Revenge Of The Cut - Star Wars: Revenge Of The Sith (* unfinished project *) — Page 15

rpvee said:

  I suggest you have only the sound of the saber igniting,

 Yes, I just noticed there is still a little noise

Much better!  Still needs a little more pause before "It's treason then".  And as stated earlier, at the beginning, Windu appears out of nowhere.

The dialogue still isn't buying me. Might it be better

P: You're sooner than I expected!

W: I know who you are, I know what you are... (turn on sabre) The senate will decide your fate.

P: I am the Senate

W: Not yet (or maybe here, turn on sabre)

P: It's treason then.

Or maybe just erase the "I am the senate/ Not yet"

So it'd be 

-Youre sooner than I expected (he starts to get up)

- I know who you are... I know what you are. The senate will decide your fate (shot of windu for a sec)

-It's treason then. (P turns on his sabre, and we here Windu does right before he gets on guard to fight)

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You know, a sincerement between Jedi and Sith for the first time in many years.

Palpatine tries to keep his mask to the last moment

With your new line windu tells him to stop pretending and challenges him.

Palpatine says cinically "it's treason" and attacks him. Simple.

You could choose who challenges who. It could be like ObiWan vs Grievous, that ObiWan (I know you cutted this) got on guard before his foe.

Mithrandir said:

The dialogue still isn't buying me. Might it be better

 

P: You're sooner than I expected!

W: I know who you are, I know what you are... (turn on sabre) The senate will decide your fate.

P: I am the Senate

W: Not yet (or maybe here, turn on sabre)

P: It's treason then.

 Please Gandalf !  I already explained it once : impossible to put " I know who you are...." in another place

Sorry to bother you haha, I just forgot. There are a lot of options for this shot, though it's a very very hard puzzle to get everything working right and believable

rpvee said:

 And as stated earlier, at the beginning, Windu appears out of nowhere.

Impossible to change this without someone who can clean the previous shot so we can see only Mace coming

until the blu-ray release, I will certainly find a skilled soul to help me in my holy task...

if not...sacrifice must be made ! this is this.., or the three fu..ers ;)

Mithrandir said:

Sorry to bother you haha, I just forgot. There are a lot of options for this shot, though it's a very very hard puzzle to get everything working right and believable

 You don't bother...all suggestions here help achieved a better cut but it's really a puzzle...you can't change what you want

Musical vision part 7 : 'Destroy the Sith we must..."

a hard one :

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ww0XUqO8Z2w

Yes but you have to find a least one sithster

I will try to make Yoda say : " Destroy the sisters we must... "

Back to the battle over coruscant, there's a line of CloneWar's ObiWan that could be the "Obiwansy" line I think you need to complete the dialogue: "I thought you might say that",

I just don't know how to download it, but perhaps equalizing it a little, and putting the radio FX that would act as a curtain, we could buy it's Ewan McGregor's voice.

You could also add to it (before the line) the little laughter of obiwan in the elevator in AOTC, just to increase the good mood feeling

Or it could be the classical "I've a bad feeling about this".

Is it me, or on "I can' t watch anymore", Obi-Wan's voice sounds a bit higher than usual?  Cutter, are you using a 25 fps version?

rpvee said:

Is it me, or on "I can' t watch anymore", Obi-Wan's voice sounds a bit higher than usual?  Cutter, are you using a 25 fps version?

 Yes but it's temporary, waiting for blu-ray (23.976 fps)

The Cutter said:

  

but I have a problem with " I'm glad u chose to serve..." because it's something that should be said in the beginning of the war, not the end...isn't it ?

what do u think about this ?

I can't tell the episode, but it's in SW.com's soundboards.

Regarding the dialogue, what about:

Obi-wan : "Anakin, do you copy? The chancellor signal is coming from right there"

Anakin : "This is where the fun begins, master. I'm glad that you chose to serve.

Obi-wan : "I knew you would say something like that " (if possible, if not, we'd have to figure out something else).

Anakin: Don't worry. Take a deep breath.

little pause

Anakin : "Obi-wan... may the force be with you" [with us would be even better]

Obi-wan : "thank you brother, may the force be with you"

"This is where the fun begins" is a line you could add to the dialogue, however if you don't, it just wouldn't affect the rest of the dialogue).

Regarding "I know you would say something like that", in this structure of dialogue I've made, it's a rather important piece.

I have put "..." between "ObiWan" and "may the force be with you" because, the way I'm immagining it, it implies Anakin cutting the joking and speaking seriously. This could be even boosted more with some minimal change in the score (if you decided to put the dialogue during the flyby and not at the very beginning of the movie.

Two important things when you post here Gandalf :

1 - Never write the word : Ani

2 - watch this (from 2.50 / 3.40) 3 times : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J4LIh7wvhI8 

^_^

I will take a look here : http://www.starwars.com/games/playnow/soundboards/#/?theme=35

you're right, it sound close to Mcgregor

Yes, I was exceded, OW and Anakin's joking around must have a limit. However I think that doesn't affect the last dialogue I suggested you (avoiding the "fun" line, of course).

The Cutter said:

  

but I have a problem with " I'm glad u chose to serve..." because it's something that should be said in the beginning of the war, not the end...isn't it ?

 

 

what do u think about this ?

The Cutter said:

The Cutter said:

 

but I have a problem with " I'm glad u chose to serve..." because it's something that should be said in the beginning of the war, not the end...isn't it ?

 

 

what do u think about this ?

In my opinion both in the beginning or end would work:

Beginning: Glad he shows the effort of participating.

End: Appreciation because of the good battle he fought.

The Cutter said:

The Cutter said:

  

but I have a problem with " I'm glad u chose to serve..." because it's something that should be said in the beginning of the war, not the end...isn't it ?

 

 

what do u think about this ?

 I agree with you, it's something that should be said at the beginning. I don't feel comfortable with the answer "I agree". That's why I thought of this dialogue...

Obi-wan : "Anakin, do you copy? The chancellor signal is coming from right there"

Anakin : "I'm glad that you chose to serve, master (but) Don't worry (and)Take a deep breath."

Obi-wan : "I knew you would say something like that " (if possible, if not, we'd have to figure out something else).

little pause

Anakin : "Obi-wan... may the force be with you" [with us would be even better]

Obi-wan : "thank you brother, may the force be with you"

I have put "..." between "ObiWan" and "may the force be with you" in the last Anakin's line because, the way I'm immagining it, it implies Anakin cutting the joking and speaking seriously. This could be even boosted more with some minimal change in the score (if you decided to put the dialogue during the flyby and not at the very beginning of the movie.

By "the beginning of war" I mean when Obi-wan chose to serve (so, between episode 2 and 3 ) - but loconut is right, it works fine in both way.

and in my mind, the " I agree" was ironic : " I agree, I'm awesome..."

Oh, you meant EPII by beginning of the war... I think that would work in both ways. Putting it here I think it acts as a reminder of what happened before, and as a way to serve the new scroll. Although I don't know, it could work in AOTC too. Other ideas I had to strenghten ObiWan and Anakin's friendship were chained to the "almost fracture" in the Order (remember the "no" gesture?). If you put a resolution to the idea of serving oor not in AOTC, there's no disagreement within the order by ROTS. I don't know how much of that you're taking for your edit. However, you're always free to take the idea, and draw it with your own hand, or even drawing the part of it that you liked for the most, it's your edit :)

But having you considering putting that line in EPII, I guess that could be interpreted as your official statement that you'll eventually get to AOTC?? :)

Mithrandir said:

But having you considering putting that line in EPII, I guess that could be interpreted as your official statement that you'll eventually get to AOTC?? :)

I don't want to put that line in Episode 2 - Just ask if it makes sense to put this at the end of war.

I am working on Phantom menace and Attack of the clones (90%) - but I am not yet happy with this...each time I see my edit, I want to change/remove things. I will first finish ROTS and then go back to the two first episodes.

My cut of AOTC lenght only 1h20 min...I removed all the fu....g romance ^_^

and, maybe it will interest you, the three Lord of the rings (100 %)