Revenge of the Jedi (The Snooker edit) (Cancelled: unfinished project ) — Page 10

Author: Anakin Starkiller
Time: 12-Apr-2018 2:26 PM
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snooker said:

I also feel like the Rebel fleet scene I’ve been showing you is too… empty? I feel like it would be really upsetting to see that the Rebellion has only like 3 corvettes and Home One left. Perhaps I should take an idea from Rebels and have it be mentioned that the fleet we see in the movie is only one cell of the larger Rebel Alliance. This would also explain why Dodanna and Rieekan aren’t present in the movie- their cells are off doing other things. This also makes the ending of the light-hearted family action movie less depressing.

But isn’t the Battle of Endor supposed to be the big decisive battle? I feel like all Rebel cells should be present. In canon, they were all unified by the time of RO.

Author: RogueLeader
Time: 12-Apr-2018 3:24 PM
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I also think he idea of other rebels cells sort of lower the stakes. The battle suddenly isn’t all or nothing because we know there are more rebels out there.

I feel like it would be sort of convenient for the SSD to crash right into the the repair facility of all places. I like the idea of it burning up as it falls through the atmosphere though.

Author: Anakin Starkiller
Time: 12-Apr-2018 6:09 PM
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RogueLeader said:

I also think he idea of other rebels cells sort of lower the stakes. The battle suddenly isn’t all or nothing because we know there are more rebels out there.

That’s what I was getting at.

Author: snooker
Time: 13-Apr-2018 12:18 AM
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Noted.

girl

Author: snooker
Time: 13-Apr-2018 8:32 PM
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Here’s an idea: at some point after the Emperor’s death, we cut to Jerjerrod’s conflict scene, starting with a voice off-screen telling him that there is a message from the emperor’s chamber. We then hear that the message says to blow up the Destroyer at once. Jerjerrod looks at the other officer. We then cut to Vader’s death scene.

The audience can infer that the message is infact from Luke, giving his defeat of the Emperor some bearing on the actual battle plot. Again, this is just an idea.

girl

Author: OutboundFlight
Time: 13-Apr-2018 11:06 PM
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That’s interesting. Lando flung into the control room might not work with the destroyer now that I think about it (since it’s not under construction). Though it’d take away from Lando’s big accomplishment, he was never a main character until this movie. Luke and Vader more important imo.

tldr 👍

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Author: RogueLeader
Time: 14-Apr-2018 4:05 AM
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Interesting idea Snooker! Would be interesting to see a test of this even if you just put text where the line should be.

Author: snooker
Time: 14-Apr-2018 12:46 PM (Edited)
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Question: Should I kill Chewbacca? I really don’t feel like rotoscoping him out of/in to a few shots 😛

Here’s a thingy:

https://gfycat.com/ClassicPlayfulKakarikis

Hi-rez screenshot:

I know it isn’t complicated as the original Endor hologram, but whatever.

girl

Author: Jp4195
Time: 14-Apr-2018 5:42 PM (Edited)
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Idk about killing off Chewie, we’re already loosing our favorite scruffy looking nurf herder in this version of the final chapter of the OT not sure if we could do with loosing our favorite fuzz ball as well, though if Han and Chewie died together somehow I could see that being very emotional and meaningful. I really like that hologram too, though would it be possible to ad some debris like you’ve depicted it in the other shots you’ve shown, I think it would really help with solidifying it as the same planet

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Author: snooker
Time: 14-Apr-2018 5:49 PM
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I probably won’t end up killing Chewie.

I’ll see about adding a few star destroyers orbiting it.

I might end up removing the debris from the earlier previews because I’ve ditched the shipyard idea.

girl

Author: MissJackie
Time: 15-Apr-2018 4:58 PM
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snooker said:

I need some feedback on my idea for the attack before I actually get the wonderful voice actor to record the lines.

Good luck Snooker on Revenge of the Jedi! Here is my idea. The forest moon is the secret location of a Imperial starship yard. It is the target of the rebel mission. This staryard is for building the invisible star destroyer, but the rebels don’t know that. The space factory is protected by a deflector shield on the moon. After the shield goes down, the super star destroyer is defeated and crashes into the station, destroying it.

Author: Anakin Starkiller
Time: 15-Apr-2018 7:09 PM
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snooker said:

Question: Should I kill Chewbacca? I really don’t feel like rotoscoping him out of/in to a few shots 😛

Here’s a thingy:

https://gfycat.com/ClassicPlayfulKakarikis

Hi-rez screenshot:

I know it isn’t complicated as the original Endor hologram, but whatever.

What’s this supposed to be a hologram of?