This is a thread for my personal fan-edits of episodes 1-6. My edits are admittedly a combination of others ideas combined, but there are still plenty of my own, as sometimes I disagreed with the cutting of certain things and there are some things I added or deleted because of my own preferences. My most unique one will definitely be my edit for A New Hope, which will have three completely new added scenes.
The Phantom Menace and Attack of the Clones are now done and available, the rest are in-progress. Revenge of the Sith is next and is almost done except for one scene: Padme’s new death.
Here is a Google doc with the list of all of changes I am planning on making. Many of which are taken from other edits as I agreed with them, while others are my own. Suggestions are more then welcome.
I apologize if I seem a little mean or hostile when defending my decision to use FXItInPost’s Darth Vader vs. Obi-Wan fight for my ANH fan-edit, I just wanted to be blunt to prevent any argument.
Here are some synopsis of the major stuff I’m doing with each film. For the record I do love episodes 3-6 and think they are fantastic movies, and I actually do think 1 and 2 are pretty good, so don’t take any of this as me hating on the films.
The Phantom Menace
Probably the most prominent change is that I’ve included an excellent fan-dub by YouTuber Gigawattboy which redoes Jar Jar’s dialogue and basically reimagines the character as a rogue everyman with a Australian and Western accent. I loved it. He also redubbed the rest of the Gungans, giving them less goofy voices and lines, and I also thought it worked perfectly.
Here is a link to a video he posted with a clip of his dub: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=58yrGVFDHc8
I’ve also cut any cringe-inducing or confusing dialogue. Many trims, cuts, and rearrangements, are inspired by Hal9000’s edit, one big example being his rearranging of the final battle so Anakin saves Padme. Like Hal’s edit I also re-added the deleted scene in which Qui-Gon destroys the probe droid.
I did actually keep midichlorians though. I honestly don’t see what the big deal was. As Qui-Gon explains, midichlorians aren’t the force themself, they’re a vessel or bridge by which living things are able to be connected by the force, which is why having more midichlorians means you’re stronger with the force. It doesn’t ruin any of the force’s mysticism, it just explains how they’re able to measure a being’s force potential and how living beings are connected to the force. So that’s why they’re kept.
Attack of the Clones
My goal here was similar to many other fan-editors: remove any cringe dialogue and make the Anakin and Padme romance more believable. Once again many trims, cuts, and rearrangements were inspired by Hal’s edit, and also octoroxx’s. First, Padme doesn’t first address him as a little boy. Now their introduction is more of an awkward moment, but Anakin proves his maturity later during the majorly trimmed packing scene. Then the deleted scenes with her and her family and the one in her bedroom are readded. This way Anakin actually gets to know Padme as a person; they share personal stories and the fact that she lets Anakin in her bedroom is really telling. She even kind of flirts with him a little. Like in Hal9000’s edit, the first kiss is placed after the dinner scene, regraded to look like its evening, and from this point on they’re officially an item.
I also had to cut all of Jar Jar’s dialogue as the guy who did the dub for TPM hasn’t done one for this film and I can’t have him just have a completely different voice. Hopefully he does one eventually so I can update my edit.
There are some scenes that I didn’t find offensive that those who inspired me did, like Jango giving Zam the worms (I was originally going to cut this but then there wasn’t any other way in the film itself that the audience would know the worms are poisonous), the Yoda and the Younglings scene and Yoda and Dooku’s duel, and others, so they are kept.
Revenge of the Sith
This edit is a lot more similar to the original film then the previous two as I love the original movie a lot, but I have made some minor changes. I’ve incorporated some of NFMisms’ ideas for added/changed dialogue (a few of which references The Clone Wars by calling Anakin “General Skywalker”), reinserted a couple deleted parts of Anakin and Obi-Wan during the opening sequence (the “Beep beep is down” scene and “Roger” “Roger”), reinsert the Rebel alliance deleted scenes, and Anakin killing the younglings is replaced with the deleted scene of him killing Shaak-Ti.
There is one hardcore edit here though: Padme is going to have a new death scene in which Sidious drains her life force using the force and gives it to Vader. Special thanks to Hal9000 for providing me with new lines for one of the medical droids.
A New Hope
I’d like to use the HD version of Adywan’s edit once he’s done with it as the base, but until then I may just release an edit of the Blu-Ray first.
First I’m going to have the ending scene of Rogue One be the opening. The Vader hallway scene is perfect visual exposition for who his character is. After that it will cut to an added scene of Yoda communicating with Qui-Gon, and then the beginning of the original film. Other edits include using the Imperial March for Vader and the Empire (music from ROTS will also be added during the meeting in which Vader force chokes someone), removing anything that implies Vader is Tarkin’s lackey (rather they are just two high-ranking villains working together), adding a scene in which Vader orders the burning of the Lars homested, making Alderaan’s destruction much more dramatic, and adding a new scene between Vader and Sidious. And of course there are more typical edits like removing the Jabba scene and Han shooting first.
I’m also using FXitinPost’s version of the Darth Vader vs. Obi-Wan duel, as it’s infinitely better then the one in the film. Like, it’s become one of my favorite duels in all of Star Wars.
Basically my goal here is to give this film some more gusto. It’s a great film but it’s also the most dated. More references to deeper Star Wars lore will be added, a few scenes will be added that show what this story has to do with the grand scheme of things, and certain scenes will be made to feel more powerful, impactful, and epic (the lightsaber duel and the destruction of Alderaan).
Empire Strikes Back
This edit is the least blown of them all. It uses Adywan’s as a base, as he made so many stunning, brilliant edits that I honestly can’t resist. The most prominent things I’ll do are readd the special edition shots of the Wampa, readd the new special edition dialogue between Vader and Sidious during the hologram conversation with each other (though keep Ady’s epic new Sidious hologram), and add a new force vision like that of Anakin for Luke when he’s meditating and see’s his friends in danger. Some minor changes are also going to be made to stay consistent with the prequels: Obi-Wan referring to Yoda as “A Jedi Master who instructed me” instead of “THE Jedi Master…”, and cutting the “That boy is our last hope”, “No, there is another” exchange.
The biggest edit here is I’m going to remove Leia kissing Luke because incest.
Return of the Jedi
Once again, I’d like to use Adywan’s revisited version of the film as the base, though I know it probably won’t be out for a long time, so I’ll make an edit of the Blu-Ray first.
In my edit, the new opening crawl states that after his defeat to Darth Vader in ESB, Luke returns to Dagobah to train with Yoda, and his allies have formulated a plan to free Han Solo from Jabba (including the droids). My idea is that the film will be edited to make it appear as if Luke had been training with Yoda in the time period between ESB and this film, which explains how Luke became a better, more powerful Jedi in-between. It also helps the plan to free Han Solo make more sense, as now the efforts by the others can be seen as them attempting to free Han without Luke during his absence on Dagobah. However, since their plan doesn’t work, Luke has to go to Tatooine to save their asses. The scenes on Dagobah will be moved to the beginning and intercut with the Jabba’s palace scenes.
Other edits include replacing Jedi Rocks with Lapti Nek, fixing Luke’s missed kick, and Vader saying “Your mother once thought as you do.”, among other things.
Compilation of all of my new crawls for all 6 movies: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YhAaPtENXTw
New Padme apartment scene: https://youtu.be/hQw_Pzm6p7U
Trimmed Packing scene: https://youtu.be/a86_BStLJkw
Mace & Obi-Wan scene (readded deleted scene, now with a new line, see if you can spot it): https://youtu.be/lGA9593v-wE
Padme’s Bedroom scene (readded deleted scene): https://youtu.be/9Iz7v6sp1CQ
New Dinner/First Kiss scene (first kiss scene regrade by Hal9000): https://youtu.be/Ma15X-fzggY
First version of original scene of mine in which Vader tells Sidious he killed Kenobi (this is not the final version)
And finally I don’t plan on doing the sequel trilogy.
Link to thread for my Star Wars fan-edits: https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/My-Star-Wars-Saga-Edits-episodes-1-6/id/76327
Other fan-edits include “This is Tokyo” (combination of original 1954 Gojira and the 1956 Americanization) and Heisei Godzilla Series Remaster.
And finally, proud creator of Dinosauria: Ascension, Domination, Downfall.