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Revenge of the Sith: The Faraday Nudge (released)

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I took a short break from my TROS novelisation to see whether my computer could handle editing a feature film. Turns out, it can! What began as an attempt to edit one deleted line back into Hal’s Labyrinth of Evil turned into an exercise in trimming most scenes and shots down for better flow and quicker pacing, as well as integrating select parts of the Theatrical Cut and NFBisms’ wonderful New Canon Cut.

This is what I’d consider a “vanity edit,” done to make the version of the film that I personally want to sit and watch, based on no guiding philosophy other than “leave in the stuff I like, remove the stuff I don’t.” I like to think that some of the places where I’ve tightened up the pace might be helpful to other people’s edits as well, though.

Here’s my changelog. I used Hal’s Labyrinth of Evil edit as my base, so his edits that I’ve retained are in italics (and hidden, for visual clarity of the list, unless I’ve reverted or changed them). If this sounds like something you might enjoy, let me know and I’ll send you a link.

Changelog:

  • Gave myself a vocal cameo somewhere in the movie.
  • Added my own vanity plate to the start.
  • New title crawl, courtesy of Eyepainter.
  • Truncated the space battle at the start. For me, it goes on too long and my interest wanes. I’ve tried to make it punchier, keep only the key moments, and make sense from the confusing geography of ships moving between shots.
  • Removed Obi-Wan leaping from his cockpit and his little jump during the fight with the battle droids. Reinstated Obi-Wan’s sassy comment about the shields, his big jump out of the ship, and R2’s funny little sproing.
  • Lovingly borrowed audio from L8wrtr’s edit in a few spots to remove battle droid voices.
  • Dooku is not mentioned until he arrives to confront the Jedi.
  • Obi-Wan never refers to R2 by name. It’s not much, but it’s a small way to gloss over the tension between the continuity of the PT and OT.
  • Partially reinstated confrontation with destroyer and battle droids while boarding the elevator. Further truncated the elevator sequence.
  • A match cut removes bad dialogue before the duel.
  • Removed sound effects in the rear audio channels that were lifted straight from The Empire Strikes Back.
  • Cut away as the railing starts to land on Obi-Wan. The original made it look like his legs were crushed.
  • Anakin quickly decapitates Dooku with no influence from Palpatine. However, he still questions his actions afterward. (I only had the later version where Hal undid this change, so, I recreated it myself.)
  • Trimmed dialogue and tightened up the action sequence leading up to the bridge fight, including removing R2 slapstick humor.
  • Corrected two inaccurate lightsaber ignition sounds during the opening sequence. Obi-Wan and Anakin’s sabers must match their ANH and ESB sounds.
  • Truncated the battle on the ship’s bridge. When R2D2 throws a fit nobody stands around watching for a second; Obi-Wan grabs his lightsaber instantly and goes. He also makes shorter work of the magnaguard he decapitates.
  • Grievous says, “Time to abandon ship” as he breaks the hull and escapes.
  • Used dialogue from The Clone Wars to replace Grievous’ line that was moved to earlier.
  • Lightly trimmed dialogue during the crash landing on Coruscant.
  • Trimmed Anakin and Obi-Wan’s dialogue recounting past adventures we never get to see.
  • Removed Jar Jar’s one line.
  • Anakin is only shown to have one nightmare about Padme, and he never tells her about it, another conflict within him.
  • Reinstated the balcony scene in a slightly edited form, giving us a window into Anakin and Padme’s happy relationship before the downfall. Used NFBisms’ idea of placing it before Anakin arrives late to the meeting to imply he spent the night at Padme’s apartment.
  • Replaced scene with Windu hearing that Obi-Wan has engaged Grievous with deleted scene "A Plot to Destroy the Jedi” earlier in the film.
  • Reconstructed NFBisms’ version of Palpatine making Anakin his representative on the Jedi Council, other than Palpatine’s final line to Anakin.
  • Reconstructed NFBisms’ version of Anakin being appointed to the council, but cut Anakin saying “something is happening.”
  • Reinstated the deleted scene in Bail Organa’s apartment, gently color correcting it to appear to be a bit later in the day, in order to give Padme something worthwhile to do in the film and contribute to a sense of tension between her and Anakin.
  • Reinstated a brief reference to the Jedi Code.
  • Cut Mace Windu referring to Anakin as a boy and saying he doesn’t trust him.
  • Reconstructed NFBisms’ version of Padme and Anakin talking about the war being a failure to listen.
  • Moved Grievous’ arrival on Utupau to after Anakin and Padme’s tense political discussion.
  • During the opera scene, removed reference to midichlorians. Also removed Palpatine calling Anakin out on spying on him. It is more effective to let Anakin carry that tension inwardly only, and provide no relief. Reinstated theatrical version of Darth Plagueis speech.
  • Trimmed Anakin calling Obi-Wan “master” at their farewell, so when he mentions Obi-Wan’s training it feels more like two equals remembering the distant past when he was Obi-Wan’s student.
  • Replaced the unsuitably harrowing music when Obi-Wan and Anakin speak to each other as friends for the final time with something more fitting and bittersweet (‘The Will of the Force’ from the Jedi: Fallen Order soundtrack).
  • Chewbacca’s onscreen appearances have been altered to either remove him or disguise him by recoloring his fur and adding alternate clothing. (Thanks to Poppasketti for visual FX, and to danieldubb and Chase Adams for help with audio)
  • Cut the tank explosion from the Wookiee and droid battle, which I feel lasts slightly too long.
  • Reinstated the sunset meeting between the loyalists and Palpatine, further elaborating on the tension between Anakin and Padme. Trimmed Palpatine’s snarky line about the committee to make him more believably manipulative as a politician.
  • Anakin is depicted as being in his right mind up until he formally joins the dark side. The scene where he seems to have paranoia about Obi-Wan being as Padme’s apartment is gone.
  • Along with other dialogue trims, removed Obi-Wan telling the corduroy man to summon warriors.
  • Removed the first half of Grievous’ line, “It is a volcanic planet. You will be safe there.” Volcanic equals safe?
  • Shortened the shot of the big metal thing Obi-Wan pulls onto the magnaguards.
  • Reinstated Grievous taunting that he’s been trained by Count Dooku, albeit with slightly tighter timing.
  • Removed the second shot of Grievous’ hand spinning one of his lightsabers, since it adds nothing to the scene, throws off the timing, and drifts weirdly to one side.
  • Trimmed Grievous’ lunge that Obi-Wan does not react to. It betrays the chasm between the CGI and live elements.
  • Grievous retreats as soon as the clone troops arrive, in keeping with what little characterization about him we have seen so far, rather than gloating a bit and then running away.
  • Removed the now redundant scene in the war room talking about a plot to destroy the Jedi.
  • Reconstructed NFBisms’ version of Palpatine revealing to Anakin that he is the Sith Lord. (Huge thanks to NFBisms for sending me some of his original clean VFX shots to make this possible.)
  • Trimmed a few shots of the end of the Grievous chase to pick up the pace a little.
  • Cut Grievous successfully kicking Obi-Wan. We just saw him dent the spaceship with a punch, a kick would shatter his skull. Removing it keeps the tension up, as any hit Grievous lands could kill Obi-Wan instantly.
  • Tightened up Obi-Wan shooting Grievous, so it doesn’t look like Obi-Wan points the blaster at him and patiently waits around for him to wave the electro-staff about a bit, then casually lets Grievous stand there after being shot before firing again.
  • Removed Palpatine’s voiceover as Anakin waits in the Council room, talking about Padme again.
  • Trimmed dialogue as Windu and his gang confront Palpatine. Restored the full conversation preceding Palpatine’s attempted arrest, but truncated the spin over the desk slightly. Now he only turns once, like some kind of weird monster, instead of noodling through the air like a Flutterbye Fairy.
  • Trimmed the arrest fight to clean up the geography and pick up the pace. Hopefully Sheev looks like a fast and extremely efficient duellist now, instead of the Jedi just standing around gormlessly while he merks their friends.
  • Trimmed the lightsaber fight, including Palpatine’s bizarre serpentine jump. As the fight continues into the office, cut some of Mace and Sheev’s sillier twirls that I find distracting, and added back in some of their silliest twirls which I like.
  • As Anakin enters the scene, Windu is already going to kill Palpatine, who defends himself with force lightning and sends Windu falling to his death. I made use of an idea from Kerr’s fan edit that L8wrtr also used to imply that the wrinkly face was Palpatine’s true appearance all along. Palpatine uses lightning only once instead of twice. He’s human-looking at the start, then the lights go out, and he has a monster face when they come back on. Reinstated the theatrical cut of Mace, Palpatine and Anakin’s conversation, but trimmed Palpatine pretending to be weak and defenceless. Also trimmed Mace’s comedically long baseball bat wind-up to executing Palpatine, giving Anakin less time to think before making his decision.
  • Replaced “Power! Unlimited power!” with a wordless shout of exertion. It’s a fun line and I like the delivery but this isn’t a moment for camp melodrama, it’s a moment for serious emotional melodrama.
  • The second blast of lightning throws Mace out the window immediately.
  • Anakin and Palpatine don’t mention Padme during the knighting of Vader scene. Other dialogue is trimmed a little for effectiveness. The idea is that saving Padme’s life is the spark that ignites a myriad of other factors for Anakin’s turn toward evil.
  • Cut Anakin awkwardly calling Palpatine “my master” immediately after Hayden’s great line read on “thank you.” Now it feels like he’s actually grateful, albeit still conflicted, to receive the title of Darth Vader.
  • Cut Palpatine saying Anakin will be stronger with the Dark Side after killing everyone in the Temple. Not exactly a good selling technique at that moment, Sheev. You’re meant to be making this seem reasonable, not evil.
  • Cut Palpatine referring to Commander Cody by name. Why would he know the name of every single clone commander? Is he contacting every single squad individually? It makes more sense if it’s a message sent en masse to all the clone commanders.
  • Added a short scene in which Jedi are being slaughtered in the Temple while Anakin oversees.
  • After Yoda’s brief and only use of his lightsaber in the whole trilogy, removed the scene where Anakin ignites his saber on a roomful of children. By cutting this, Anakin’s slip toward depravity can be seen as a little more gradual.
  • Removed the one bit of dialogue in the otherwise wordless Order 66 montage.
  • Cropped the establishing shot of Grievous’ ship and landing pad, to make it clear where we’re meant to be looking in frame.
  • Cut C-3PO’s weird line about Anakin being under a lot of stress.
  • Removed Yoda’s interactions with the Wookiees after Order 66. Removed R2 popping out of Anakin’s fighter.
  • Removed Obi-Wan and Yoda’s fight to enter the Temple. The line of dialogue about everyone being preoccupied about the Senate session is good enough.
  • Because I removed the duel between Yoda and Palpatine, I also removed discussion about said duel after Obi-Wan sees the security hologram. Also removed Yoda’s line that sees Anakin and Vader as separate people; it sounds like something he would have said in Return of the Jedi, rather than immediately after Anakin turned.
  • Truncated the introduction to Mustafar.
  • Padme is never informed about Anakin killing children. Trimmed other dialogue during this scene for effectiveness. Slightly extended Obi-Wan’s line to “I have seen a security recording… of him…” and then he chokes up slightly before turning back to Padme.
  • Truncated Anakin brooding on Mustafar, so the music no longer spikes dramatically at a very long static shot of an empty table.
  • Removed Obi-Wan sneaking into the bathroom on Padme’s ship. If you missed him during the wide shot, it’ll be a surprise when he shows up later.
  • Removed most asinine dialogue as Padme arrives and confronts Anakin, including “I saw your ship.” No reference to younglings. Tension ratchets between the two as Anakin finds out Padme told Obi-Wan about their relationship. No discussion about Anakin trying to save Padme; she never knew about Anakin’s fears about that. Anakin doesn’t seem focused on it himself anymore. Added back in some more Anakin and Padme lines I like in their final conversation.
  • The duel on Mustafar plays out in full without cutting away to other plot threads. There is no duel between Yoda and Sidious.
  • Removed Anakin and Obi-Wan swinging back and forth on wires swatting at each other.
  • Cut the weirdly long shot of that droid thing Anakin lands on. The droid looks stupid and I feel sorry for it when it gets caught up in the fight. It’s so distracting.
  • Removed dialogue about the ‘high ground’ at the end of the duel. Reinstated the “high ground” conversation.
  • Cropped the shot of Obi-Wan approaching R2D2, to make it clear where we’re meant to be looking in frame.
  • Hal’s voice replaces that of the medical droid. His prognosis is not that she’s dying, but rather that she will survive without ever fully recovering.
  • Thanks to Snooker and Sir Ridley, removed R2 and 3PO from the birth of the twins. This eases continuity tensions with the original trilogy, avoiding awkward questions like, “Shouldn’t R2 have recognized Yoda on Dagobah?”
  • Replaced Vader’s scream with the Russian dub, arguably making it a little less cheesy.
  • Courtesy of Hundsdorfex, replaced shot of Tantive IV descending toward Naboo with the ship streaking through space.
  • Trimmed dialogue aboard the Tantive IV to accommodate the idea that Padmé survives to travel to Alderaan with Leia.
  • Replaced Padme’s funeral with the deleted scene of Yoda arriving on Dagobah.
  • Padme is seen cradling an infant Leia on Alderaan, using footage from The Other Boleyn Girl, with her eye color corrected by Hundsdorfex. (Idea by ‘The Cutter,’ also used in Q2’s edit.)
  • Added credits for myself, workprint viewers, contributors, and acknowledgements of all other ROTS “FanFix” fan edits to date.
  • Gave myself, NFBisms, and Eyepainter credits alongside Hal and everyone who contributed to Labyrinth of Evil respectively.
  • Added some little easter eggs for people who like to watch the end credits.

“It’s like rhymetry. They poem.” - Leorge Gucas

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I’m excited that you’re moving on to film edits! Your changelog looks promising; looks like you put a lot of effort into this.

But ROTS is kinda the Holy Grail of the saga for me, so the only edits I keep of it are extended editions. I’d still be interested in a link to check things out when it’s ready, though.

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Thank you! I’m embarrassed to say I threw it together over two evenings; I’ve always been a fast editor, the only thing that slowed me down significantly this time was how long it takes my computer to load whenever I move positions on the timeline.

Like I said, this edit isn’t gonna be everyone’s cup of tea, because it’s literally made specifically for my individual tastes lol. But I’ll definitely send you a link if I can export it successfully tonight!

ROTS is such a flexible movie to fanedit, because it’s such a sprawling epic with so many different ideas jumbled in there. It’s perfectly competent in its theatrical cut, but there’s so much content in it that everyone can tailor it to their own interpretation of its themes and ideas. So I agree it’s got kind of a “holy grail” status to find the exact right one for each of us. What’s your preferred edit of it, out of interest?

“It’s like rhymetry. They poem.” - Leorge Gucas

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Perhaps I’m too late, but if you need advice on exporting, here it is. Keep in mind that I’m using Davinci Resolve for my editing software.

Usually, I like to export my edits in MKV. However, that is not a feasible option in Resolve. So, I export the file under the same settings that the actual source has. That way, I don’t lose too much information. So, if the video codec is h.264, I export it in h.264. Likewise, if the audio codec is AAC, export it as AAC.

The actual export might take a while depending on a lot of things, like your computer, graphics card, processor, etc. But once it’s done, I export it again. This time through Handbrake (which I highly recommend if you don’t have it. It’s open source too). This time, grab the file you exported recently, and convert it to an MP4 or MKV format. Both formats do the job. I already said I prefer MKV, but MP4 is very popular and works on pretty much everything.

You can also customize the export in Handbrake using a wide variety of settings. You can make it lossless, give it a DTS-HD passthru, change the framerate to 24fps, customize the resolution, etc. There are a lot of settings in Handbrake, so if there’s something you want to do to the export, but you don’t know how, feel free to reply.

Once you’ve exported through Handbrake, you should have a working edit that is ready to be uploaded to the web. However, it’s smart to watch the file first and see if any problems or glitches show up (you’ll never know until you watch it yourself). If everything looks right, you can upload it to the web using either MEGA or Google drive or some other place I haven’t been to yet. You can delete the first export now (it takes up a lot of space anyway, and once you know the second export works, the first export isn’t needed anymore).

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Eyepainter said:

Perhaps I’m too late, but if you need advice on exporting, here it is. Keep in mind that I’m using Davinci Resolve for my editing software.

Usually, I like to export my edits in MKV. However, that is not a feasible option in Resolve. So, I export the file under the same settings that the actual source has. That way, I don’t lose too much information. So, if the video codec is h.264, I export it in h.264. Likewise, if the audio codec is AAC, export it as AAC.

The actual export might take a while depending on a lot of things, like your computer, graphics card, processor, etc. But once it’s done, I export it again. This time through Handbrake (which I highly recommend if you don’t have it. It’s open source too). This time, grab the file you exported recently, and convert it to an MP4 or MKV format. Both formats do the job. I already said I prefer MKV, but MP4 is very popular and works on pretty much everything.

You can also customize the export in Handbrake using a wide variety of settings. You can make it lossless, give it a DTS-HD passthru, change the framerate to 24fps, customize the resolution, etc. There are a lot of settings in Handbrake, so if there’s something you want to do to the export, but you don’t know how, feel free to reply.

Once you’ve exported through Handbrake, you should have a working edit that is ready to be uploaded to the web. However, it’s smart to watch the file first and see if any problems or glitches show up (you’ll never know until you watch it yourself). If everything looks right, you can upload it to the web using either MEGA or Google drive or some other place I haven’t been to yet. You can delete the first export now (it takes up a lot of space anyway, and once you know the second export works, the first export isn’t needed anymore).

This is extremely helpful, thank you! I think I have Handbrake - I downloaded it a long time ago to try and rip a DVD but couldn’t get it to work. I’ll give it a go tonight and see what happens. I’m already expecting it’ll take overnight to render, my computer is old.

“It’s like rhymetry. They poem.” - Leorge Gucas

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CaptainFaraday said:

Eyepainter said:

Perhaps I’m too late, but if you need advice on exporting, here it is. Keep in mind that I’m using Davinci Resolve for my editing software.

Usually, I like to export my edits in MKV. However, that is not a feasible option in Resolve. So, I export the file under the same settings that the actual source has. That way, I don’t lose too much information. So, if the video codec is h.264, I export it in h.264. Likewise, if the audio codec is AAC, export it as AAC.

The actual export might take a while depending on a lot of things, like your computer, graphics card, processor, etc. But once it’s done, I export it again. This time through Handbrake (which I highly recommend if you don’t have it. It’s open source too). This time, grab the file you exported recently, and convert it to an MP4 or MKV format. Both formats do the job. I already said I prefer MKV, but MP4 is very popular and works on pretty much everything.

You can also customize the export in Handbrake using a wide variety of settings. You can make it lossless, give it a DTS-HD passthru, change the framerate to 24fps, customize the resolution, etc. There are a lot of settings in Handbrake, so if there’s something you want to do to the export, but you don’t know how, feel free to reply.

Once you’ve exported through Handbrake, you should have a working edit that is ready to be uploaded to the web. However, it’s smart to watch the file first and see if any problems or glitches show up (you’ll never know until you watch it yourself). If everything looks right, you can upload it to the web using either MEGA or Google drive or some other place I haven’t been to yet. You can delete the first export now (it takes up a lot of space anyway, and once you know the second export works, the first export isn’t needed anymore).

This is extremely helpful, thank you! I think I have Handbrake - I downloaded it a long time ago to try and rip a DVD but couldn’t get it to work. I’ll give it a go tonight and see what happens. I’m already expecting it’ll take overnight to render, my computer is old.

You’re welcome. And yes, I wouldn’t be surprised if it takes a while. I’ve done almost all of my exports on a Windows 10, and even then, it still takes hours to complete. Then again, I have to see if my new Mac is faster, as I’m switching over to that computer for my fanedits now.

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I use a 2013 Macbook, so you’re already leagues ahead of me! I’d assumed it was impossible for my computer to handle any significant editing job, but I’ve since learned that other people on here have created some really good edits with the same machine, so I decided to try it with a relatively simple edit first.

“It’s like rhymetry. They poem.” - Leorge Gucas

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Also: anyone who can do a custom opening crawl, would you possibly consider doing one for me? I combined the two opening crawls to change the title with a simple rolling crop, and it’s fine for my personal viewing, but now I’ve got people asking me for a link I’d prefer to do something a bit more seamless and professional.

“It’s like rhymetry. They poem.” - Leorge Gucas

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CaptainFaraday said:

ROTS is such a flexible movie to fanedit, because it’s such a sprawling epic with so many different ideas jumbled in there. It’s perfectly competent in its theatrical cut, but there’s so much content in it that everyone can tailor it to their own interpretation of its themes and ideas. So I agree it’s got kind of a “holy grail” status to find the exact right one for each of us. What’s your preferred edit of it, out of interest?

I used the wrong analogy, my bad. I meant to say that I feel like it shouldn’t be modified or changed beyond reinserting deleted scenes. Even the goofier parts of the movie have such meme potential that it feels wrong to remove them. I’m sure other people disagree with that, but I’d be willing to bet they didn’t grow up with the movie 😉

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Jar Jar Bricks said:

CaptainFaraday said:

ROTS is such a flexible movie to fanedit, because it’s such a sprawling epic with so many different ideas jumbled in there. It’s perfectly competent in its theatrical cut, but there’s so much content in it that everyone can tailor it to their own interpretation of its themes and ideas. So I agree it’s got kind of a “holy grail” status to find the exact right one for each of us. What’s your preferred edit of it, out of interest?

I used the wrong analogy, my bad. I meant to say that I feel like it shouldn’t be modified or changed beyond reinserting deleted scenes. Even the goofier parts of the movie have such meme potential that it feels wrong to remove them. I’m sure other people disagree with that, but I’d be willing to bet they didn’t grow up with the movie 😉

I love all the goofy, campy bits. I’ve added a bunch back in with this edit - the whole edit originally came about because I wanted Grievous to gloat about being trained by Dooku. The way I figure it, the theatrical cut is always there for me to watch if I want all of those things (and so is the four hour cut that puts in EVERYTHING and rolls in The Siege of Mandalore and Tartakovsky’s Clone Wars, if I want the banquet viewing experience). Different cuts for different moods, basically.

“It’s like rhymetry. They poem.” - Leorge Gucas

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Oh I see. I can definitely see where you’re coming from there. So would you say this is a sort of merger between the theatrical and Labyrinth of Evil?

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Mostly. It’s basically a mix of theatrical, LoE, and NFBisms’ New Canon Cut. On top of that, I’ve trimmed a lot of shots and scenes for brevity, clarity, and pacing.

“It’s like rhymetry. They poem.” - Leorge Gucas

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CaptainFaraday said:

Also: anyone who can do a custom opening crawl, would you possibly consider doing one for me? I combined the two opening crawls to change the title with a simple rolling crop, and it’s fine for my personal viewing, but now I’ve got people asking me for a link I’d prefer to do something a bit more seamless and professional.

Have you tried Jackpumpkinhead’s custom crawl creator? It works with Blender, and it comes with a tutorial for those of us who don’t know how anything works over there.

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Eyepainter said:

CaptainFaraday said:

Also: anyone who can do a custom opening crawl, would you possibly consider doing one for me? I combined the two opening crawls to change the title with a simple rolling crop, and it’s fine for my personal viewing, but now I’ve got people asking me for a link I’d prefer to do something a bit more seamless and professional.

Have you tried Jackpumpkinhead’s custom crawl creator? It works with Blender, and it comes with a tutorial for those of us who don’t know how anything works over there.

I don’t have Blender and I suspect it won’t work on my computer. I’ve forced it to never update about half a decade ago so that it wouldn’t mess with my software (some of which wouldn’t work any more if I updated). For someone who spends so much time on a computer, I’m somewhat of a luddite.

Edit: Wow that sounds ungrateful of me! That wasn’t intentional. It’s worth me at least having a look at it, and seeing if it’d work with any version of Blender that might run on my computer.

“It’s like rhymetry. They poem.” - Leorge Gucas

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It’s really easy to use imo. What it spits out looks great as well. The real trouble is aligning it with the music and having it fade away properly.

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CaptainFaraday said:

Eyepainter said:

CaptainFaraday said:

Also: anyone who can do a custom opening crawl, would you possibly consider doing one for me? I combined the two opening crawls to change the title with a simple rolling crop, and it’s fine for my personal viewing, but now I’ve got people asking me for a link I’d prefer to do something a bit more seamless and professional.

Have you tried Jackpumpkinhead’s custom crawl creator? It works with Blender, and it comes with a tutorial for those of us who don’t know how anything works over there.

I don’t have Blender and I suspect it won’t work on my computer. I’ve forced it to never update about half a decade ago so that it wouldn’t mess with my software (some of which wouldn’t work any more if I updated). For someone who spends so much time on a computer, I’m somewhat of a luddite.

Edit: Wow that sounds ungrateful of me! That wasn’t intentional. It’s worth me at least having a look at it, and seeing if it’d work with any version of Blender that might run on my computer.

It’s okay. No offense taken.

Anyway, if your computer is having that much trouble, I’d be happy to work on it myself. However, I don’t know what I’m writing for the crawl, so I will need to know what I’m writing down first.

Also, I’m not sure how large the file will be, but the crawl files I’ve uploaded have often slowed my editing software down. So keep in mind that the file might slow your computer even more than it already is.

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Eyepainter said:

CaptainFaraday said:

Eyepainter said:

CaptainFaraday said:

Also: anyone who can do a custom opening crawl, would you possibly consider doing one for me? I combined the two opening crawls to change the title with a simple rolling crop, and it’s fine for my personal viewing, but now I’ve got people asking me for a link I’d prefer to do something a bit more seamless and professional.

Have you tried Jackpumpkinhead’s custom crawl creator? It works with Blender, and it comes with a tutorial for those of us who don’t know how anything works over there.

I don’t have Blender and I suspect it won’t work on my computer. I’ve forced it to never update about half a decade ago so that it wouldn’t mess with my software (some of which wouldn’t work any more if I updated). For someone who spends so much time on a computer, I’m somewhat of a luddite.

Edit: Wow that sounds ungrateful of me! That wasn’t intentional. It’s worth me at least having a look at it, and seeing if it’d work with any version of Blender that might run on my computer.

It’s okay. No offense taken.

Anyway, if your computer is having that much trouble, I’d be happy to work on it myself. However, I don’t know what I’m writing for the crawl, so I will need to know what I’m writing down first.

Also, I’m not sure how large the file will be, but the crawl files I’ve uploaded have often slowed my editing software down. So keep in mind that the file might slow your computer even more than it already is.

If it’s not an imposition, I’d really appreciate that - I’ll give it a go myself though, and see what I can do first.

“It’s like rhymetry. They poem.” - Leorge Gucas

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I’m trying to export from Premiere Pro CS6, but when I check “use sequence settings,” it will only let me export it as a .mxf file. I’m not sure what to do.

EDIT: I carefully reread Eyepainter’s advice, and I’m going to try exporting it as a .mxf and then I’ll try installing Handbrake tomorrow and see if I can change it to something more usable.

“It’s like rhymetry. They poem.” - Leorge Gucas

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Also, NFBisms very kindly provided me with a couple of his original VFX shots, so, I’ve been able to integrate them into the edit!

Ooh what are those for?

Exsqueeze me.

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Jar Jar Bricks said:

CaptainFaraday said:

Also, NFBisms very kindly provided me with a couple of his original VFX shots, so, I’ve been able to integrate them into the edit!

Ooh what are those for?

They’re subtle but make a big difference. In the scene where Palpatine reveals himself as a Sith to Anakin, one of Anakin’s lines has the middle removed without cutting away to hide the edit, and Palpatine similarly has a silent reaction shot that I have no idea how NFBisms made.

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Update:

I tried exporting with sequence settings, however, it produced a folder of multiple files in strange formats instead of a single video file. So, I looked up the sequence settings, and matched them (format H.264, preset HD 720p 23.976) manually. It worked, but, it’s added black bars to the top and bottom of the frame. I don’t think it makes any difference, but obviously, it would be nice to have it at the actual aspect ratio. (Edit for clarity: the actual movie isn’t obscured or missing part of the frame, it’s just had extra black areas put above and below it.)

Also, the opening crawl really does look unprofessional. I tried with Blender but just made a mess of things; Eyepainter, if you’re still happy to render a crawl for me, I’ll send you the text. Originally I just used SirRidley’s crawl from LoE, but I’ll make some tweaks to it now I’ve got the chance.

Ultimately, the big victory here is that my computer can actually render a feature length file overnight!

“It’s like rhymetry. They poem.” - Leorge Gucas

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Update:

I tried exporting with sequence settings, however, it produced a folder of multiple files in strange formats instead of a single video file. So, I looked up the sequence settings, and matched them (format H.264, preset HD 720p 23.976) manually. It worked, but, it’s added black bars to the top and bottom of the frame. I don’t think it makes any difference, but obviously, it would be nice to have it at the actual aspect ratio.

Also, the opening crawl really does look unprofessional. I tried with Blender but just made a mess of things; Eyepainter, if you’re still happy to render a crawl for me, I’ll send you the text. Originally I just used SirRidley’s crawl from LoE, but I’ll make some tweaks to it now I’ve got the chance.

Ultimately, the big victory here is that my computer can actually render a feature length file overnight!

Sorry for not responding sooner. Having a busy week at the moment.

Anyway, .mxf files are gigantic files. They’re mainly used for digital cinema. I tried exporting my Episode I fanedit in .mxf once, and it took up so many gigabytes it couldn’t even fit on my hard drive. So I exported the file to the DNxHD format and used the quicktime codec instead. The final result of that export was only 30gb, and Handbrake took the file easily with no issues whatsoever.

As for the aspect ratio, you can rest assured that Handbrake is great at removing the black bars at the top and bottom. I’ve been able to get away with making the second export smaller by changing the resolution in the dimensions tab to 1920x820. Then customizing the cropping to 130 top and 130 bottom, giving the pixel aspect ratio a perfect 1x1 output. Of course, it looks like your edit is in 720p, so I’m not 100 percent on the dimensions for that format. However, in my experience, Handbrake tends to crop the image automatically.

As for the opening crawl, I’d be happy to work on it. However, as I mentioned, I’m having a busy work week. I might be delayed a few days to a week before I can make it sing. But I will hop to it as soon as I can.

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Thank you for the explanation! I’ll try to replicate that with mine and see how it goes (and you’re right, mine’s in 720p).

As for the crawl, I really appreciate that! There’s absolutely no rush, these things move at the pace they move. Life’s busy for me too at the moment, so I’m right there with you on that one. I’ll tweak the text and send it to you once it’s done.

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Thank you for the explanation! I’ll try to replicate that with mine and see how it goes (and you’re right, mine’s in 720p).

As for the crawl, I really appreciate that! There’s absolutely no rush, these things move at the pace they move. Life’s busy for me too at the moment, so I’m right there with you on that one. I’ll tweak the text and send it to you once it’s done.

No problem. Feel free to send it to me when it’s ready!

I have altered Lucas’ visions. Pray I don’t alter them any further.