I’m new here and after looking at everybody’s wonderful projects I was inspired to try it out myself but I decided to start somewhere small so I restored the deleted scene from a New Hope. It’s not perfect I’m still working out some different methods.
I see you used the radio drama for the dialog. Not sure if it works because the sync of Luke’s moving lips doesn’t match. But what can you do? The deleted scene was silent because they never bothered to have Mark Hamill come back into the studio and do some voice recording over the scene. The clip was deleted early in the process even the Special effects are temporary.