Maybe we should go remove all the "damns" and "hells" littered all over Ep II, IV, and V too... God forbid they wander into PG terrritory.
Damn's and hell's are fine. Shit's are not. And besides 1 Damn in Star Wars and 1 Hell in Empire..what you got? Do you honestly think it was the LANGUAGE that caused ANH and ESB to get PG ratings? How about the violence instead?
God Forbid Star Wars DOESN'T grow a pottymouth.
But maybe your OT edits will have Ackbar in a fishy new language, subtitled going "Goddammit! It's a FUCKING TRAP!!" and Jabba will have a new subtitle hinting at all the cunnilingus he'll perform on Slave Leia.
If by "Stiff Dialog" Mags means "not saying shit, cock and motherfucker" then yeah, he's right, but Mags is good at editing, not dialog. I honestly believe the dialog ADM reworked sounds more Star Wars-y, and is actually a little more naturalistic in that fictional universe. In my mind, he fixed one of the bigger problems of Mags TPM re-edit.
I would have asked for a copy, but only if you had MagnoliaFan's blessings.