S. Aww shucks, I’m glad you like the poster.

P.P.S One thing I forgot to mention in my last post was that I would include the dialog between Anakin and Obi-Wan about sensing a trap but removing the line about sensing Count Doku. Because I know why you cut the line about Count Doku but I think the banter about springing the trap is entertaining and again gives off that brothers vibe you’re going for.

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I just finished watching the edit and I would like to say that it’s great!

I really dislike Anakin saying “So we doin this or what?”. I understand why you cut him saying master and whatnot, but the added line doesn’t fit.

No edit can fix the fundamental flaws of this film (A majority of the exposition is done through boring walking and talking scenes), but you do a good job of making it seem less tedious, somehow. I don’t know what you’ve done, but keep doing it.

All of my other possible complaints have already been brought up (to my knowledge)

I really love how you added Anakin’s theme to that one scene.

You’ve brought entirely new concepts to the realm of fan-editing this movie. Overall, as a fan edit, this is up there with Q2 and HAL 9000 in terms of my favorite ROTS edits.

Cheers!

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Oh wow, I have my work cut out for me just responding to all of these. I’ll get back to replying tomorrow, but for now, I’ll respond to the easiest stuff since it’s late here and I’m pretty sleepy. The workshopping and explaining I’ll try to do tomorrow.

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@LordRorek: On your PPS, that’s exactly what I did. The “trap” thing.
@snooker: Thank you for the feedback. But I am curious to know why exactly “So we doing this or what?” doesn’t fit there so that I might find a suitable replacement. I felt it was more casual than the theatrical line and that jokey-ness works more with the characterization of the friendship I’m going for. Not to mention how it fits the situation in which neither of them really want to deal with politicians.

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It “fits”, I guess, but for some reason it really pulled me out of the movie. It just doesn’t feel like a line that would be in a Star Wars movie.

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NFBisms said:

@LordRorek: On your PPS, that’s exactly what I did. The “trap” thing.

Oops, I must have missed it, My bad. LOL

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Above, some people were talking about the High Ground bit. I prefer it just removed all together. I think l8wrtr did this, where they both jump, but Anakin’s a little late, and gets cut up on his way down.

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OH I just heard a great idea I thought you might like to borrow. I heard from somewhere on these forums about replacing Darth Vaders NOOOO at the end of ROTS with Mufasa’s bone chilling scream when he falls in the Lion King.

Since both characters are voiced by James Earl Jones it might actually work.

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LordRorek said:

OH I just heard a great idea I thought you might like to borrow. I heard from somewhere on these forums about replacing Darth Vaders NOOOO at the end of ROTS with Mufasa’s bone chilling scream when he falls in the Lion King.

Since both characters are voiced by James Earl Jones it might actually work.

Honestly, just cut that scene out. No way to fix it, and it doesn’t really add much, anyway.

Shouldn’t Padme survive, anyway, because of RotJ?

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Edit: Double posted I guess, only now noticing a month or so later. Sorry.

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Hey man!! Sorry this is so late, here are some notes I took, not extensive!

TECHNICAL ISSUES:
When Obi-Wan and Anakin land in the separatist hanger it is really quite without the scrapping of the ships. Not sure if this is something you can add back in.
When the destroyers show up it sounds like Obi-Wan is saying something but it is inaudible.
When the droids say “hands up jedi” it just sounds really weird. Especially since we’re basing this off the Clone Wars with their goofy droids I feel like the original voice should remain. This goes for when you have the super battle droids speak (I think having them speak less is good)
When Anakin kicks Dooku you might want to add a sound effect so that the kick has some weight to it.
I think you should leave the line “His fate…” but that’s just my opinion
The musical transition between Padme and the Jedi temple is very janky, not sure what you could do though.

Aside from a few more kinks which shouldn’t be too hard to see and some others have already pointed them out, I really really like this edit. It does capture Anakin’s fall and his friendship with Obi-Wan very well. You did a great job matching this to the Clone Wars. Now with just a few tweaks here and there it is going to be amazing!

After being beaten and battered by prequel hate, I promise not to be that to the next generation.

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So I’m a pretty amateur editor, so don’t expect too much.

Does tons of crazy fancy stuff

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I know this is probably really late to the party but I’ve been thinking about the Vader Awakens scene a lot lately, and I think you can use parts from Rebels and the OT to make Vader’s final turn more powerful.

E: Anakin? Can you hear me?
V: Where is Padme?
E: In your anger, you killed her

Begin crushing stuff, Sound of using force builds

V: You must use the power of the dark side to save her
E: I’m afraid, my friend, she is lost

Full room crushing
E: Anakin…
V: Anakin Skywalker was broken. That name no longer has any meaning to me.
E: Rise, my friend. I look forward to completing your training.
V: Yes, master.

Breaks free, emperor smile and cackle from ROTJ.

This scene always bothered me, besides the campy scream, because we don’t see Vader make that pivot from sympathetic but misguided villain to cold blood sith lord. All the dialogue above can be pieced together from multiple sources.

Also, has anyone ever taken Palpatine dialog from the OT and used it to replace his over the top performance post-Windu death?

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This edit seems like THE edit of ep3 (I’m sorry Hal, I swear I still love yours too!). NFBisms, you’ve got a lot of really good ideas, you’re… a genius! I would love to watch your edit and reviewing it, primarily storywise and canonwise because I’m not so good from a technical point of view. So, excuse me if it has already been asked (I couldn’t find it in the previous pages), how could I watch your edit?

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Waiting until it’s released might be a good start.

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I actually started editing again today; with a new crawl, some new audio clips to give Anakin more personality, and HD (as opposed to the shitty quality of the previews I made). I’m also weighing my options from suggestions I’ve gotten in the process, and messing with a few more ideas. It should be finished pretty soon!

(just not within the next month, bc life)

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I’m really looking forward to this, as I liked the old version and will most likely even more like the new one, once it is ready.
Keep up your great work and take all the time you need!

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Just chiming in to say that I’m very interested in this edit, and I thought I’d sworn off any new PT edits after finding HAL’s. Love the approach you’re taking.

If you need another set of eyes on it at any point, shoot me a PM. I’d be happy to give some feedback.

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Just read through this thread, sounds like a very interesting edit! Looking forward to being able to watch it.

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WheresBlackhawk said:

Hey Chainsaw! It’s been ages!
Nice to see you back!

Thanks! It’s good to be back (in a non-lurker capacity)! I need to poke around the rewrite section of the forum while I’m off this weekend, that’s one spot I’ve avoided so far since I know it’s going to be a massive time-suck for me.