Revenge of the Jedi (The Snooker edit) (Cancelled: *unfinished project *) — Page 9

RogueLeader said:

I like the Hammerhead test. I don’t be know if these would be helpful at all, but I wonder if it’d be helpful if the other ships were all moving at different speeds. They all seem to be moving at the same speed, at least. Like, the ones in the background could be moving a little slower.

Also, this might’ve been discussed before, but I wonder if there could be certain tricks to make them feel more like practical models. For example, I wonder if more contrast between shadows and light would change anything, or frame rate could play any role. Looks cool so far though!

I’ll play around with color correction and contrast and see how it looks. As for the movement speeds, I’ll try that with all shots moving forward. Thank you!

TK-422 said:

Any thoughts on having U-Wings in the Rebel fleet?

I’ll definately add a few, thank you.

Thanks! It always bothers me just a tad when we see new ships introduced in material that takes place before the OT. But now with the hammerhead, and any potential U-Wings, things are looking great!

👍

More ending fleet shots:

https://gfycat.com/YellowishWaterloggedDavidstiger

Hi-rez screenshot:

I’m sort of unhappy with the cockpit overlay. And I’m having trouble with the engine glows. How does adywan manage to do it?

That’s some great work! I’m useless to you for any technical knowledge, just keep doing what you’re doing.

Anakin Starkiller said:

I hope that shot with hammerhead isn’t final. It looks like it could be from classic Battlefront. Come on, man, you can do better than this. In regard to the other ending fleet shot, there’s something off about how static the foreground is. Maybe give it some flashing lights or something.

There are ways you can give feedback without sounding like this.

Anakin Starkiller said:

I tried my best to be encouraging.

Let’s see your version, show him where he went wrong.

FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT!

JEDIT: I don’t really see how these shots look worse than any of the Eclipse shots.

Here’s the last gif but with engine glows!

https://gfycat.com/TallCleverGibbon

Hi-rez screenshot:

I’m still trying to figure out how to do the Falcon and I don’t know what color engine a U-Wing has.

Cool, making progress! I think the glow is a little intense on the larger ships though.

Also, could you possibly use a different Falcon model? It might just be me, but it looks a little brown compared to the other ships.

Great work! U-Wings seem to have a blue engine glow from what I’ve seen.

RogueLeader said:

Cool, making progress! I think the glow is a little intense on the larger ships though.

Also, could you possibly use a different Falcon model? It might just be me, but it looks a little brown compared to the other ships.

Yeah, the bigger glows do need to be toned down. The Falcon model I’ve got is brown but unfortunately it’s the highest detailed model of the falcon available (it’s from Battlefront II).

I’ll desaturate it or something in post.

I would be more than happy to volunteer to dub General Madine if you’re still looking for somebody to do that.

I need some feedback on my idea for the attack before I actually get the wonderful voice actor to record the lines.

The Endor moon serves as a refueling and repair depot for the dreaded Imperial Starfleet. A successful attack on the moon’s facilities will strike a real blow to the Imperial war-effort, and will bring the rebellion one step closer to winning the war. However, before a full attack on the moon, a strike team headed by General Solo will need to deactivate the planetary defense shield.

I feel like for this movie to have any meaning in a hypothetical universe after it, the Rebels should manage to blow up the factory. Perhaps the Executor (after the Emperor’s death) could blow up and fall planet-ward- destroying the repair facility.

I also feel like the Rebel fleet scene I’ve been showing you is too… empty? I feel like it would be really upsetting to see that the Rebellion has only like 3 corvettes and Home One left. Perhaps I should take an idea from Rebels and have it be mentioned that the fleet we see in the movie is only one cell of the larger Rebel Alliance. This would also explain why Dodanna and Rieekan aren’t present in the movie- their cells are off doing other things. This also makes the ending of the light-hearted family action movie less depressing.

Another Idea: Perhaps Ackbar dies and Madine is the one to survive?

I really like your idea about different cells of the Rebellion, perhaps the cell we see in your edit could be the infamous “Outer Rim Allies” from TLJ? I also agree that a few more ships in the fleet shots wouldn’t hurt.

But I think The Executor crashing into Endor seems a bit odd. The Rebels destroy the Empire’s largest ship…so that it can kill their friends when it crashes? I dunno, that just seems kind of off. That being said, every other idea you’ve suggested has been fantastic, and I’m really excited to see the full film.

I was thinking more after the ground staff had been evacuated, but any idea goes for how they actually destroy the station. I was just throwing around ideas 😕

snooker said:

I was thinking more after the ground staff had been evacuated, but any idea goes for how they actually destroy the station. I was just throwing around ideas 😕

Ohhhhh, that makes more sense.